Followup to Techie's SPICY Smokin' Toasted Self-Roasted Reviews #18: · 6:08am Oct 21st, 2019
I forgot to mention this, but there's exactly one redeeming trait in the story that still exists to this day in my current fics:
Using the chapter names to tell another, separate story.
I really, really like doing this, if you couldn't tell by the fact that I do it in just about every recent story I've written that doesn't have the comedy tag now.