Life sucked for Jason Marston. His mother died on Valentine's Day the year he turned 15, and he was sent to live with his aunt because his new stepmother was a bitch and his father was whipped. He lived with his aunt till he was 20, when he moved out to live on his own. Bored and lonely, he fills his life with psycho girls from his neighborhood and video games. But one night everything he knew is sent for a loop when he learns about a forgotten blood relative from the wild west, and a beautiful Southern Belle drops out of the sky. With everything changing so fast, more and more problems arise for Jay and this mystery girl as they try to find some clue to where her missing friend is and get the country beauty back home.
Spin off to "Spectrum" by RIPTID3 and a cross over of "Red Dead Redemption"
Rated Teen for Language and possible sexcapades.
The only thing it needs is comedy.
I DON'TCAHHRE its meant to be a Dark/Romantic/Adventure. It needs jokes.
2002590 There will be jokes. It wouldn't be one of my stories without them. But I could only use six.
2002606
Knowing myself, if I saw a Human Applejack falling from the sky. I would say. "Well, that happened."
and scramble around to catch her.
But thats just me, because I'm the most bad@$$ freak of nature you'll ever see
Finally got it approved huh?
2024858 Yes indeed!
You just need to look for the one person on Earth with 'Rainbow' colored hair... ALL THE TIME.
Great story by the way, Really looking forward to see what happens
2025148 A very valid point, And thank you. I'm glad you liked it! More will surly be coming soon.
This is probably the first time I've read a PoE story where the main character wasn't a brony... This will certainly be interesting.
2025196 If you liked this, go read 'Spectum' by RIPTID3. Its a good fic.
2025229 I've already read Spectrum and Back to Me, I had just forgotten he wasn't a brony, but just really conspicuously described at the beginning of the story...
2025265 Oh, so did you find this through him, or the front page?
2025271 I found this through both a blog post, and the 'Spin-Off' Chapter of Back to Me
2025281 Well, however you you found this, thank you for reading and enjoying this fic.
Its here. Fan-tucking-fastic.
2025738 I know right!
He did what now?!
2027125 thanks for spotting that. I'll get right on fixing it.
2027125 I can't stop laughing...
2027206 I seriously can't believe I let that slide by. I'm still at work, so fix it after I get out. God damn, I'm funny even when I don't mean to be.
Jason MARSTON is this a red dead reference or something?
2039639 Yeah, This is a crossover. Jason is John's great great great grandson.
"Jason Marston! This is the FBI. We have the building surrounded. A SWAT team has been called in and will be arriving in just a few minutes. Please, surrender now and come out peacefully. We don't want to open fire, but we will if we must. Just come out with the girl and be done with this."
Omygod yes it is Red Dead Reference!!!!!
2039740 Glad you approve!
This is very good. You've improved quite a bit from your first story. I like it. I expect more chapters to be written, because this is a story I know I'll enjoy reading. Keep up the good work.
(And if I can ever stop being sick, I'll finish more chapters of Blue Eyes for you. Sorry it's taking so long.
)
2054701 Its all good my friend. And a new chapter is on the way, as soon as I find the notebook I started to write it in. And if you hold off till Valentine's Day, I'll consider it a present. Lolz!
I found the notebook, I'll try and write more tonight before I go to sleep, which will probably be around 1 am.
New chapter ? Pleeeease
totally didn't come here because of a shameless Plug
2062162 So glad for that.
When's the next chapter released
2075201 Hopefully by the weekend. Promise.
!
Story shows potential. Just ease up on the quick pacing some and the whole "understanding of AJ being from a different world" thing, it just fit in well with the rest of the story.
I shall keep my eye on this story to see what happens.
2089452 Thanks. I'll try and slow it down a bit. And I do hope you like what is to come.
The tissues are cannon!
2133328 What?!?
I seriously doubt that the Marston integrity has fallen so far from the proverbial tree is all im saying
2133353 If you're making a reference to the actual game, I'm missing it completely. I only have a vague understanding of the story line, enough to not sound like an ass while writing this masterpiece (I don't really think this.) of mine.
Well you can make up for that by writing more
Is that a Spectrum reference I see?
2233575 Yes. Yes it is.
Fuck yeah, new chapter!
2234756 Yup, but it's incomplete. I'll be finishing it tonight.
Completeness! Found some errors, though.
Should be an exclamation point.
Ass slide?
*Staring.
No and clothes, Exes might be wrong for some people, but it might not.
"I took your picture with my phone, but that's not what's important now."
Should be shear.
Outburst is one word, and extra r in stared.
Really, really good chapter, though. The stair scene had me laughing.
Okay, I read.
You obtain 4
for the chapter.
Get +1
when grammar is fixified. 
2239938 Thanks for the assist Pyro. I'll fix that tonight.
2240832 I'm sorry if it felt a little drawn out. But I promise the next one will be better.
The rating is 5 moustaches out of 5.
Silly.
2241225 Oh, then in that case *inhales deeply*...hold it...hold it...
*pokes Pyre in solar plexus with (insert object here)*
2239938>>2241225 All fixed.
Mainly because of the funny refferences and great storyline I give you 9
out of 10