I approve and hope for more, although I do wish there had been more Dominant Butterscotch and submissive Blitz.

I favorited and upvoted, before I read this, and now, that I am through with it, I have to say:
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I am hetero too, but I have a big fetish for homosexual ponies too, kind of strange.
Also, we really do need more r63 stuff here, I hope the next chapter will come soon

1903454 I did want to have a mix. Sorry, maybe next time..... just suggest a pair!

1904719 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ays5DP1m1JQ

Not bad, a few hiccups here and there, but nothing that ruins the experience. I personally would've preffrered a little more spacing, even with how it is now I still felt sometimes like I was reading a wall of text, but again, no biggie.

On a different note, to anyone else who plans to do R63 in the future, you have to find a different nickname for Butterscotch than "Butters", cause the moment I read that I picture Butters from South Park getting it up the bum instead of a male Fluttershy, and that's just wrong.

1905063 Well, I saw some give Fluttershy the nickname "Flutters" want me to change it to "Scotch"?

1905080
Look, don't make any changes on my behalf, I mostly wrote it all as a joke. If you feel you wanna change it, do it, but don't do it because one guy on the internet makes crazy connections in his head.

1905092 Okay, but I did space out the paragraphs, you're right. It does look better.

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Celestia damn it, you work fast.

I'm also hetero, but I got a little hard. Not full on wood, but just a little excitement.

My only real complaint is that you made R63 Applejack into Applebuck. I've always read Applejack as being gender neutral, and Applebuck as R63 Apple Bloom. But you can keep it the way it is if you would prefer.

1904204 Any pairing where Rainbow Blitz is the bitch is my suggestion. Heh, Elusive and Blitz?

Awsome story, can't wait for more.

Do you do any non-Mane Six shippings? Because I would kill for something with Cadence and Shining Armor. Either Crescendo x Shining Armor, Crescendo x Gleaming Shield, or Cadence x Gleaming Shield.

1905386 The more I think of what you say, the more I start to picture Nocturne from League of Legends. I thought it was Prince Solaris and Prince Artemis that were the r63 versions of Celestia and Luna.

Needs some Dusk x Berry for the next chapter.

One other thing, Applejack is stilled called Applejack when r63, due to it being an already androgynous name. No need to to refer to him as Applebuck, which is the r63 for Applebloom anyway.

OKAY for all of you who say it's "APPLEJACK" not "APPLEBUCK" FINE! I'LL CHANGE IT, JUST SHUT UP!

Exclusive and aj

1909059 Yeah, but I just think of Atemis as the name because, well, I think it fits, and Nocturne sounds like it would be the rule 63rd version of Nightmare Moon. Also, I had the story up on a tab for a while before I read it, so that;s how I saw you're comment, and I still feel weird thinking about Prince Solaris with Nocturne from LoL. How would that work?

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That mental image... Celestia standing before the embodiment of nightmares or whatever Nocturn is. Thank you. That made my night.

1913498>>1913439 You have no idea until you have as vivid an imagination as I. I don't think I'm sleeping tonight

Rainbow Blitz thrust into Butterscotch.
"OH! Blitz!" Butterscotch groaned, "Your dick may be smaller, but you use it so well!" With every thrust, Rainbow Blitz felt the pressure in his cock swell up. Butterscotch squeaked with each shove even to the point of hiccups.
"Butterscotch," Blitz laughed, "you really are a wimp." With that, the cyan pony gave one final thrust in Butterscotch's ass and the cyan pony let his load loose.

Rainbow Blitz: The quickest stallion in all of Equestria.

1920522 I said it was my first writing!!!! Give me a break!!!! I think I did pretty bucking well! Besides! What have you written! : )

1921491
I- What? No, I was just cracking a joke! I'm sorry!
It was really good, trust me. Hell, I even liked and added it to my favorites' list!

1922485 I figured you were. The next one is coming along... painfully. It may take two weeks if it has to! I have to make it superior to the previous one. It sucks balls to wait, but the last thing I want to do is release a clopfic that sucks balls.

Uh, then again this is M/M so I guess it's suppose to suck balls?

Wonderful.

1904160
Just gonna say, thank god I'm not the only metro stallion stuffer..... Was worrying me there for a bit....

I'm sorry, but whoever's linking gay shit to me needs to quit it!

2402415 We're everywhere, apparently. I'm not gay for humans but blow a stallion? Why the hell not?
Or preferably a futa mare, I like mares better but horsecock is best genitalia.

3015808 ...I feel kinda in place and outa place at the same time. im gay for both stalions and humans

dis fic
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It's better when blitz is the submissive one.
I have yet see a fic proove me wrong

gotta love butterscotch being huge