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A soldier is stolen from the year 2012 and dumped into the magical world of a war-torn Equestria, with all its glory, and all its horror. He must prevail against the Changelings and even a few hostile ponies that threaten his life. It's his task to save Celestia from Chrysalias and end the brutal war. But will his task simply end there? Or is there more to his story?
(Dinky also main character)
Shipping is involved.
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Props to you for this!
EDIT: Placeholder, same as kalash, I believe.
2442818 Much appreciated!
You mean you're not done yet? I'm not wanting to spoil it for myself, but is the story over or not? I'm asking because I normally don't drop reviews for incomplete stories. I also prefer to go through a story in one go if I think that I might review it.
2443172 No, its not finished yet. Actually, it maybe far from finished. I'm not completely sure yet. I almost have the next chapter completely written, but I am definitely continuing it afterwards. I'm just not sure how yet.
2443234
Okay then, I'll review what you have so far written.
2443329 Much appreciated
I fear that the twist is just the cliché turning the human into a pony, or human's love interest becomes a human, which makes me not want to read the story. So is that it?
2444247 I just messaged you the answer as to not spoil it for anyone else that wants to read it.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH WALL OF TEXT XD
other than that... Good start!!!!
2447350 Sorry, i was a bit out of it when I read your comment. I understand now, thanks XD I'm working on it as of now
You, sir, are an evil person to leave us with that ending.
Looking forward to the next update
2453075
Me too XD I usually write my stories as I update. Where I left off is as far as I have gotten XD
Holy shit why do I get the feeling some shits gunna go down in his homeland
2455090 Not giving any spoilers
Evil!! But eh can't blame you. It adds tension and increases ones need to continue reading.
seems a bit rushed and the passing is a bit quick :/
2465090 I assure you that I was not trying to rush
And think about it, Fluttershy is only hanging on because of technology and she knows that she can't be saved. She just wanted to get that shit over with. After all, she did have a week to think about and accept it
2465010 Yep! And that is why I do it! Finally, somebody gets why I hate spoilers!
Yes because even though one may want to know way happens badly spoilers ruin the fun and excitement and thrill that comes with twists in a good story.
Damn. Well it somewhat had something to do with his world. Though I can say I was sorta expecting something like this. Not exactly what the story tells but similar. But that kinda reminds me of this other fic called allies I believe. Basically it's the other way around equestria is lost after some exploded M1abrams and a few apaches and some U.S. soldiers lost along with the enemy which were the gryphons some weird pandragon things and minitors. Good fic btw may get some inspiration from it. Sorry for the long comment :p
love how you made him becoming an Alicorn make logical since good job
2469660 That sounds like a cool fic. I might read it sometime XD. And much appreciated
2469782 Thank you very much
My bad it was called heroes and allies by lynolius.
2471228 Could you PM me the link?
F'in awesome so far
2473658 Thank you very much
Is that a suit in Dead Space?
That is a Dead Space suit isn't it. Whatever it doesn't matter good story so far by the way, when its showing the assault rifle it says 'what it lacked in range will be made up in range and fire rate' which sound confusing to me anyways nice story
I am stupid. What's pm? I apologize for my idiocy.
Even though I don't know what pm is. Again I apologize. I hope this is just a good. Here's the link. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1401/heroes-and-allies
2474559 The Deadspace suit was inspiration for mine, yes, lol. It looks like the level 4 suit, just jet black on the metal and in between the plates its a glowing lime green. Also, thank you, i need to fix that
2474960 It's a message, lol. And thank you, i shall get to reading whenever I can get around to it!
Its time for more war, yay
2482919 Yep! And nice profile picture. It's moustache approved!
Hmmm this'll be quite interesting. And epic. Heroes and allies has something similar to these demons.
And don't worry about the next chapter being to late. We understand. well all still be here.
2483900 Really? Cool. I have been way to busy to even get past the first chapter in that story yet XD
Update!
and THANK YOU for telling us about the wait. Ill make sure to stay busy
with your favorites.
2547942 Yep! It actually mentions the show in a previous chapter
Doom crossover... I like
DOCTOR HOOVES!!! :D nice one btw, the story I told you about also has its own history lesson.
2562087 I'm glad that you do
2565208 Thanks XP And yeah, i know XD I'm pretty far in that story
That'd be my exact reaction.
2706466 I know right
Very suspensful
2732844 Thank you
That's what I was going for XP