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mr lovecolt


“Saints have no moderation, nor do poets, only exhuberance.” ~Anne Sexton

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(Sequel to "Nightmares and Lunascapes")

Fluttershy has died. Discord must try to convince Princesses Celestia and Luna of what effects their attempts to harness the powers of "old magic" has on all of Equestria. Twilight Sparkle will never accept that the Element of Kindness has been killed. Rainbow Dash is convinced that Edger is the cause of Fluttershy's death, as well as the other deaths in Ponyville. Pinkie Pie receives a letter from her sister and leaves to return to her village. Caramel, after seeing the terrors that have fallen on the town, follows her. Edger is finally decides to confront his past as well as the source of the peculiar waves of energy that burst through Ponyville and the surrounding areas. All of these events lead back to one place - the village of Flatts.

This story coincides with the events in Mageismoiras

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 9 )

Oh, this is wonderful! I was hoping you'd make a sequel sooner rather than later.

2565674 Thanks. I hope you like it. It goes in a slightly different direction than the last story, but in my mind, it will now lead to two side stories and two more main parts that will conclude the MLP Helioselenian Universe. I also had an idea, once these are done, on one more horror story that links into these stories in a most peculiar way.

Could you translate the chanting? I've put through many translators but could only find bits and pieces about imposed love and health.

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I was going to reference it in the next chapter. I hope everyone is enjoying it so far. I've noticed a few views, just not a lot of likes or dislikes either way.

So that's that. The next genre of horror story that I want to write is in the standard "Monster" genre. For those of you reading, any particular confusing parts to the story (i.e., simply don't make sense) as opposed to just curious as to what happens next? Is the writing too dry? Did I do well with Cheery Jubilee's accent?

You've managed to make me feel very sorry for Discord. I hope you're happy with that.

3908906 Yes, and you will see that he is very important, indeed, in the later stories that I write. You will also see a very interesting ability that Pinkie Pie has in this story. I won't give it away, but needless to say, it, too, will reappear later on. Whereas the first story was meant to explore the traditional "slowburn" horror, this one is meant to imitate the "survival horror" genre, typically seen in Silent Hill and the early Resident Evils. I do hope you find this one interesting, and Mageismoiras will be fascinating, as well.

Tank IS the most sensible one, between him and Rainbow Dash. :eeyup:

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