I'm a human being who writes stories about ponies.
What would you do if the ones you've loved and laughed with are gone? That's a question Celestia asks herself everyday. Twilight, Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie... gone. Celestia rules with only one person by her side, Spike. Without the harmony the main six brought, Luna and Discord returned to their evil sides and were turned to stone/sent to the moon. Celestia and Spike are forced to accept the cruel ways of life.
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Right in the FEELS man!
So much for being a goddess eh, Twilight?
Overdone Meme vs. Feels....
It didn't have any effect at all.
When are people going to learn that just blarging out 'Oh woe is me, everything I knew and love is gone' without anything else to it doesn't actually have any emotional impact?
Short and simple, and really hits me in the
2231468 I totally understand. Thank you for your opinion. I just wanted to write a quick one shot from Celestia`s perspective. I think it turned out well.
Well that was short...Poor celestia.
2437212 I actually had a hard time getting it to be that long. My first draft had about 735 words. I had to extra words or adjectives wherever I could. During my school day I came up with some more ideas. I actually wrote the first 735 words in the ten minutes I had before school. Inspiration sure appears in odd places doesn`t it? I dreamt about it slightly the night before and then woke up with this idea. Also, poor Celestia is right!
2437413 Inspiration does come at random times, and whenever it does for me, I must heed it. One time I wrote somethin' down at 10:00 at night lol derp but anyway, yeah...
OH and my dreams are SO WEIRD, but sometimes they do give me ideas :D and I think I've dreamed about ponies at least twice, but it wasn't set in Equestria or anything.
One of them, I think, had Pinkie and Dashie in my kitchen.
It was like an arcade thing on the wall at the back of the kitchen between the fridge and the pantry.
And Dashie was looking at grinning, standing-on-hind-legs Pinkie like
Whut.
LOLOL
Anyway...
Sweet and emotional...
So many feels!
2460673 Thank you!
P.S. I like your profile pic.
2461037 Thank you.
Oh my God,this is one of the most saddest stories I have ever seen
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EMOTION! 
I'm guessing we're going to need an intervention for Luna and Discord, rather than using harmony. Harmony can be broken-- interventions on the other hand are incredibly saddening and offer and ultimatum.
The story itself: beautiful and thought-invoking. Immortality is such a troll...
2503522 Thank you for the positive review and for the story suggestion! Also, for your immortality thing, in short, immortality sucks. Living for 100 years is epic, living for 1,000,000+ years is
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The only problem is that Celestia was meant to live forever (granted, that doesn't mean she's exempt from pain.)
Time for some bioethics/food for thought:
Whenever people ask me about my thoughts on immortality (I have no doubts that if we don't blow ourselves up, we'll eventually be able to prolong ourselves indefinitely with technology) since I'm a pretty tech savvy guy, I always respond with:
"If we were meant to live that long, whoever willed this universe into existence would've made it so. Yeah, we can circumvent our physical problems to the point that we won't age, but mentally we'd fall into the despair of eternity."
Let the thinking begin.
2507493 Seriously, dude, I truly respect you. I LOVE it when people are poetic and can actually have an intellectual conversation! Not to mention your vocabulary! Write a story! I`m thinking about following you just because of your intellect and vocabulary! While you`re at it, get a profile picture! You have potential and I barely know you! In fact, I am merely just an acquaintance, yet I can already see your potential!
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I'll see what I can do in the Summer. Unfortunately, I lack the time to truly commit to a story, and I despise when I can only get half way through something before it stagnates in my PC.
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The capacity of memory is finite. Eventually your mind would succumb to the fog of ages; unless we invent memory modifications, in which case you would have to keep several brains in storage for holding the overhead.
I prefer the Neil Gaiman version of immortality. It's just more of the same, except you start forgetting the beginning. Then the middle. Then everything.
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We'd have to pull a Arthur C. Clarke move: sew ourselves into the fabric of time and space and thus gain an infinitely expanding capacity. Also, dang-- that's an old comment of mind, haha.
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The capacity of the cosmos is finite, and as you expand into it, it fills its own memory. It's a paradox.
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Looking back on this (thanks to the person who commented to me a minute ago), I have to say I was right. I started to write 3 things: a Fringed-esque story that would explain so much in the show with that insane logic that Fringed brings to TV, what another deity sees from the schism between Luna and Celestia, and a letter to Celestia before Luna gave in.
None of them came to fruition, but heck, I think I might do a one shot during December and give it a shot. I need to start out small, not large. Guess we'll see in 4 weeks, eh?
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Hm, depends. I always go way too scientific on it (dark energy, expansion, etc.) and compare it to that of a computer that gains infinite capacity. As it gains more, the entropy in the entirety of it increases, thus corrupting it while at the same time giving it more. Hm, gonna have to stew on that one for a while.
Princess Luna is evil again? Mind explaining why?
3728298 Um… well… you see… To make the story work.
I almost cried when reading this.