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whats the crossover?
2771065 Fantasy Warhammer I think...
Found the song for this story.
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I edited the description to highlight this. Should be clear now.
A dwarf fic?! Hell yeah, I'm gonna' read it. But... you could try to make the chapters a bit longer. Like it so far, keep it up.
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No worries! I made these chapters short due to writer's block, but I'll make the future ones at least 3k words each.
So far I'm liking it and it's a great cross. Now let's see how the Dwarves adjust eh? Keep up the good work!
KHAZUKAN KHAZAKIT HA!
Dwarves? in my little pony? it's more awesome than you'd think
i look forward to more
Man I am so excited for this I have been a Dwarf player for a long time. A long time ago I even used to be able to speak in Khazalid and write in Klinkarhun. Can't wait for the next chapter of this
DWARVES!
Another great chapter. I absolutely love dwarves and you portrayed them quite nicely. I can barely wait for the next chapter!
Accidently un-favorited... favorited again...
Well written, and the dwarves are right in character.
Oh my... how did I not find this sooner?? Dwarves and greenskins in Equestria? This can only be good!
EDIT: The story itself is really interesting, if not a little fast paced and really straight forward.
Also, you should have a little punctuation between paragraphs, makes it easier to read.(EDITEDIT) Scratch that, it's good as it is. Other than that, I like it. And at least you didn't crump together everyone's dialogue into one paragraph.Not a bad start, little fast paced for me and some of the grammar needs work as sentences don't flow properly in places but otherwise you're okay. Really great to see another warhammer fantasy crossover alongside my own. Best of luck with it and i'll certainly keep track of this one for definite.
WAAAARHAMMEEEEEER!!! Where has this story been all my life!
(btw whats the full name of the karak)
First let's make one thing absolutely clear: I'm more of a Asrai/Asur player myself but this is fantastic. Can't wait for more. Now would you mind slowing down the pace even just a little bit. While your description of the dwarves is spot on, the pace is so fast that it's hard to really get them to feel in character.
Keep going. I'll consider giving it a fav once you pass the 10.000 words bar. Till then I'll wait and see where you'll take this.
Dwarves are badass, nuff said.
Lesson of the day: don't fuck with Dwarves
this makes me want to put more slayers in my army. I may have gone overboard with war machines (7)
3854646 Don't do it man, slayers seem cool but with a 6 inch move and no armor they die during the first shooting phase.
I am SO happy the "Dwarf in Equestria" group is building in momentum!
HAHA! Another dwarf!
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I think I found a song more fitting the Warhammer-y feeling.
Ah the old Dwarven standby, blame the Elf!
Nice man! I freaking love dwarfs, to me they embody all that is awesome about fantasy.
Very...tell-heavy rather than show-heavy, but it's still pretty good.
Erm...didn't Flutters feed fish to her otters before?
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BLOODY KNIFE EARS!!!!!!!
How have I not seen this story until now.
Another good story canceled by a lazy writer typical.
To whom ever disliked my previous posts on this story your just a salty bitch and to scared to admit my words hold truth. Then again 99.999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999
9% of writers on this site can never finish what they start and the ones who cancel their stories are just lazy as hell.
寫得真的很好