• Member Since 19th Oct, 2013
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Voslar


I write second person human X pony clop sometimes. .... Yeah, I know. Regardless, I was asked to upload it here, so I figured I'd toss it up.

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I know this is a oneshot, but it would be interesting if a future story featured Trixie casting the spell to remove her condition, and our protagonist turning the tables and dominating her.

That said, this was a good story, and as a standalone piece, one of the better ones I've read in a long while.

You smirk inwardly at the idea that you can now honestly boast to your friends that you were a fan of The Great and Powerful Trixie before she was cool.

:raritydespair: Dammit, I hate it when stories make me a hipster.

I agree with Mad Library, it would be... Interesting.
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and as mad library said, this is among the best clop I have come across, and I read a lot of clop... but this... I love this... I could see it in my minds eye... and it was magnificent

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BEST THING

This is, without a doubt, one of the best futa on male fics I've ever read. Your use of the 2nd person silent protagonist was a breath of fresh air, the descriptions were wonderful, the tone, just...

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. This earns you a follow. :ajsmug:

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Thank you! Sorry, I've been out of touch for a little while, but I always appreciate comments. This was my longest story by far - I've got a lot of others, but they're mostly 2000 - 4000 word pastebin type things. This one took me a solid week's free time; it's gratifying to hear folks enjoyed it.

I actually have been thinking about another short second person one-shot today, though the next one isn't planned to be futa. If it's more second person futa you're looking for, I highly recommend Upon Her Throne by Butt Stallion or Metalworking by Standard Deviation. They're both excellent stories which encouraged me to post this one here at all; beforehand, I wasn't even sure there would be an audience for it.

This is easily one of the best futa on male clop fics ever posted here to date. Hot, hot, hot!

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Forgot I left a comment here and now I remember hoping that this story'd get more upvotes. You deserve 'em, friend.

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Thanks! That's pretty high praise; we're a small group to be sure, but with some good content.

No probs Voslar, great start. And i hope you a good trip on your way into more authoring, Its really good! :pinkiehappy:

5160905 well, whatever you postm, I will read and probably enjoy

Oh, God, thank you so much for uploading this here, Voslar.

Woah... Too damn good

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