Daharispilton
Joined 25th Sep, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Serina · 6.6k words · 181 24 · 5.7k views
- That_One_Brony · 21k words · 234 26 · 9.4k views
- Serina · 6.6k words · 206 15 · 6.3k views
- Cloplight Clopple · 2.9k words · 203 19 · 7.3k views
- TomTheHunkyDiamond · 5.7k words · 103 17 · 2k views
- Ghost of Cummings Past · 7.5k words · 98 18 · 4.7k views
- Bandy · 6.1k words · 274 30 · 11k views
- ExplicitEscritoire · 1.8k words · 166 28 · 6.6k views
Featured In10
Clopfics11,546 stories ·15,814 members
Rule 631,248 stories ·3,993 members
M/M Shipping1,286 stories ·2,805 members
RariJack537 stories ·1,942 members
- Twinkie: Golden Shipfics with Sweet Filling346 stories ·577 members
FlutterDash1,424 stories ·2,585 members
The Twinkie Pie Group171 stories ·538 members
The Coltcuddlers1,174 stories ·2,212 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.052 seconds
Total duration
837 users online
1,312,602 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I approve and hope for more, although I do wish there had been more Dominant Butterscotch and submissive Blitz.
I favorited and upvoted, before I read this, and now, that I am through with it, I have to say:
i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/217/484/+_8e96af00b18b142c037b2fc054c12b0b.gif
I am hetero too, but I have a big fetish for homosexual ponies too, kind of strange.
Also, we really do need more r63 stuff here, I hope the next chapter will come soon
1903454 I did want to have a mix. Sorry, maybe next time..... just suggest a pair!
1904719 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ays5DP1m1JQ
Not bad, a few hiccups here and there, but nothing that ruins the experience. I personally would've preffrered a little more spacing, even with how it is now I still felt sometimes like I was reading a wall of text, but again, no biggie.
On a different note, to anyone else who plans to do R63 in the future, you have to find a different nickname for Butterscotch than "Butters", cause the moment I read that I picture Butters from South Park getting it up the bum instead of a male Fluttershy, and that's just wrong.
1905063 Well, I saw some give Fluttershy the nickname "Flutters" want me to change it to "Scotch"?
1905080
Look, don't make any changes on my behalf, I mostly wrote it all as a joke. If you feel you wanna change it, do it, but don't do it because one guy on the internet makes crazy connections in his head.
1905092 Okay, but I did space out the paragraphs, you're right. It does look better.
1905111
Celestia damn it, you work fast.
I'm also hetero, but I got a little hard. Not full on wood, but just a little excitement.
My only real complaint is that you made R63 Applejack into Applebuck. I've always read Applejack as being gender neutral, and Applebuck as R63 Apple Bloom. But you can keep it the way it is if you would prefer.
1904204 Any pairing where Rainbow Blitz is the bitch is my suggestion. Heh, Elusive and Blitz?
Awsome story, can't wait for more.
Do you do any non-Mane Six shippings? Because I would kill for something with Cadence and Shining Armor. Either Crescendo x Shining Armor, Crescendo x Gleaming Shield, or Cadence x Gleaming Shield.
1905386 The more I think of what you say, the more I start to picture Nocturne from League of Legends. I thought it was Prince Solaris and Prince Artemis that were the r63 versions of Celestia and Luna.
Needs some Dusk x Berry for the next chapter.
One other thing, Applejack is stilled called Applejack when r63, due to it being an already androgynous name. No need to to refer to him as Applebuck, which is the r63 for Applebloom anyway.
OKAY for all of you who say it's "APPLEJACK" not "APPLEBUCK" FINE! I'LL CHANGE IT, JUST SHUT UP!
Exclusive and aj
1909059 Yeah, but I just think of Atemis as the name because, well, I think it fits, and Nocturne sounds like it would be the rule 63rd version of Nightmare Moon.
Also, I had the story up on a tab for a while before I read it, so that;s how I saw you're comment, and I still feel weird thinking about Prince Solaris with Nocturne from LoL. How would that work? 
1913403
That mental image... Celestia standing before the embodiment of nightmares or whatever Nocturn is. Thank you. That made my night.
1913498>>1913439 You have no idea until you have as vivid an imagination as I.
I don't think I'm sleeping tonight
Rainbow Blitz: The quickest stallion in all of Equestria.
1920522 I said it was my first writing!!!! Give me a break!!!! I think I did pretty bucking well! Besides! What have you written! : )
1921491
I- What? No, I was just cracking a joke! I'm sorry!
It was really good, trust me. Hell, I even liked and added it to my favorites' list!
1922485 I figured you were. The next one is coming along... painfully. It may take two weeks if it has to! I have to make it superior to the previous one. It sucks balls to wait, but the last thing I want to do is release a clopfic that sucks balls.
Uh, then again this is M/M so I guess it's suppose to suck balls?
Wonderful.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, I'm done with the next one, Yay!
Not bad, though I must admit I liked the first chapter more. Dunno why, I just did, but this was still good. Although you might want to doublecheck certain parts right at the beginning, in one sentence Macareina is reffered to as AJ's older sister, and a few lines down suddenly it seems AJ is the older one of the siblings. I don't know how to insert sentences from the story into comments, but I think you'll be able to spot it.
Anyway, good read, looking forward to the next chapter.
1998373 BAM! Fixed.
Great improvement since the last chapter( not that the last one was bad) I definitely enjoyd this one a lot more though. Nice work!
does that mean bubble berry and dusk shine are next?
2002506 Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaybe
yay
Ooo, you used Skipsy's image. That's a favorite of mine.
Nice story, very sexy. The sentences are a bit weird at times... but nobody really cares that much when it comes to clop.
So, next up we're gonna be seeing a hyperactive crazypony getting it on with a nerd. This cannot go wrong.
Hmm, very nicely done :) Looking forward for more..
Butterscotch and Elusive should tell eachother about their experiences at the spa.
First of, you're awesome for writing this, I love the rule 63 angle. Second, there are some issues with this, nothing big, but a few sentences seem to shift between a third-person and one-person perspective, which got slightly irritating. I don't know how to pull parts out of the story so I can't point out any examples, but I'm pretty sure that if you read it through again you'll see what I mean. The same can be said about a few commas, again nothing big, but there were a few times when I felt they were unnecessary, especially if the sentence itself isn't very long.
The story and setup in your pairings so far has been good I think, and I'd really like to see you expand upon this, maybe build things up until you reach the point when they all get together and buck the daylights out of each other.
Lookin' forward to seeing more, keep up the good work.
Fun..steamy chapter, I wonder how Elusive will do with Dusk instead of Berry. Hmm
I kinda think that these encounters should all have happened for the next pairings, it would let it build up to a big orgy in the library.
BlitzXBerry or ButterscotchXElusive next please!
It was alright. Berry got a little "rape-y" or at least forceful there at the end there, with the whole "your saying no, but your body is saying yes" shtick.
Please do Dusk Shine x Prince Solaris next please! By the way, can you do threesomes?
You switch between past and present tenses here, sometimes inside a single sentence. Also, the end seems somewhat rushed, two or three more paragraphs would make it better, I think. Still, another decent chapter.
Here is my suggestion for another chapter: Dusk liked being on bottom so much that now he just craves for another good buck. Then he meets Rainbow who is in need to buck someone, and they realize that they can help each other.
I'd love to see a Rainbow Blitz and Applejack chapter.
1904160
Just gonna say, thank god I'm not the only metro stallion stuffer..... Was worrying me there for a bit....
2391126 THIS!