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Kegisak


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The night can be an amazing thing. It can reveal mysteries and house the most beautiful music, and the night that Scratch and Ziggy shared on the hill was no exception. A single night can do amazing things for two ponies, even if they don't realize it.

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:trixieshiftleft:....i love this:pinkiehappy:

I remember this from EqD. If I recall there was a previous one.

*looks at profile*

Derp. It's there. And I even faved it. :derpytongue2:

Well then. I shall fave this too. And give it stars.:twilightsmile:

Please continue with this. I love it.
One thing, though. There are quite a few typos and grammatical errors. If you have someone proofread it or let it sit for a day or two and then reread it, you'll probably catch most of them.

Looking forward to another installment. You've got yourself a new follower.

Another great story (chapter in your "feedback" story)
I especially like your rendition of vinyl, we don't see many disabled ponies or how they cope with their disabilities, and with vinyl you've managed to paint an interesting picture. :ajsmug:

The only thing that irks me is the times where you mess up you're/your and their/they're you might wanna work on that (or at least have somebody pre-read it for you. :raritywink:

Anyhow, looking forward to the next one. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah... these two stories were some of he earliest thing I'd written, well before it occurred to me to use a reviewer - or even to proofread them, really. If I ever do a third chapter I'll have them reviewed and proofread, but that's unlikely, given my feelings on them... still, people seem to like them well enough, so there's that.

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Well, I for one, would very much like to see how this continues :twilightsmile:
As I said before, your take on Vinyl is the best I've seen.
Please don't leave it like this, you've got something very nice here.

If you want proofreader, all you have to do is ask. What you have here is solid gold, and it would be a shame if it never saw the light of day.

Keep at it!

This is such a great story! I love the fact that 1). It's a vinyl scratch story and 2). You break the canon and fanon images of scratch. I love the idea of a blind scratch. I wounder what a deaf scratch would be like?

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immeasurably tragic, I imagine. I recall once seeing a movie about Beethoven while he was going deaf. It was quite interesting - he traded his time between being empty and broken, and absolutely furious. It's interesting to consider for a story, actually...

Wait... You actually made a sequel to 'Feedback'? Why wasn't I informed of this?! I love 'Feedback'! :pinkiehappy:
And I really like this one as well. I rarely beg authors, cause I know it annoys a lot of 'em, but will you please continue this? It's almost too good to just end here. :rainbowkiss:
[Edit] If you do continue this, just know that I'll gladly help pre-read it. It's really the only thing I can help with :rainbowlaugh:
-Glassed

This is a great story. If a story is truly great, I feel the grammar is but a minimal thing. Within reason of course. Though I myself didnt spot anything...

Ah yes... I remember this from a long time ago. Still as good as I remember it.

There were a few issues here and there though, typos and the like. But what irked me fairly often was that you always said something akin to "Scratch stared at him"... wasn't she blind? I mean, I kinda get what you're saying with that, but stare implies sight and it makes you wince.

I absolutely loved this, is there any chance of continuation?

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Difficult to say... this series and I have an... interesting relationship, these days. I won't write it off as an impossibility, but I can't deny whatever sequel might come will be a tad different in a few ways.

Too indirect and slow imo. But well written.

Absolutely loved this story. :heart: The back and forth between Scratch and Ziggy was fantastic and kept me smiling the whole way through. The pacing was perfect and kept me at attention through the whole thing. The portrayal and interaction of all the characters was phenomenal. Gotta say that this is now one of my favorite romances on this site. Thank you so much for this story. :twilightsmile:

This story is really good, don't really see stories like this very often I hope this story does continue if it does I can't wait to read what happens next if not the story is still awesome :D

why wasn't this labelled as a sequel on feedback? Didn't even know this existed until i went through your stories.

This story was the first time I heard about poutine. I definitely wanted to try it, but it just wasn't available anywhere. I just reread it for the... let's say 15th time or so and since the 14th time I finally have been able to try it. Don't know how it would compare to the real Canadian stuff, but I definitely liked it a lot. Still really enjoy the story too:).

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