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Wallowing in the pit of slow/nonexistant internet, waiting for the day fiber-optic internet kills Comcast once and for all...


What would you do if you've never truly lived your life?

How would one tell between a dream and reality?

I'll add tags as I go. Writing this was a completely new experience.

Pre-read by: Undead Equestrian Writer, Dreadnought, DeejayShuffle, lunarderpy1, Dire Hawk, BattleScarredPony, and German Empireball.

Cover art by me using a stock RD cutie mark and a crapton of filters in PDN. (Sorry, no crazy gradients this time!)

Not to be confused with a much, much older story by the same name. The author of that one hasn't been on for a pretty long time, but better safe than sorry. :derpyderp1:

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 30 )

I am quite intrigued to see where you're going with this. Well done!

8211746 Thanks!



I have no idea what I'm doing.

It’s seems to be going well, you have my interest. :unsuresweetie:

Updates will probably take a while though. The existing chapters is what three months have brought.

That’s fine! Take as long as you need!

Everyone's so blunt in the way they tell Rainbow that her whole life was a lie.

Although the prologue was short, it was excellent! It was short but sweet. Somewhat satisfying but also makes me want to come back for more. Will read more!

O snap.

Well. That's right depressing, m8.


Quite. Is this a case of ripping off the bandage?

Gotta admit this is the most interesting and original idea I've seen in awhile. I hope you continue.

Thanks. I'm working on the next chapter's planning right now. :twilightsmile:

Good to hear. I would like to see a seizure or two as a result of the brain injury.

Perhaps. Would you like to preread for later chapters? I could always use another opinion on how things work out.

If you like. Just pm the chaps.

I'll do that once they're written. :yay:

Glad to see that you got this story approved.

(I'm the General, BTW.)

Alrighty then. Lemme update the link. How’d you like the story so far?

Yup. I’m currently working on the next chapter, albeit slowly.

Why are the chapters so short?

I haven't had too much time on hand recently, but today's the last day of school before fall break, so hopefully I should get some more time for writing. ^_^

That's twisting the knife right there. :fluttercry:


Will Gadget and Delmar make another cameo???

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