Followup to Techie's SPICY Smokin' Toasted Self-Roasted Reviews #18:

I forgot to mention this, but there's exactly one redeeming trait in the story that still exists to this day in my current fics:

Using the chapter names to tell another, separate story.

I really, really like doing this, if you couldn't tell by the fact that I do it in just about every recent story I've written that doesn't have the comedy tag now.

See y'all tomorrow with the next review! That one's a bit of an oddball, but actually ended up serving as a little sandbox to experiment with something that I featured quite a lot in some of my stories: internal conversations! Also multiple personalities too, based on the title, but it's literally a split mind shared by Twilight and the main character. Remind you of a story??? ( ͡• ͜ʖ ͡• )

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[Zapper Frost]

Also multiple personalities too, based on the title, but it's literally a split mind shared by Twilight and the main character. Remind you of a story??? ( ͡• ͜ʖ ͡• )

This?