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Saacsa


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The Mane six get transported to the real world and have to find a way home with the help of a few humans. There is a slight shipping involved, Note. I'm not strictly for the ships in here, they were just convenient.

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Just to comment, I won't vote or anything, but I'm not a big fan of your description. It seems pretty unprofessional and it kind of makes me not want to read your story.

1935679 Thanks for pointing that out, ill try to avoid it in the near future for my descriptions, i fixed it on here though.

I don't usually get the point of human crossovers, but it was interesting. You write well. Human crossovers are not something I typically read. Two main human crossovers I read and enjoyed were "My Little Dashie" and "My Little Dashie: a sequel". I enjoyed it, and it had a happy ending. :yay::pinkiehappy:

1937985 I know some people don't like happy endings, and I do like stories a little sad at points, but I like them to end on a good note. I also like stories where Derpy is the hero or has a happy ending. She is one of my favorite ponies.:pinkiesmile:

1939531 Wonderful news, you are going to love my Doctor Whooves fanfiction when i get it completely typed up. It was my first fanfic to ever write, i just have yet to upload it XD

1939911 :yay: I can't wait. Good luck!:pinkiehappy:

1941961 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

can't hold it in much longer, can't... just can't :rainbowlaugh:
This by far is a hilarious story, i love it!:pinkiehappy:

Also I noticed that you writing style is very similar to mine.:derpytongue2:

1969121 It is, isnt it, coolio, lol :derpytongue2:

hehe I guess you can say that. Through stories there is always only one emotion I feel. for this one it was laughter. For the on I just read called 'Rainbow Factory' it was heart pounding. Although I don't see what all the fuss about it is.:rainbowhuh: It's not that highly moderate. I would rate that teen and gore.:scootangel:

1969458 I really liked Rainbow Factory, it was very fast paced once it got started and i would rate it Mature for the Gore, child-killing, and foul language XD. The Awoken thing that i wrote wasnt actually inspired by the Rainbow Factory fanfic, i mean it had some things in it from that fic, but what inspired it was the same thing that inspired Aurora Dawn to write Rainbow Factory. A WoodenToaster video, Awoken to be exact, lol. I liked the video so much that i made a fanfic out of it. The only problem i had was, well. Aurora had already made a Rainbow Factory fic, so i decided that i had to do something that coincided with that fanfic. So Awoken was born :rainbowlaugh:

Hehe ::scootangel: I guess I am just used to gory stories. :derpytongue2:

who is red lavenders kid you never said?

1980195 Oops! I must have forgotten to put it earlier :twilightblush: My bad, i updated it with his description and who he belongs to if you want to check it out now XD

one more Question you didn't say if they were a earth pony, a Pegasuses,Unicorn or Alticorns?

1990325 Thank you so much :rainbowlaugh: Sometimes i forget to put some things, lol, could you point out anymore mistakes that i have made?

when you said Only that Celestia was performing a dangerous spell... I guess that it went wrong.you forgot in front "

1995994 Yeah, hey, if i have any more updates to a story, can i send them to you for proof-reading?

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