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I expected a fart joke. I was disappointed.
Not bad. Only question would be is this anthro or humanized? The confusion might turn ppl away.
My life is now complete.
Wat?
!HoT!!LoL!
I was thinking of a picture made by Doxy a while back... I will not link it unless asked.... UPVOTE!
May I make a suggestion? Take the emoticon out of the title.
2089735 any thing with a wink, can turn sexual
Oh yeah
I got a bit confused in the beginning, apperently they were anthro, after all rainbow was wearing pants. But overall a good story
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville
Take out the emitcons, clear up the dialogues, make the prose a bit more sensual, and for the love of everything holy, PLEASE give us anthro and futa warnings next time.
Dear God, people, can someone PLEASE write a decent Derpy clopfic? I mean one-on-one with Derpy, of course. It's tiring to sift through all of the rape fics and group sex and group sex rape fics. Don't point me to May the Best Butt Win, because that one doesn't have Derpy focus. I digress.
Overall this looks like a roleplay you decided to transcript into a fanfic. Put more effort into it and you'd have something decent.
2089865 and why is that? ~Admin Joone
2091394 CHALLENGE ACCEPT.
Thanks for all the suggestions. We will take them into consideration. ~Admin Joone
2090315 I will as soon as possible ~Admin Joone
2093412 You go bud. :3 I'd like to read that. ~Admin Joone
Alright, I'd just like to say that constructive criticism is more than welcome, but that "Everything about this is terrible" comment was a bit rude and trollish, and second that I wrote this for myself as practice. So yes, considering I have barely touched writing it may have glaring faults but you could still be nice about it, especially considering we're all bronies/pegasisters/whatever here. ~AdminReiyd
Also, yes they are anthro, hence the colored skin and the hooves AND hands. ~AdminReiyd
Not bad
2089718 Oh and yeah! I think I know which one you're talking about! If it's the same one, I had it as my background while I wrote this, and I watched him livestream it. xD ~AdminReiyd
2093412 WELL WE SHALL SEE WHAT HAPPENS SHALL WE
Cheeks. Went. VIOLENT.
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Uhh... Derpy!
Lost my boner as soon as I found out it was human. Where's the human tag?
2096118 FEAR THE VIOLENT CHEEKS!
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Well, that escalated extremely quickly.
2091394
Then you may enjoy this fic if you haven't read it, its called Address Unknown, it has good story and the clop between Derpy and Twilight is very beautifully written, plus it is one of the most unlikely of ships I have ever seen.
2108504 Well I was more thinking straight fics, I've seen more than a few yuri Derpy fics that were pretty decent. I'll give it a look later.
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Yeah it is hard to find those, its weird that their aren't any good strait clop fic's featuring Derpy.
2109243 Because it's weird to think about the only realy straight Derpy pairing (DoctorxDerpy) having sex. For some reason.
2109257
Really, I have no problem seeing those two having sex, hell my head cannon dinky is their kid, and she had to be made some how.
2107990 Its Anthro
I enjoyed this perhaps a bit too much
Everybody's comments are nice And all but am i the only One who noticed that rainbow dash has a cock?
2248677 I noticed that. It made big white question marks appear over my head. How strange.
Yes, Rainbow Dash has a cock in this one. I understand that it's sort of odd but it wasn't tagged properly but that's because I didn't even know they'd been uploaded by my girlfriend so I didn't help with the tags or anything. I should fix those now actually. ~Reiyd
Futa, spanking, and Derpy? I'm all varieties of oneboard with this idea!
2111709 then where is the Anthro tag?
I loved this story it was funny and sexy.