Pyrefly has lived happily in Ponyville for a year and a half, together with Rainbow Dash. But after being awoken by his marefriend's screams of terror in the middle of the night for the umpteenth time, it becomes clear something is wrong. Really wrong. And because of Dash's stubborn pride, he has no idea what the cause of the nightmare is. Can he figure it out and save Rainbow from the visions, or will she finally crack and be driven to murder in order to save herself?
This is an alternate version of "Rocket to Insanity" with my OC in my universe. All credit to the original author.
Chapters (3)
Well, that escalated quickly.
What do you mean quickly? I've been building up to this for 2 chapters now.
Hmm, your pacing has improved loads from your last two stories, I see a lot a potential in this story. Also, you need to get a proofreader, their are loads of tiny mistakes that almost kill this for me. Good job so far though.
1877413 Thanks a lot for that, and for the follow. I do have someone set up as a proofreader, but she doesn't necessary agree with the fact that I've picked up writing fanfics. She believes I should leave the writing to her and I should just stick to drawing. Hehe.