Twilight vs the Goodbye
If you like music while reading, this song should set the mood quite easily.
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The bright night sky, lit by the stars and the moon was shining down on Equestria. That did not matter. The wind was merciless and sharp, bringing freezing cold to whoever was in its way. Merely a detail lost in the cause. Ever so regal sat the princess of the sun on her terrace with a face almost void of emotion. Well, except for one small emotion, only visible to those who knew her. It was sadness. That was the only thing that mattered.
Why did everything have to go so wrong? They had the perfect life together here in the castle. Nopony had a say when they were together. Nopony else mattered. That was not completely true, friends and family did matter. But they were all so supportive. For the stuck-up Canterlot ponies, they had given up a long time ago.
But of course the perfect harmony would end, why would it not? After all, chaos was always lurking around the corner. Chaos was literally lurking just around the corner. It was all his fault. Oh so close she’d been to drive a spear straight through his god forsaken skull, but in the end her beloved had managed to stop her.
What exactly had happened? Discord broke free again. What did he do? Nothing less than ruin Twilight’s life once again. Only this time it was even worse. He did not turn his friends against her. He did not spread chaos around the harmonic land of Equestria. No, as his final act of revenge he took away the one thing Twilight cherished beyond her friends and harmony. He took away her mentor.
Celestia was not really gone, but all her memories of Twilight were. After all they had been through, Discord took away all the memories of Twilight. He simply deleted them with a snap of his fingers. Her love no longer knew who she was. No longer did she love Twilight back. Their marriage, their trials and their memories together. All lost to the Alicorn.
It had been three months since the incident. Three months since Discord had ruined her life. And three months of nothing but pain to Twilight. This was why she had decided that it was best to move on. If the princess would never get her memories back, then there was no reason to stay. Staying would only make both of them suffer, in one way or another.
Zebrica was the place Twilight had picked. What better place was there to learn about new mysterious magic? Zecora was going to escort her and make sure she got someplace to live in. After that, she would bury her past. Equestria did no longer feel like her home, but rather the home of all of her misery and pain.
She did not look forward to leaving her friends. They had been such great ponies. All the way they had supported her. They had been a source of happiness for several years and Twilight was proud to have them. But in the end the pain of being so close to Celestia had outdone the urge to be with her friends.
Once again they had been understanding. Even though they did not approve of her moving so far away, they did support her. They had made her promise at least a couple of hundred times that she would keep sending letters every week. It would take a little longer for it to reach them, however, since Spike was not coming along.
That poor baby dragon. Well, it was unfair to call him that. After all, he had grown up to become quite a proud one. All his life Twilight had been taking care of him, but now it was time for him to move on as well. Twilight did not have the heart to bring him with her to such a faraway place as Zebrica, so she had given him the library. She had made sure Rarity would go to check on him every day for the first year, just for the security.
The hardest part was just moments away, though. Saying goodbye to Celestia. Well, it had to end one day, she was just hoping it could at least last a little longer. They had been together for almost two years now, married for a five months. Yes, that’s right. Twilight had married Celestia.
It had been a beautiful day Twilight would never forget. The tears of joy, the magnificent music. All her friends had been there and everyone had brought such wonderful gifts. The smile on her parents’ face when they said their woes. The way Luna could barely sit still, filled with excitement. It had been the most perfect day ever, and that was because she shared it with Celestia.
A tear threatened to escape the lavender mare’s eye. She would have to hold it back, though. She refused to let her princess see her like that the last moment they had together. Stay strong, she told to herself. Not only for your own sake, but for Tia’s. After all, it was her who had suffered the most. It was finally time to stop dwelling on the past and face her.
Twilight took a hesitant step forward, followed by another, courage and willpower running on reserves, but she had to do it. As she got closer to the princess she noticed that her hair did not flow like it usually would, neither did her tail. She was definitely in as much pain as Twilight was. Just before the unicorn reached her destination, Celestia spoke up.
“This place, it means a lot to you?” Celestia asked in her usual calm voice.
“Yeah, it does.” Twilight let out a sigh.
“I wish I could remember. Maybe you could brighten up my memory for a little?” Even though she already knew Tia would not remember, it hurt a lot hearing it from the mare herself.
“It was at this very spot you taught me my very first lesson in magic. Confidence. You thought me that if I believe I can do it, there’s nothing stopping me.” Twilight had to suppress a sniffle at the memory. She was just a little filly, so eager to learn but lacking the confidence. Just one evening with Celestia had turned that. It was one of her dearest memories.
It was the evening after Twilight’s magic exams. The moon was shining bright, though nothing compared to what her sister could do. It felt weird, how long had it been since she had taken in a personal student? At least seven hundred years, if not more. After Luna’s banishment it felt wrong to take in a student, after all who would she compete against?
Celestia and Luna had always taken in a student each, both trying to be the better teacher. And when the student was finally done with her lessons, they would make sure the students taught other everything they knew. That way great minds were always sure to be used for their full potential.
Yes, it did sound like they used the students. But in reality they were just as into it as Celestia and Luna, that was why they had picked them in the first place. And now, there was only a single student. Celestia knew that she was special, but what she would accomplish was still beyond her.
“I couldn’t sleep,” A lavender filly came out of Celestia’s bedroom and joined her on the terrace.
“Why’s that my faithful student?” Celestia was, to be honest, happy she would get some company, it could get very lonely without her sister there.
“What if I’m not good enough to be your student? If it was not for that explosion, I wouldn’t have managed to hatch the egg at all,” Twilight muttered.
“Well then I will just have to teach you. How about we have our first lesson right now?”
“Now?” A pair of wide purple eyes stared at her.
“Yes, right now. The first thing you need to learn while studying with me is to be confident. If you don’t believe you can do anything, you can’t. If you do believe, there’s nothing that can stop you.”
“Do you really think I can do anything?” A smile was starting to form on the filly’s face.
“Yes, I believe so. Now, do you?”
“This is also the spot where I admitted my feelings to you.” She could not help it anymore, tears swelled up in her eyes. It had been one of the scariest days in her life, but also one of the best. Celestia turned to her student, tears filling her eyes as well.
“So why was it you needed to see me Twilight?” Something about Celestia made the question feel so welcoming, like she could never do anything wrong to her.
“We haven’t seen each other in a long time; I just wanted to visit you.” Twilight started.
“I do miss you too, Twilight.” Even though she never mentioned that fact, Celestia knew her student well enough to understand such. “Will you come and sit down with me, maybe we can talk about your findings on the magic of friendship?” This excited the unicorn. If there was one thing she loved talking about it was magic, especially the magic of friendship.
However, Twilight hesitated a little before settling down beside her mentor. After a short while she finally found a comfortable position and settled down. Celestia produced a blanket out of nothing but magic itself. Twilight knew this very well, when she was a little filly Celestia would produce the blanket and leave it up to her to produce some hot chocolate. Twilight did just that.
“Well, I kind of had something I wanted to tell you as well.” Twilight’s voice was reeking with nervousness.
“Go on, you know you can tell me anything.” That calmed Twilight down a little, but this was still one of the hardest things she’d ever tried.
“I-I g-guess I should just say it then. Celestia, I, Twilight Sparkle, think I’m in love with you!” There, she’d done it. Now she just had to wait to wake up on the moon, or deep within the Everfree Forest.
“You have no idea how long I’ve been waiting for you to say that,” Celestia answered and pulled Twilight in for a kiss.
She motioned for Twilight to sit down beside her. The unicorn did not hesitate to obey. She sat down with a hopefully comfortable distance from the princess. She finally let the cold wind get to her and let out a shiver. The winter was coming and Twilight knew it would be so much colder without Celestia by her side.
“You’re cold,” Celestia remarked. “Come here.” She wrapped her wing around Twilight and pulled her close enough for their fur to brush against each other. It was warm and despite all the pain, it was nice. “Maybe you could tell me the story before you leave?”
“It’s an awfully long story.” Twilight’s voice was trembling.
“We’ve got all night,” Celestia replied.
“I guess.” Twilight started telling their story. From the happy memories, that emitted a laugh from both ponies to the darker answered by tears. It was a story worthy of all the emotions they had. After all, even though Celestia did not remember, it was their story.
By the time she was done the moon hung low on the horizon and Celestia was soon ready to raise the sun. The winds still blew, but it did not matter. Celestia was there to give Twilight all the warmth she needed.
“Rarity did say one thing. It’s a stupid thought, though.”
“And what would that be, dear Twilight?”
“In the fairy tales we read when we were smaller, a kiss would always solve the curse. This is no curse, though,” Twilight said, sadness embracing her eyes once more.
“It would be worth the shot.” Celestia turned her head to Twilight. She gave a small smile before leaning in. As the sun graced the horizon their lips met in the most heartwarming gesture, only witnessed by two ponies on the highest points in all of Equestria.
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Now this is an idea that's been lurking in my head since yesterday and I just had to write it out. To me this is a very special thing that I cherish because it's heavily inspired by a scene from my favorite tv show.
I do hope the fic was enjoyable, and I hope I was able to share the same emotions I felt when I watched that scene end my favorite TV show.
Whelp hope it worked out for them in the end.
But it feels like its forced for dramatic effect.
Everyone just giving up, from Twilight on Celestia to Twilights friends on her. I know this isnt a fic about Twilights attempts to fix it but about the sadness, but it was just 3 days. At least you could add some hints or outright mentioned that there were attempts to fix it.
1746253 It just feels like it's too obvious that she would try and fix it, and that would kind of ruin the mood. It also would not fit with the tv show, sorry but that's just how I am :P
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That it could kill the mood i get, but at the same time it makes it feel unbelievable and thats an issue just as well. Maybe just increase it from 3 days to like a months or 3 then?
And for Twilight trying to fix it not fitting with the show?
Why did Twilight then go against Celestias orders and studied about NMM , and went to take on NMM? 
Them trying to fix problems is a big part of the magic of friendship. 
1746293 Okay changed it to 3 months, thanks for the advice, for trying to fix it. It just seems a little obvious, sorry :)
1746287 :3
Well damn......that sucks
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Ill take my leave now so good night, and thanks for the story.
The feels I get from this are almost the exact same feels from when The Doctor said as he faded into gold mist.
"I dont want to go!"
Bravo fair one you have made me cry with mixed feels Both lusciously Optimistic and woefully depressing.
But you allowed me to believe that perhaps that kiss healed Celestias memory. On the flip side it might not have worked and there is nothing that can rebuild such a love that had so cruelly be snatched away by chaos itself.
1746316 Yup, after five years of loving that series I got that ending. And you know what? I LOVED IT!
1746323 Going to bed myself actually. Good night and thank you for sharing your opinion on the fic :3
1746361 I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
....sad Twilight fic?
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1746369 I don't know exactly what to make of this comment. Did you read it or just comment because you don't like the genre?
1746375
I read all the stories on the newest uploads. The story was executed well with no glaring errors, but I HATE sad Twilight. As we all know, Twilight is best pony.
Remind me why some think we should feel sorry for Discord? To wipe someone memory is a fat worse than death, to wipe someone's memory of just their love ones? Damn you Discord, damn you to the deeps pits of the Nine Hells.
I can understand why Twilight would want to leave, but the ending gives me hope that the two may have finally found each other once again. True Love's Kiss, cliche but powerful or at least in my headcanon.
1746367
Truly though tis a bitter draught to guzzle.
Leaving one with a moistened muzzle.
As tears fall unabated.
But hope cannot be gated.
For one kiss may save a life.
Or be the final twist of the knife.
Even when left for ones own mind.
Oft the end is not so kind.
Now though I must dry my eye.
So that nopony sees me cry.
1746385 A sad Twilight is indeed not a good thing, but sometimes you have to see our favorite characters at their worst in order to appriciate them the most :)
1746407 That was my intentions with the ending :3 And now it's up to you what happens next :)
1746419 That's so beautiful, did you just write that? O.o
I just wanted to know if Discord was resealed. If so, shouldn't everything he had done been undone upon his imprisonment?
1746463 Yet another question unanswered, what do you think happened to him?
1746477 I've been on a writing spree lately, been sick so no school the last 3 days. :3
Aw...
Although it was still really awesome.
I thought it was gonna be longer...
It felt too short...
Great job!
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{Yes sir this is no blunder.
You dont have to stare in wonder.
For I have had months of training.
So much it leaves my fingers straining.
A simple ryhme given at the right time.
can make sweet the tart lime.
Tis learned after imitating fair Zecora.
In vain attempts to copy her aura.}
Simply put aye it was. And I taught myself the ryhme scheme so that when I attempt to write characters from the show I can imitate who they are and how they think.
1746430
It is said when all the races of the world came into being the All Father found He only had half the number of souls. Thus He decided that each being would only have half a soul, and the other half belong to another, thus everyone in the world looks for the other half, their soul mate to be complete.
1746504 It is short, but its exactly how I wanted to write it :) I'm glad you enjoyed.
1746508 Ah so the art of rhyming you learn
But the wisdom of Zecora you have yet to earn
I wish you luck on your path of observing
As it's not an easy to comprehend why Piinkie sing
Or Applejacks love for the red and green
That so deliciously might just seem
In the end it's all about the fun of the game
And not about who's got the most fame :)
1746509 I do wish you good luck with that :)
1746518 Ah, but you will always have to make sure not to waste your life trying to find that other part. Sometimes you just have to live life as it's given to you :)
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True, but life is a journey to find them, Yes you might not find them, but that is life. Plus Celestia is over 1000 years old she has all the time in the world to find her's.
1746573 Well she did, and even though the memory was taken away does not the feelings stay? That really depends on the reader. The pain of an open ending :3
1746590
I'm leaning towards the idea that Celestia knows something is missing, something about Twilight. Have you ever read or watched the anime series Tsubasa Chronicles?
1746618 I have not, sorry. Only seen Death Note within the realm of anime.
I loled.
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Well I won't bore you with the details (you should try to watch anyway) but kind of deals with the same situation, the female lead get her memories wiped of the male lead who loves her (ok it's a bit more complicated in regards to her memories). In one case she remembers having dinner with her brother, and the male lead but all she can remember of the male lead is an empty chair.
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But to give anything less than perfection is an insult to the reader.
I will not trail them like a fish upon a leader.
To create essence of the pony.
instead of making just a phony.
To breath life into my 'fillies'
(forgive me if I sound silly)
Is the one thing that I aspire to most.
So that my paper may become the host,
for a world wholly unseen
to be put in media other than just a screen.
Even if I must plead with Lauren Faust
this is worth any cost.
Self worth, pride are all just masks
that distract us from our one true task.
Fame was never something I sought.
Money,power never gave them a thought.
Just to be the mouthpiece of Acceptance and love.
allows me to feel raised above,
the dirt and grime of a world most foul.
so that I dont have to hide my shame under a cowl.
Instead I wish to sing on high
so that all may know how it feels to fly.
1746518
That good sir is a beautiful thing.
1746636 May I ask what you found so funny?
1746648 I might just watch it someday
1746658 I would love to keep rhyming, but it's late and I'm gonna read some before going to bed :) You do make excellent rhymes however and you should keep up with that :3
1746680
Goodnight Kind friend, you gave me a merry chase.
tis been ages since my ive felt my heart race.
Mayhaps on a later date we may try again.
For I find you to be a very worthy friend.
1746678
Came up with it as I put together Equestria's religious beliefs. I thought "you know these romance fics always mention 'the other half of my soul' so I thought why not make that literal"
1746680
If you can find it it's worth it
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Sigh But we all know that all things are born with half a soul. Slowly we kid oursleves that we dont need anyone else to make our lives even more than what it already is But some of us seek the missing piece in our lives until we collapse. Tis a hard life not being complete without the love of another
Good sir, I adored this. You even had me choked up in the middle, something that's relatively hard to accomplish. You could really work on the ending, though. I was genuinely surprised when I reached the end, since you had the perfect opportunity to expand on Celestia's memories being taken. Nonetheless, I enjoyed it and it deserves its favorite.
1746825 It's all explained by the video I left in a comment earlier :)
I sit in the place, were you use to call my name
I sit in the place, were I can recall your face
I sit in the place, were you held me in your embrace
I sit in this place, held down by my own chains
You forgot who I was, forgot what I meant
Forgot all the nights, together we spent
Forgot all the words, of love I had said
Forgot all the roads, our friendship had tread
I look to the sky, filled with teary eyes
Remembering the day, our love was compromised
Remembering the way, you'd hold me when I cried
But your memories are gone, your love for me, died
I remember that day, it lingers in my mind
Reminding me that your love, I'll no longer find
So I will sit here, until the end of time
Waiting for you to remember your mine
But if by chance you can no longer see
Anything that you'll remember of me
I will not fear, for I can still dream
Though I'm a stranger, I'm here if you need
Here's were I answered your beckon and call
This is the place, in which I bared it all
This is the place were your smile made me fall
I sit here and think, for I can no longer walk
As I sit here and cry, I do not feel shame
For they're only one emotion, that I know remains
The only emotion for me, is the blame
If it wasn't for me, it would not be this way
But I still remember the touch of your lips
The day they met mine, and we both shared a kiss
That day was the day that, I fell into bliss
Although your love, I know I shall miss
I am still yours, even if your not mine
Although I am sad, I'll admit I am fine
So do not feel scared, if you see me cry
I am merrily remembering a happier time
A time I am sure that you'll no longer miss
A time when I cried that it ended like this
Despite all these chains I still sit here in bliss
Because our memory of love was sealed by a kiss
wrote this in 20 mins i love wrting poetry and your fan fiction inspired me to write this so this is for you good sir
1746859 That's amazing, keep up the work. I'm also very honored I inspired such a great poem :)
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True but that is life, Free Will lets us do that.
As the artist of this picture, I'm a bit irritated that it's appearing places with my signature removed.
Please source it accordingly: http://sagebrushpony.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d3g2wku
What?! What do you mean by marriage?
1746859
Nice poem, it touched my heart. You are really talented!
Where was I? Oh ya,
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1746489 I have no idea, that's why I asked. I don't see Discord as the type to go into hiding or stopping after ONE prank.
1747319 Thanks but thank the writing of the fic he inspired it but it's nice to know my work is aprrecatied
I've got no witty poem or such to say about this, but I do say one thing:
Good job for a one-chapter. 
It's healthy to type in what I'm thinking at the moment, and I'm sure you would love another of your reader's opinion.
Reason being that you could have put lots of more pressure on the reader. But I like that you kept it nice and simple, agh my brain... 
First thing's first, one of the most original ideas I ever heard of.
I mean, at least by my standards, this is my first "element of harmony loses her memory" fic.
It's nicely well written and I couldn't cut this story off no matter how short it was.
I wanted to get an idea of how you pictured this situation and how you can execute it and make a very nice smoothly written fanfic.
Not necessarily to start tearing up or anything amazing like that, as a story for that either needs build up, or just longer in general.
I felt like the ending would have negative feedback from most people, but I can let this world be liven with unforgettable suspense, as I can respect where you are coming from with the ending. Not that I know your life stories or anything.
I feel like the only bad thing is about this story is how Twilight's friends feelings didn't play a huge part, as I felt like they could have been more mad and less supportive.
I can get a sense of relief and a good touch as I move on knowing I'll never know what will happen next, which is weird to me.
When I read stories that leave the end to discussion, it usually leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
But I'm starting to coop and deal with stories that have these effects at the end, and starting to embrace them.
Out of all the fanfics I read so far, I learn to accept the world of which the reader puts the world of my little pony in, and makes a different interpretation in.
I can care less about the whole "it's not real thing" cause I'm automatically put in the reader's world, such like yours.
Sorry for the rambling there, but your story really made me click, logic wise.
Thank you so much for having me learn lessons you probably did not intend. I like to sit back and see what I learned from the story and type my thoughts as they still linger.
All in all, great story you have written! I loved it! you get a nice 4.1/5.
loved the story too bad twi couldn't save her relationship with Celestia.
Or did she