An Evening In

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master109

master109 #1 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 8 · ·

Glad you did a sequel like i said before this site needs more stallion on Human female.

General Spritz

General Spritz #2 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 2 · 1 ·

Footplay always seems like it's just foreplay to me.

Killerokie

Killerokie #3 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 6 · ·

This story is on such fertile ground.
Maybe they ought to do Twilight's survey
Maybe Twilight likes the resulting information so much she'd want to get some first-hoof observations

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #4 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Contains FiE, human-on-pony, light foot fetish, and a footjob.)

light foot fetish, and a footjob

My kind of fetish!

Hewolf

Hewolf #5 · Oct 20th, 2014 · · ·

Nice story, found a typo though, least I think its a typo. LOLOL

I felt my shaft slide from my sheath and start to harden, throwing thicker with each pass of her foot over its length.

I think you meant growing instead of throwing

Galaxy Knight

Galaxy Knight #6 · Oct 21st, 2014 · · ·

Nicely done, the change to Machintosh's perspective is refreshing but it didn't really come to a satisfying end.

PetuTheViewer

PetuTheViewer #7 · Oct 21st, 2014 · · ·

That last paragraph. I kind of want to know Granny Smiths reaction.

Now you'll just have to write another where AB caches them to complete the set. Though with that there are a few paths to go from. Elizabeth could easily turn that into an improvised sex-ed or something...

Maybe I should be getting worried for having that kind of ideas.

Freelancer Agent Maine

Freelancer Agent Maine #8 · Nov 7th, 2014 · · ·

Good job rolling with the story from odd one out.even tho foot job is kinda creepy by my standards

vladspellbinder

vladspellbinder #9 · Jul 8th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Granny coming home at the end was very predictable, I was hoping she wouldn't to throw the reader for a loop that the expectation had been subverted. Still a good read though.

And no, Twilight can not take a hint. You need to sit her down and tell her stright up you're not going to answer this stuff. Maybe some of it, but not all of it and not as she's been going about it.

Also, caught something, while not a typo it is not correct pony anotomy.

Still didn’t understand why her udder was on the front end

Ponys have a pair of minor breasts that are normally just called teats[1], not one udder. So I'd recommend changing it to "her teats were" or "her beasts were"

[1]Teats are actually the part that extends from the beast or udder that the milk comes out of , so nipples are technically teats, but not all teats are nipples. The more you know! *Rainbow star.img*

Rinnaul

Rinnaul #10 · Jul 8th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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There is a certain nuance that Wikipedia research just can't provide.

Thanks for the fixes on both stories, no matter how far after the fact they came.

vladspellbinder

vladspellbinder #11 · Jul 8th, 2016 · · ·

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Well, I knew about your stuff for a while now but I never got around to reading much of it before. Then I got reminded of your TwiLestia story through Titanium Dragon's review and went looking through everything else... .

Better late than never, right?

harts fire