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A playdate to Silver Spoon's house leads to an uncovering of what may be one of Ponyville's most horrific tragedies. The young foal known as Silver Spoon is missing, as is her family, and all are presumed dead. Can Applejack get to the bottom of this with the aid of her friend Twilight Sparkle, her sister Apple Bloom, and Squirt the Changeling and Shinedown T. Mare, two crime experts from of the Peacekeeping Council of Special Investigations?
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Dde this is awesome! Try ponyfying it a little more you know? I loved it! Making AppleJack a sherrif is a great idea, the only thing is to keep in mind Silverspoon's behaviour and personality while writing.
Loved it!
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Why, thank you! It's always good to have somebody offer friendly advice on how I can continue to improve my writing. I tried to sort of chalk up the kid's narration in this to her kind of being less of a pompous brat considering the tragedy she went through and she's speaking to the people that saved her. She's sorta shellshocked and not really about to look a gift horse in the mouth...so to speak. XD
Very neat and mind-bending, you did a fine job
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Thank you kindly! :)
I really did feel guilty about involving Silver Spoon, truth be told, because I didn't want to come off as purposefully manipulative by involving a kid.
Its the first time I see a Pony fanfic with so many new characteristics. I think that you handled this subject better than most writers would. You did an awesome job! Keep it up!
Story was decent but had bad OCs. Thus, I am neutral.
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If you don't mind me asking, what about the OCs did you not like? I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing.
2203564 I understand how you feel and i don't think you were manipuative and i do think that you're a great writer like i am (well only a little bit) reading this story is like watching Law and Order
This story sounds exactly like the CSI episode "Gum Drops." Just wondering if thats where you got the idea from.
No, I'm being serious.
AWESOME that was freaking awesome
poor Silver lost her whole family
Good thing Mr Rich will take her in till she can be settled in with her aunt and uncle. I imagine though this means being moved away so I guess she'll loose Diamond Tiara to..
I hope This Equestria has the death penalty!
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Yes! :)
I remember this episode. good one. I had a bit of trouble understanding how the relationships between the characters worked, but a nice reading.
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Thank you! :)