I appreciate the attention to Cultural Differences

Ty for the track

Thank you so much for adding The New Guard to your garrison! May Jupiter watch over your steps, the sun of Celestia guide your path, and the moon of Luna comfort you in the darkest of nights.

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Thanks I'm glad you do.

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Generally the story as a whole. I read the one that inspired you to write this one, and while i liked the idea the other author had. His mc was a bit to much of a mary sue, but i was warned in the prolog. With yours i hope he can still maintain the attitude he has. I like it and like where its going both worldbuilding and character wise and i can't wait for more:)