Everypony has a dark side to them. Something they fear, something that could destroy them. As a certain purple unicorn is forced to use dark magic, she finds her fears threatening to consume her...Along with the darkness inside.
This story occurs directly after the end of season 3: episode 2. If you haven't seen it yet, go and watch it before reading this story. (This story is my take on where i think they're going to go with that dark magic we saw, it wasn't used nor explained nearly enough in that episode.)
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I was waiting for this.
Oh man, I knew that a story like this was coming. You might want to lay off the caps lock though, as a suggestion.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaand here come the dark magic fics!
Interesting, I was curious when these fics where going to start. Good job it will be interesting to see where this goes.
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You have my interest. I can't wait to see how this works out.
Me neither.
Shush. However, I did happen to notice some small grammatical errors and a few lowercase "i"s.
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As have I.
All I can say IS:
ALL.MY.YESES.
I wonder if you felt like you were going to fail...
WHY WOULD YOU! I'm tracking.
You have a bad habit of not capitalizing I, but other than that this looks pretty good.
Good beggining, I would recommend checking your I's. There are some like this "i". Oh and like someone else said to much cap lock is not good if used to much. I can't wait to see where this is going.
Always liked the thought of an evil TS. Her personality SCREAMS potential for it. I'mma gonna fave and track this. Do me a favor... Do NOT let it go stale, yeah?
~Skeeter T L
Oh my gosh, so many people, so many favourites,
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I'll try not to dissapoint you guys. But thanks for all of the comments and favourites, you have no idea how much I squee'ed when i say those 50 or so notifications when this went up. Thanks again, and I'll try and make this a fic truly worthy of your attention.
for all those people hating on all the dark twi fics coming out, blame hasbro for making something that should have been a 3 or 4 parter into a 2 parter. also, good story.
about to watch the first 2 episodes of season 3 and if they hint anything towards this (which they highly might *points to fic*) it would be very interesting. Isay let the Dark Magic fics come, for I am a Dark Magic fan an any form.
BUT REMEMBER THIS!!
Is there truly Light and Dark Magic?
Light Magic can be used for Evil
Dark Magic can be used for Good
I will now let the comments and questions roll in.
BTW Great Job!!
*facehoof* as soon as i saw twilight use dark magic i knew this would happen....why does this fandom have so much in common with rule 34
have all my internets and keep up the good work
I see a lot of promise with this story, a lot of potential here. I'd suggest finding an editor to proof-read and revising it a little bit to make some things a little more clear. Hell, I'd be happy to help you edit the story, I'm immensely curious as to where this goes, and I'd like it to reach its full potential. At the moment, I feel that it's only reaching a small fraction as to what it could.
1612602 I would be very pleased to take you up on that offer, I have a very bad habit of failing to successfully proofread my stories...So...how does this work? (I've never had someone like one of my stories enough to offer to edit it before)
1609249 What do you mean? This isn't r34.
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I'm not certain, I've never actually proofread on this site before (Despite being here since Beta). We could do it various ways including you PMing me unpublished chapters (I think you can do that.), sending me a google doc link to your unfinished chapter via PM, or just sending me a document through email. I'd prefer to try in that order. I usually check Fimfiction a couple of times a week, so I should pick up your PM.
Seems like a good beginning so far. I like your reinterpretation of the episode's events, and have a bad feeling that Celestia and Luna, in trying to stop Twi's prophecy, ended up bringing it about.
You have my attention, please continue.
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i mean if it exist out there there is an mlp fanfic of it. kinda like r34. i didnt mean r34 litterally
1615572 Ahhhhh gotcha. Maybe r63 would be a better example?
1613269 If I may, a comment? I'm the head editor for DungeonMiner and A Novice Swordsman in the Canterlot Court. Google Docs is awesome for editing. Also, it's probably a good idea to track any changes you may make to the story so the author can see what's different. If you don't plan on making changes directly, I would suggest highlighting and footnotes.
Well ... this was expected.
Still interesting though.
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i dont know*shrug* r34 was just the first thing that my head compared it to.
This is a very interesting fic, I have always felt like Celestia have been testing Twilight for something, that all the events that have happened in the last two seasons (or most of them at least) were by Celestia's own design, made for the sole purpose of testing Twilight.
1620801 Yeah, it threw the author and me for a while. Right, author?
1621156 .1620801 Indeed, we thought for a moment you might have been commenting on another story and posted it on this one by accident
1621797 But now we know, so all is great, or so says the Jali Llama.
Well I hope this turns into what I want it too keep up the good work BTW
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lol. i can understand he misunderstanding. ...and who is jali Llama?
1626534 Sorry, that was meant to be Jalai Llama. And, um, sort of like the Dalai Lama, I suppose, except a real llama. And jolly.
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i still dont get it
Lovely, More please
1608599 hey mate was just wondering when the next update is
1643871 Expect it within the week (I've got exams next week so it's been a bit slow working on it with all the studying I've had to do, But i should be able to get an update complete before the new episode)
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I'm afraid this story has not updated since November of last year. I fear it has been abandoned.
<.< >.> sooooooooo anymore we should know about?
When are you going to update?
That was an interesting opening I look forward to your next chapter
Are there any plans to complete this story? I ask because I am going to favorite this because the plot behind it sounds interesting. HOWEVER, until it is completed, I am going to give it a thumbs down. Because while I may approve of the plot behind the story, I DO NOT approve of the fact that it has been 2 years, 1 month, and 4 weeks since the last update. I mean, I understand that greatness can't be rushed, but needing 789 days in order to update the next chapter means one of three things. A: You've given up on the book (this is the most likely scenario). B: You’re too busy to write any more (this is understandable). Or C: You're dead (this is a scenario with a 50% probability chance, seeing as how people die every day.) If option C makes you feel uncomfortable than that means two things. You are obviously not dead, and I am sorry for having that as one of the three possibilities. Also, don’t give up! Your fans deserve better! I, of course, meant that in the best and most encouraging possible way.
Dead story?