I think my brain just exploded out my ears from all the lulz... and this was the safe version? I shudder to think of the Unshorn fetlocks version

HOLY HABEBIT! I dun....what just...... my brain

I couldn't stop laughing Must read other version.

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Okey dokie Loki!

NSFW

Sorry, Midnight. I could not resist.

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Jolly good fun!

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OH U

...but I've set the whole thing mature now. No big loss, it's been on EqD :)

"EDIT: Since it's linked in comments, I'm marking this mature."

...

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yes, well, I marked the story teen and had the applebloom safe version on view. The unshorn fetlocks version on gdocs is inaccessible, but for those in the know there is a certain website where a pastebin version has been kept for posterity by the internet at large.

since that version has been linked, I've now put the story as mature rather than delete the comments.

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What can I say? I'm a fan.

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Yes, it's the same one, uploaded directly from the google doc and could do with a few fixes.

Leapt and leaped are both legal variations of the word - I think - leapt is quite probably British English, but maybe not. On the other hand, I've been using 'leaped' most of the time lately.

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Ah, you're right.
Leapt just sounds better to my ear.

"The unshorn fetlocks version on gdocs is inaccessible, but for those in the know there is a certain website where a pastebin version has been kept for posterity by the internet at large."
Isn't that a bit cryptic to necessitate a mature rating?
Or am I just too blind too find the actual link?

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it's in these very comments, a bit further up.

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Link time! ... again!

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http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/228/7/d/twilight_sparkle_no_colored_by_ricerodriguez-d46ryc1.png

Oh wow, this was just too funny...

and the train to pony hell keeps going faster and faster

i feel like a 12 year old again, laughing that hard at a fart joke. lol

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“Oohh my head...that is the last time I drink. Ever.”

I just want 1€ for every time I've heard or said that!

I reviewed your story this evening you can find it here