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MarineMarksman


I'm not a motard, I swear.

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In the small village of Ponyville, a group of six body builders, better known as the Elements of Broship, are called upon by the ruler of Equestria to stop Discord from taking over Equestria. Will the Elements of Broship be able to outlift this steroids addicted demi-god, or will Equestria have to suffer under his rule for eternity?

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I... Uh... Um...

Upvoted.

I'm not even going to try and quote anything from the story because... :rainbowlaugh:.

We must spread the butter, err.. I mean manliness!

not sure how to feel about this one, on one hand, it's probably hilarious, on the other, it probably resembles my daily life of dealing with meatheads and marines who are waayyy to much into bodybuilding

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just did, that last line is gonna have me laughing for weeks

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It will. Trust me. Personal experience. IT WILL BE FEATURED! :flutterrage:

3432362 If Old Spice Guys Invades Equestria got featured, this will as well.

-Will

3432364
If a cheap FlutterCord joke can get featured, then so can this.

3432368 Time to go on a journey and find out just what the fuck I've written.

-Will

:rainbowderp: No sure if Bros. or Douchebags.
.. just needs tans and laundry and you got Equestrian Jersey Shore

3432389 To be fair to guidos, while they aren't necessarily intelligent, they have tendency to be the ultimate in bro-tier.

-Will

Just... Just have my babies.

I just... I just love you so much for this you don't even fucking know.

Celestia's mouth dropped. "H-he's much b-bigger than I-I remember..."

i.imgur.com/9lSm44z.png

That is all.

If there's ever a sequel, Discord better be natty.

This better be featured.
Good job dude. Love it

3432542 Imagine what was going through my head when I wrote this.

-Will

Epic Brony 4 Life - "DAMN THAT WAS A GOOD READ!"

John Doe - "I KNOW RIGHT? I'M TOTALLY GONNA READ THIS AGAIN LATER!"

Epic Brony 4 Life - "AND THEN WE GET SHITFACED!"

Range Ookami - "AND PARTY SO HARD WE PUT PROJECT-X TO SHAME !"

Shi No Minari - "DAMN RIGHT WE WILL!"

Just...WTF...OMFG ITS SO FUNNY BUT SERIOUSLY WTF. :rainbowlaugh::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::ajbemused::derpytongue2::rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:

Seriously, a video of one of my parties leaks onto the internet and suddenly people are writing fanfiction about it, :trollestia:

Well done, natty-Sir,
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His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy. There's vomit on his chest already. All he was missing was his mom's spaghetti.

I lost my bearings right there.

You did good, kid. I was having a bad day, and you kinda put the shine back into it, so thanks. But I'd have to say, though. Were you high when you wrote this?

3432726 That's between me and the DEA agents monitoring my phone lines.

-Will

I want to have your babies. Insta-fave, upvote, and follow. You FRIKKIN' deserve it.

3432733 Your other stories are pretty damn badass, too. I like that in a person.


P.S. Crossing the Line is awesome.

3432748 Eh, gotta do what I can. As long as people like yourself enjoy them, I'm happy.

-Will

This story was definitely different, but I liked it. I really liked the part about Iron Will being seen as a King to the Elements of Broship. :rainbowlaugh:

3432776 If you don't worship Iron Will like he's a king, you're not natty.

-Will

I feel a strange compulsion to begin lifting things...

i just finished reading this so....... what are you smoking because i want some

Comment posted by NocturneD85 deleted Nov 2nd, 2013
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