I intend to do a fair bit more in this one, in fact I shortened the first chapter because I felt it ended on the right mark and set it up perfectly for chapter two.
2512551 It certainly is a nice spot for a chapter end, even though it's quite early in the story. However, I'm really excited to see what will happen next
Could have been much better sadly. It doesn't even need that much work. The scenes simply move a little to fast. Also since you said Celestia's equipment was head level for this guy, he is either very short, or Celestia is very tall. Some confirmation on the stature between the two would be nice. Also if she was that tall, she would be as large or larger then a draft horse, which weigh over 1500 pounds. Bed or not, having one of those on your back in any way would kill you.
Heyo! The editor of this story here! Yeah, some of the the little errors in this are my fault. I'm the one who's supposed to catch them, but apparently they still slipped through. I'm going to crack down on Chapter 2 and have that ready for Tempest, don't worry.
I have no idea why I like futa but it's really turn on for some reason.
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It seems like quiet a few people do, but I thought I would share some inner musings that have been dancing around in my mind.
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I have written a couple or so fics with futa as the main thingamajig but my phone won't let me upload boo.
moar
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I intend to do a fair bit more in this one, in fact I shortened the first chapter because I felt it ended on the right mark and set it up perfectly for chapter two.
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It certainly is a nice spot for a chapter end, even though it's quite early in the story. However, I'm really excited to see what will happen next
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I know it was a early end, but you will see why when I post the next chapter.
This is pretty damn hot. I do wonder one thing though, will the human turn the tables on Celestia and screw her?
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You will have to wait and find out.
2512773 Alright, sweet! Anything else kinky we can expect?
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It gets much kinkier, just a heads up, But I don't want to ruin any surprises though,so you will have to wait and see.
2512850 ETA on next update?
Not bad at all. I'd like to see where you plan on taking this.
Could have been much better sadly. It doesn't even need that much work. The scenes simply move a little to fast. Also since you said Celestia's equipment was head level for this guy, he is either very short, or Celestia is very tall. Some confirmation on the stature between the two would be nice. Also if she was that tall, she would be as large or larger then a draft horse, which weigh over 1500 pounds. Bed or not, having one of those on your back in any way would kill you.
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Sorry omission of thought, edited (I had kneeling).
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Working on chapter two now, I'm hoping to have it up sooner then later but I'm entirely at the mercies of my mind.
2514768 Okay, well don't stress yourself.
(Celestia is a Futa)
(Excessive Cum and Cumflation)
you have my attention
followin'
Love it.
Heyo! The editor of this story here! Yeah, some of the the little errors in this are my fault. I'm the one who's supposed to catch them, but apparently they still slipped through. I'm going to crack down on Chapter 2 and have that ready for Tempest, don't worry.
Not bad...Needs some Luna though.
2516484 I agree