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Actually not badly written, but kinda pointless at the moment...
Where will this story go? A few more hints in the description could do the trick of getting people actually interested.
As quoted from South Park, "It's peeee!"
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Not bad i will wait for next chapter
Its incomplete so its kinda hard to tell, but I'll agree with others....not bad.
But the piss......sir I must ask: Do you have a piss fetish? :3
its ok i dont understand the dislikes???
2084189Thank you!
2082455Well yeah
2084966 ...well now I do. Thanks a bunch, bro. /)
You could have included a little more but great job!
Maybe a "watersports" warning in the description? I can't think of any other reason for this to rack up so many dislikes than people who hate the fetish reading right into it because there was no warning. Though, it was kinda obvious from the earlier parts of the story.
more chapters must be added please or another watersports story either one :)