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An United Earth Directorate Viking pilot from Earth gets into a freak accident with his best friend the night of his friends funeral, he finds himself in a brand new world with and plenty of surprises and challenges.

This fic is undergoing a massive edit to take out some of the cringe, and to right this wonky universe I created. I apologize if some of you disagree with this decision, but it's been years since I started writing this and I'm just not happy with it. I do hope you all give the edit a chance, at the very least it means this fic will be getting new chapters 😃

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 29 )

In the short description, you say he's a member of the Navy.

2722146 Thanks, lol. I fixed it

An Air Force pilot from Earth

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUuu:raritydespair:

2722294 If you don't like it, don't read it

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BUT WHAT IF I READ IT AND DIDN'T LIKE IT? :raritydespair:

2722389 Why would you read a fanfiction that you had no interest in in the first place? I know you hate these kinds of fics

En taro Tassadar. If you are going to be writing a Starcraft crossover, you should post it in the Starcraft fan group.
(P.S, why did you make the title a Protoss phrase, if it's about a Terran?)

2722482 It's not. It's alternate universe for the Starcraft part. You'll see. En taro translates to "In Honor Of" And I wasn't aware of that group, I shall post it there immediately!

2722525 I know what "En taro" means, but I thought it would have Toss in it, since it said that phrase. Anyway, good luck with this story, always happy to help, and to see more crossovers of Starcraft.

2722947 Oh it does have the Protoss in it, lol

2723594 Yea, I meant to say that I thoght it would be centered on them, though. And P.S, you could use some lines between the sections, and why does it change from 1st person to 3rd?

2723643 Ahh, yeah. I understand

2723652 And with the first chapter. The first terrans in the Koprulu sector came from Earth, so Earth would already have advanced technology like the ones in Koprulu,which I dont get how the humans on Earth have less advanced tech than the ones they sent into space from Earth. Unless backwards time travel is a thing now.

2723732 It's tagged Alternate Universe for the fact that Earth was never the original Terran homeworld and was undiscovered. I was going to make Mar Sara the Terran homeworld

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

can't wait to read the next chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

2723643 And the POV changes are exactly that, POV changes. I want Tom to be the epicenter of the story, so he's in first person while the other events and people are in third.

Fiora... she isn't as she once was my friend... for better or for worse I have yet to know...

6296321 I haven't been on league in like a couple weeks cause I've been busy moving. Has she had a rework since like mid July? If not, she's still broken as hell XD Once you get Hydra, anyway...

6297134 She has. Nothing is the same. And she lost her ult of "screw you, I'm untargetable"

6297278 What?! Well it was bullshit anyway. People have canceled it out mid-ult before. I'll have to check her out

6297278 I checked her out and the rework isn't half bad, she still murders everything if you build her right. The ult kinda sucks, but is pretty good for team fights

6309313 Must just be me then. First game I played was against a Riven, and I only got my ult off once. Was such a pain.

What does "En Taro" mean?

7562407 In the protos language means "greetings"

A little fast paced, but, not too bad.

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I know this is late, but I would like to point out 'En Taro' means 'In honor of' and that it does not mean greetings.

7769755 oooh, I honestly taught it is some kind if greeting, sorry if i made u angry...:twilightsheepish:

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