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I have no idea why I like futa but it's really turn on for some reason.
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It seems like quiet a few people do, but I thought I would share some inner musings that have been dancing around in my mind.
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I have written a couple or so fics with futa as the main thingamajig but my phone won't let me upload boo.
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I intend to do a fair bit more in this one, in fact I shortened the first chapter because I felt it ended on the right mark and set it up perfectly for chapter two.
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It certainly is a nice spot for a chapter end, even though it's quite early in the story. However, I'm really excited to see what will happen next
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I know it was a early end, but you will see why when I post the next chapter.
This is pretty damn hot. I do wonder one thing though, will the human turn the tables on Celestia and screw her?
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You will have to wait and find out.
2512773 Alright, sweet! Anything else kinky we can expect?
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It gets much kinkier, just a heads up, But I don't want to ruin any surprises though,so you will have to wait and see.
2512850 ETA on next update?
Not bad at all. I'd like to see where you plan on taking this.
Could have been much better sadly. It doesn't even need that much work. The scenes simply move a little to fast. Also since you said Celestia's equipment was head level for this guy, he is either very short, or Celestia is very tall. Some confirmation on the stature between the two would be nice. Also if she was that tall, she would be as large or larger then a draft horse, which weigh over 1500 pounds. Bed or not, having one of those on your back in any way would kill you.
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Sorry omission of thought, edited (I had kneeling).
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Working on chapter two now, I'm hoping to have it up sooner then later but I'm entirely at the mercies of my mind.
2514768 Okay, well don't stress yourself.
(Celestia is a Futa)
(Excessive Cum and Cumflation)
you have my attention
followin'
Love it.
Heyo! The editor of this story here! Yeah, some of the the little errors in this are my fault. I'm the one who's supposed to catch them, but apparently they still slipped through. I'm going to crack down on Chapter 2 and have that ready for Tempest, don't worry.
Not bad...Needs some Luna though.
2516484 I agree
Completed Chapter two, and those who were pining for Luna got what they wanted (I already had Luna set up for the position, so no catering was actually preformed).
Next up cadence or twilight
Then maybe main six
That would be fun
Eh, keep the focus on the main princesses (Celestia and Luna, also don't know the timeline, maybe before twilight is a princess?). Also, the intro text implies that this human is a state secret, or that the relationship will be secret, so how well will they be able to keep this underwraps? I'm guessing not so well if they have as high of a libido as they seem.
Also looking forward to some more lovey-dovey stuff, seeing as how it has the romance tag. God, why is this hot?
Edit: Arggg, even more questions I hope are answered in the story. Why the human? Is it because they can get away with it (secret human) or could it be that since the human is actually closer to their size they can actually do illicit things with him? Ect.
Hope to see this update more.
EditEdit: Also just noticed, the princesses are hiding their other genitalia or the other set is purely magical, but I kinda of doubt that seeing as how they refer to doing acts with them before Nightmare Moon and they have physical reactions to them. I wonder how many know of this? Evidence: "her tail slightly raised showing off her mare bits, before he noticed her stallion meat disappeared in a puff of magic as she turned the corner and left".
MOAR
The first male getting rammed in the ass story I like? GOOD SHOW OLD CHAP!
Update?
so?......new chapter please..........whats taking so looooonnnnngg, tech problems?
Sorry everyone, ran into a bad case of the writers block, hoping to work on it some more soon.
Broke your writer's block? If not, want to bounce ideas?
2 things: 1: MOAR!
and 2: why do the princesses have stallion hoods?
2948758Because magic.
2632322 Good show! Jolly good show!
Is this story dead?
1. For the love of god, start a new line with dialogue, it keeps it from getting confusing.
B. Nice job, got me going.
3272509 gosh I hope not
I'm sorry everyone, I forgot to change the status, to on Hiatus a while back, but just started refining what I had for chapter three and I hope to work on it more when I wake up, hopefully having it completed by the end of the day, and posted for your viewing pleasure.
Damn, I just found out about this story too. Come on dude, write more! There's not that many pony futa x human male stories out there!
glad to see this is still going
I would strongly advise an editor or submit to an editor group. There is no excuse for a thousand plus words with significant dialogue to be four paragraphs.
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I know I used to have a editor but he's been otherwise disposed of, could you suggest one?
4017158 Afraid I don't know any off hand who would work on this sort of subject matter. The one's I know shy away from clop, but if you wrote an adventure novel or something they'd offer their critique. You might want to browse the FIMfiction groups, or ask in a specific group that the store heavily themes on, like Futaquestria. There are plenty of groups solely dedicated to the topics of searching for editors, critique, or posting amateur work for improvement.
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Thank you, and I would like you to know as well that, that current piece was rough, it was a mix between then and now and was rushed to get out. so naturally it was going to be a little bad, chapter four should be much more representative of my skills as I've had some time to rediscover my writing skills.
Please tell me there'll be a scene where Luna and Celestia go anthro hermaphrodite on eachother and inflate EACHOTHER with cum.
Update?
Update?