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(Joke) Alt. Title: Lord Of The Humance
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Why so much hate for this? It seems pretty good.
1964998 so did I
People hate on (Pony)M/(Human)F for some reason. Mainly horny boys that can't live vicariously through it.
M(h/p)/F(p) = No problem.
M/M = Teenage boy hate/insecurity
F/F = All good.
Smut is smut. Sometimes it's entertaining other times its got a good story that just happens to have sex.
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I'd like to know too. I know the style I try to aim for is often confusing and could be better, so any comment is good.
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Say, do you mind telling me what you like about the style?
1967816
Yeah, I don't like being very explicit. I much prefer being vague like this, even if it is more difficult, and I'm glad you like it.
Pointless criticism time!
For a clopfic, it is rather well written, even if it could have been a litlle longer. And I do not want make the bad impression, your's is a fairly good story, it's just there is a tiny little thing that does not let me rest.
In the synopsis you mentioned that Lord Celestia (I don't want to nitpick, but there a tons of better genderbent names for 'Celestia') makes a Hungarian girl very happy. Now, where in that 2223 words were any, even the most obscure hint, that would reveal the girl's ethnical identity? With this effort you could have write 'African girl' , 'American girl', and so on.
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Hmm? No, that's not in the story at all, the girl is of indeterminate nationality. The Hungerian is a person I was writing this for.
Unique and very well written. 10/10
I love me a good female human on pony stallion. This is the second really nice one I have found. I must say thought while Lord Celestia is nice I'm sure you could have found a more fitting name. Other than that this was a very enjoyable fic
nice
Holy shit, we need more of this. There isn't even close to enough second person female stories.