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... all this chapter did was make me dislike Rarity even more. Not that this was a bad chapter in any way, but I just find myself disliking her more and more.
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Well, yeah, but remember that she has just lost two relationships to her own stupidity, and then had a past relationship she lost rubbed into her face.
She's a jerk, but I can understand why.
Not that that excuses her behaviour, mind you.
Cliffhanger the Movie 2: Return of The Cliffhanger
Aaaand... someone comes up with a logical reason why RariSpike can't happen (other than the hundred year nap).
RariDash.... hmmm that's a new one.
I wonder why Twi's dreams keep turning to Luna...
Keep up the good work.I look forward to seeing the Library
well, been a while, new job and all that jazz about having less time to do stuff. but its a sunday so lets seeeeee..
So Rarity. I'm not really buying that Rarity was manipulated. at least she wasn't in anyway that I could see. Maybe just in the sense that while Regal kinda sorta practiced what he preached, he was doing it to try and off Celestia. I didn't really see any indication that Rarity was singled out and manipulated. All her actions were her own. So I'm not really totally sympathetic to her all that much.
Digging that the Twiluna went public. It'll be interesting cause its just gonna be Luna's problem and we might only see the aftermath/get the remnants of it. which is sad, cause I think I'd be amused to see that all go down.
Also liking the world building. Its always fun. In fact, mentally, this chapter is gonna be titled, "The World Building" chapter. Because it is. Surprised you went with a quarter breed pegasus dude griffin thing. Now that I think about it, haven't really heard of any fics with one of them in it. but I've not read a bunch due to my picky shipping rules.
and no trip into griffin territories is complete without some mention of Gilda, of course. I'm not totally recalling what interactions Gilda had with Rarity, given that it was mostly Dash, Pinkie and Flutters that interacted with her, but whatever.
In all, this chapter feels fairly transitiony, because it really is a transition chapter.
and so the descent into hell begins...
Good chapter, Bran's interest in magic made me chuckle. I thought it would have been interesting to see Twilights job revealed to him at the end of the journey. Surely they would have talked on the journey and I don't see Twilight trying to keep her job secret.
Looking forward to the next chapter although I really can't see why Rarity should be as mad as she is with Gilda seeing as it does not seem she forced Rainbow into something with her and given her own mistakes I really think Rarity should shut her trap on the matter.
This was a wonderful chapter, I love the letters that Twi send to Luna giving details into their surroundings and I have a feeling that Twi's Elemental magic will kick into overdrive once she enters the standstorm, keep up the good work!
awesome chapter, as always!
For my part, I do think Rarity must have been magically manipulated, possibly by some version of the empathy spell from the journal. Losing intrest in her fashion work and neglecting her lover in favor of an arrogant Blueblood type both seem terribly OOC otherwise.
Wow, loved the chapter. Becoming re-hooked on this story, now and loving finally having answers to all of these questions xD Still so many left unanswered but we'll see later one, I guess!
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We all know how Rarity can work, and this seems completely in character for her xD At least to me, this is the only way I see her acting about it.
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Dream intruder, Princess Luna!
I loved this chapter, exited for more
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i know of 1 fic that features half pony half gryphon offspring, it is with Vinyl Scratch and an OC gryphon.
but i'd have to dig for the name of it
Please please please don't kill Rarity or Twilight.
Wow, that was a fast update.
Cliffhangers, always the cliffhangers!
Awesome way to have people come back though. Truly awesome.
Now to wait for the next chapter, can't wait! Oh I enjoy this story more than I enjoyed Digital Fortress (book by Dan Brown)
And I enjoyed that a LOT!
great chapter! nice to get a little insight into rarity's time with regal, im still not entirely convinced she isn't some kind of sleeper, the whole regal thing solved itself too smoothly, i guess we'll see how everything turns out.
soooo, twilight still have elemental magic left to learn then? i had forgotten about that.
2496554 I agree, but please; fix your grammar.
2497091 but do you know who is certainly OOC Rainbow. She was what I would assume was dating Rarity and was not loyal to her.
One of Rarities best friends,
Her lover,
A traitor.
Personally I think Rarity is misguided in her anger, angry at the wrong things rather than shouldn't be angry with Gilda at all.
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Gilda did say it was mostly her fault for not knowing, but I do see that problem as well..
2497459 I would be more concerned if Gilda knew about their relationship. It was Rainbows job to tell Gilda, Rainbows job to turn her down and Rainbows job to be faithful not just to Rarity but to herself. She should have told Rarity if she was feeling unsure about something in their relationship rather than abuse the trust given to her by Rarity.
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Yeah, I guess. Alright, I assume you win.
Commence read.
Hm. Some interesting information.
Great chapter. I particularly enjoyed the letters she wroth to Luna.
Uhm, wasn't Twilight a pretty damn powerful Archmage? Why take public transport? I'm sure at least a part of their trip would have been far easier teleporting all over the place (but would make the story less interesting). I'm sure there's a trope for this.
Also sending letters by snail mail? Archmage plz.
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Yes, this is a current definition of the word, completely ignoring common use and all types of slang, despite the fact that using 'swag' to refer to someone being overtly self-confident has been in use for more than a century. Your point?
Great chapter. Rarity still seems a bit douche-y, but I'm starting to feel bad for her. Hopefully she manages redeems herself... in a manner that doesn't mark the end of her life within the maelstrom or library. Somehow I found Gilda to be more sympathetic than Rarity, even though she was the other mare- woma- gryphon in the past. Possibly because we weren't treated to the sight of her being a bitch firsthoof, but there it is.
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In reference to the previous comment:
"I was handling the return of my sister at the time..."
Return.
Meaning Celestia hasn't been busy for 1003 years. She's merely been busy for 2. And one of the chief reasons Celestia doesn't do much is because it's canon. If Celestia intervened at the end of every episode of the show, how much do you think Twilight and her friends really would have learned? It's just that Twilight has graduated from handling parasprites and rodeos and silly trivial problems to handling the problems of Equestria. I assure you, Celestia is not idle in her work.
In reference to this comment (And the next):
I'd be spoiling a lot if I told you why Celestia and Luna aren't helping Twilight, but I can say it's a matter of prophecy (And the fallout of any failed ones.)
It seems like instead of enjoying the character's development and the world building I've spent a lot of time and energy on, you'd rather focus on every little nitpicky detail. Please, if you're going to do nothing but rag on my story every single chapter I upload, find a new place to do it. Or don't read. Either way, it's rather upsetting to come to the comments section of my magnum opus and read your ill-composed, grammatically unsound, inflammatory essays on my failings as an author.
Please, if you have negative comments on my story, send them to me in a private message. That way I don't have to worry about other readers being turned away by your ignorance.
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I get it. It's an issue. One that we've had trouble with, and will likely continue to have trouble with. In the later chapters, I tend to pay more attention to those details.
You needn't leave a comment every chapter, thank you.
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Which it did! Hooray!
Omg dat cliffhanger
in other news, great chapter. I liked the return of Gilda. Apparently I'd forgotten that spike had gone on his 100 year rest. Anyway, hope to see more soon!
Huzzah for an update the day after I caught up! Tis a good story.
That last bit of the story... "It was her destiny."
...Not ominous at all, not considering that book Luna and Celestia read, huh?
I have a baaaaad feeling about what comes next.
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You make the same mistake every damn chapter. Its annoying. See?
You updated too fast, and I only just finished the last chapter too?! Give me a moment to catch my breath, you'll get your song next time.
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Given that this is part 1 of 2, I wouldn't expect you to give me one anyways XD
Right. send the world biggest nerd and bookophile into a library with lost knowledge and expect her to return.....
Nope nothing will go wrong, not one single bit
But other then that: nice chapter =]
Bahhhh, of course this gets posted on the one day I don't check it. I gotta say though, the whole R/Rd thing was more than a bit unexpected. Not that I haven't seen that pairing work (marvelously at that) before, but they're just polar opposites. Keep that brain train of yours a-chugging along!
On a completely different subject, what do you think of Lissandra and the Trundle/Sejuani reworks, Loyal?
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I'm more excited for Leavebuster in ARAM. The re-rolling system seems like it'll help balance it out, and you won't have to deal with leavers ruining the damn queue. It seems like Riot is finally expanding (During custom games, you can see a map of the world. Each section of the map is devoted to one of the modes. Crystal Scar, Summoners Rift, Twisted Treeline, and The Proving Grounds.) Now that the new map is coming out, it seems like there's a fair bit of the story that Riot's getting into. I'm incredibly excited for all the new changes :D
Thar be a shit storm abrewin
and then by the odds out of millions, Daring Do and the temple of nolagge came out, with a incredible near death scene, where two unicorns come to the rescue
eat that rainbow!
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Stand back, everyone...
I think it's trying to communicate.
2510667 If it's non-repeating, as Pi is, then yes, eventually it has to make every combination. I don't think you realize just how big infinity is.
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yeah... lets make fun of the guy with dyslexia
it's not my first language.
i'm dutch, can you blame me for my bad writing?
...
i think you can... but that aside
i try as hard i can and if you want to make fun of me you''ll need to try harder to have a impact on me tough...
still love your story
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And he doesn't know where the shift key is!
In all seriousness, if you're really Dutch AND dyslexic, you're doing admirably well...
I'm getting the feeling that Rarity and Gilda are going to become a thing. That would actually be interesting, I approve of this ship.
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You wouldn't happen to go by the name, "Jeff of Darkness" sometimes would you?
2511601 Oh loyal, your such an ass. It's one of your most endearing qualities.
In all seriousness, I approve of the SSGildaxRarity.
Once more unto the breach...
I love the humorous bits and relationship quarrels mixed in with the epic fantasy.