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A week after Rainbow Dash has been brought back to Equestria, her friends start to notice the strange headache's she has been having, which have recently been causing her to faint. A plan is devised to help their friend, but when Rainbow Dash's memories start to clash with those of the human world, Twilight and her friends could be in far more trouble then they had bargained for.

(Strongly recommended that you read the original My Little Dashie before you read this. This is a continuation made by a myself, and many thanks to RobCakeran for writing the original story.)

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Hrm. Interesting take on it.

cupcakes rainbow dash style

I don't know if you know about these, but someone will no doubt mention them eventually
sequel and threequel

219994 fake website, warning!

Oh shit, Doctor reference, That was awesome

Needs more sad and less grim D:
And more happy ending D:
But yea, good story actually..
But you should really go and replace all the "Rainbowdash"s with "Rainbow Dash" and very important to use synonyms for her o.O

Great story! Couldn't have put it better! I'm currently working on my own sequel ( yes, I know there are a lot of them!). Wish you best of luck in the future!:rainbowwild::rainbowkiss:

:facehoof: Really? I would have thought that the human would have raised her better then to try and kill her friends...

@Caberea

"Rainbowdash would visit her father quite frequently,"

Does that mean that her dad in living in Equestria now? Or is he back in the human world and dash is visiting him whenever she wants?

Awesome MLD fic by the way! :twilightsmile:

Ok now i just need to find a story about the ponies trying to find dash after the accident that sent her to earth... if anyone knows about one please let me know.

Wow really really nice writing, though i missed a better ending, but a thumps up and 5 stars if i still could. :twilightsmile:

I really enjoyed your psychological approach on this matter. That is an interesting question to see what would happen if someone had two sets of memories conflicting with each other... The story was pretty good with the exception of the sort of sudden ending. Maybe I didn't understand the time traveler joke but that is just my opinion. Nice job on the grammar by the way.

I really enjoyed your psychological approach on this matter. That is an interesting question to see what would happen if someone had two sets of memories conflicting with each other... The story was pretty good with the exception of the sort of sudden ending. Maybe I didn't understand the time traveler joke but that is just my opinion. Nice job on the grammar by the way.

I knew she would one day reunite with her father but like this?WOW. Didn't expect it to to be so grim. I'd give it 4 out of 5 stars.

220022 You son of a bitch.You read my histories and you read the same fics as me.
You....Son......Of....Chuck norris

220022 You son of a bitch.You read my histories and you read the same fics as me.
You....Son......Of....Chuck norris
221673 WHAT YOU TOO?!?!?!/1!??!?!?!?!

334827 Reading through your histories or looking for a similar story?

334935 bored reading through histories.btw,if you have any ideas,just send me a PM about it,and I WILL put it into my history.
i'm bored.

It's great. Nice Job... ;)

Wow, I didn't expect it to be so GORY. But I wasn't disturbed by all the descriptions of the gore. I played Halo a lot. And that isn't
very gory in truth, nothing but photoshop blood, NO charred corpses. But in Gears of War there are som- no, a lot.

1. Why didn't she just make a rainbow explosion like she did on Lesson Zero?
2. Awesome fic.

10/10

P.S: Ow, that HAS to hurt, Pinkie.:pinkiesick:

Needs FREAKING SPACES BETWEEN RAINBOW AND DASH. Other than that, decent. Despite the story specifically saying that Mr. Guy never saw RD again, it was decent. Of course, taking that error into consideration, this story is only a bit better than some of the worst of the worst.

Smu

O.O Best... (Dark) Sequel... EVAR!!!

Too.. much.. errors.
*head explodes*

Celestia leaned a valuable lesson. Never bet a time-traveler.

no just no i did not like this but hay i guess that does-int mean other people will don't stop writing the way you wont to or its not fun any more

Before I even start, I just wanna say no offence.

I threw up multiple times. My toilet may as well be made of barf. :pinkiesick:. I don't like how you tied in Doctor Who/Whooves, whatever his name is in Equestria. :facehoof:. Dashie (the human world one) is too sweet to want to kill, even in those circumstances. :rainbowkiss:. And, finally, not even Pinkie Pie would fall for that. :pinkiesmile:

But, all in all, you're not a bad writer. Carry on, my friend.

So I take it this is the abridged version of the sequel? LOL

WTF why did Rainbow Dash's father get turned into a pony. They don't get turned into humans when they go to the human world.

Very NOT original ending, but still a good variant...:twilightsmile:

“Rainbow Dash, What’re ya doing sleepin’ ‘round here with all these storm clouds out, there wasn’t supposed to be a shower here till tomorrow, an’ all this extra rain is messin’ with my crops.”

now you see
our world has a feature you dont have in the pony world
the fact that you have to accept mother nature, and use it
theres no stopping the mother of nature

“Since what?”
“Since you got back from that other world.”
“What oth-“
Rainbow Dash stopped mid-sentence as a searing pain thundered through her skull.

Applejack: Nice goin' Twi :ajbemused:
*Pinkie Pie pops out behind the tree*
Pinkie Pie: *GASP* WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TWILIGHT!?!? :pinkiegasp:
Twilght: there goes me not using my head :twilightoops:
Applejack: when dose THAT ever happen to somepony that ALWAYS USES THEIR HEAD?!?! :ajbemused:
Twilight: good point *sigh* :facehoof:

“This remedy, though it tastes like hell
Should soon have your friend feeling well.”

wait, shes been to Hell... and tasted?
or she build an "Obsidian Portal" to another dimension and licked its grounds? IDK SOMPONY PLZ EXPLAIN

Everypony felt the same as Rarity did, it was almost as if a part of their lives disappeared on that fateful day that Rainbow Dash was "magick’d" away from them.

new word for the dictionary
here, your reward is a mustache :moustache:

Dashie got out of her hospital bed and walked over to the window, looking out she saw a dark and beautiful night, luscious plants were growing right outside the hospital and the rising moon reflected serenely on a lake in the distance. Everything was wrong. This was not anywhere near where her father lived, this place was strange, the colors seemed too bright, too vibrant, and every building looked wrong. As she was gazing at the horrible sight before her, a purple unicorn walked past the hospital outside her window, presumably on her way home from a tiring day. Dashie thought back to her last memories before she found herself here.

called it
she lost the memories of ponyville
not of her father
true love vs friendship
who do you think wins XD

Her father had loved her; she had always known that, it was not his fault that she was here. Those ponies were to blame, that had stolen her away from her father, her home, and everything she loved. They had taken her to this world; they had caused all of this. They would pay.

aaannnd the "Gore" Tag comes into action
friendship is ded now
not big surprise
boy twilight surly messed up, the consequences are severe

She knew that what she was doing wasn’t the right thing to do; she knew it wasn’t the best thing either, but it was all she could think of.

oi for a brainy pony your sure being a downright idiot
ask Celestia
messing with peoples lives Mentally is a VERY dangerous thing
so you should only ask a TRUE PROFESSIONAL to do it

She decided that it didn’t matter, if Rainbowdash got better than she would turn up eventually, and if she had finally stopped falling asleep constantly then they would soon be able to spot her soaring through the skies once again. Pushing her fears into the back of her mind, Twilight exited the hospital and began her walk home, grateful that her deed need not be done.

welp, my last comment was MAYBE a worthless waste of time
MAYBE

Pinkie Pie had always enjoyed having fun, and now that Dashie was back she was happier than ever, but even so there was something strange about all this. Rainbow Dash had never looked at her like that before, there was something in her eyes, if Pinkie hadn’t known better she would have called it hate, but that was ridiculous, Rainbowdash wouldn’t hate her.

Anakin Skywalker would like you Rainbow Dash

that last line broke my heart
IT WAS ALL A BET?!?!?!?!?!!?
LIVES WERE AT STAKE!!!!!!
CELETIA YOU TRULLY ARE A TROLL :trollestia::twilightangry2::fluttershysad::ajbemused::flutterrage:

220022
Maybe not but a secure connection can’t be made, so it can’t be opened. Granted it’s now 2019, so something probably happened within the last seven years.

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