This was awesome!!!

Maybe a chapter with Celestia or a teacher for the next ?

5570025 Thanks :3
Trying my best to supply the fandom with equine/female gloryholes and deepthroating. Being the only person to write it on the site is a little pressure I guess xD Does help that I invented it hehe :P

5571007 Atm, got no ideas for the next chapter, but think it might get one sometime :P

This seems similar to Working the Stall...

New chapter!!! <3 that zebra was so hot holy shit! New favorite story. Please tell me you have a new chapter planned and this story won't die <3

5576494 Simply because it contains glory holes? Despite the fact they're using human ones, and I'm using equine ones? Atop being the only person to ever use them? (Along having invented/revised them granted, but that's beside the point xD)
Heck, can't recall when I last checked, but pretty sure this fic might have been written before that one even. My second fic with Shining however, is more similar to WtS. Granted, more over the top (and again, has equine glory holes, not human) than WtS, but it was made to serve as a counterpart to it, as Marshal can't do one. Or rather; have lost interest in the glory hole theme as a whole.

But yeah, there's barley anything relate-able between the two aside from Twilight being the main char. Approach and personality are greatly different. Along with performance and structure. It's bit like claiming Neverwinter and EVE as similar, just cuz both are MMO's.
Glorious Adultery is a bit similar to it, but has different concept, and is more over the top. But it does share the main character wanting to be a cumdump.

5578774 Atm, don't got much of anything planned. But this fic is kinda easy to jump in and out off. So new chapters are likely, but might can take quite a while.

Yay, another great chapter I especially liked the tribbing/female creampie. I suppose it would probably feel better physically to have something to grip on, but mentally it's just so much sexier to try and fill up a vagina despite not having a way to penetrate it

Twilight getting her horn and upper jaw into a vagina at the same time seems sort of... impossible, but otherwise the zebra scene was great as well.

IMO, Celestia should definitely be the grand finale of this story. Not anonymously, but a direct propositioning by Twilight after realizing that Celestia may not get satisfied very often because she's so intimidating. It would give a sort of higher purpose to the whole experience of Twilight's sexual studies

Also, there are a couple of pictures by Neko-me that are probably about what it would look like, since the description of the ginormous zebra vulva reminded me much of them already. Images 847614 and 847615 on Derpibooru.

5731678 Thanks :P And well, just grinding feels good enough to me ;P But yeah, it's a neat mental aspect ;3

Upper jaw (or lower) is somewhat easy. And it was explained how she got the horn in xP Possibly a little clunky, but eh x3
I never write (for the lolz fics not included xD) things that can't be done. I've studied female deepthroating, boh human and equine versions ever since I created it ;P It's possible, but limited and a bit tricky to perform. But toss some magic in, and it's a piece of cake ;D

And hum, it would technically be a fitting ending. Not 100 on how I'd introduce it, if/when I get back to writing. Can say the though of Twi DT-ing her clit is rather arousing though xD Would kinda break from the glory hole concept it's based around but :P

And I know of them. And she's just big, not disproportionate hehe x3 Though those pics are neat though. But yeah, huge clits are actually a thing for equines. Granted, it's hormonal imbalance, but I was aiming somewhere in between ;P

I gotta admit, I like Vinyl snagging all the 'firsts'. It's a trend I'd like to see continued

6010044 That's a trend? Or something you'd like to see as one? xP

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Well not so much a trend but its happened here. Wouldn't mind it being one though

6018476 Could be interesting, Gummy know's pony porn, and porn overall desperately needs more variety xD

6432739 The G-spot is actually listed as "the female prostate" :P
It was just named after Graphenhiemer... or whatever he was called, as he was the one to first find it. It produces the same fluid as the male prostate and whatnot.
That said, on a side note: I'm still kinda derp they haven't correct the term "vagina" yet in US sex ed. They still have a vagina in the vagina xD While Swe has corrected "hymen", that was because the translation of it meant the incorrect thing now that we know it's a defect that cause it to bleed. But I guess even if it doesn't need a name change in the US, they still teach the defunct version as the "normal" one?

This was good one, and i'm certainly into gloryholes thingy now, thought
Hope you will be back to this

This story is so hot. I hope you'll eventually keep on going. <3

6534383 Thanks :3
It's been partially visualized into a comic by Neko-Me on a side note ;P
And yeah, was fun imo to invent the equine glory hole x3 Think it's a bit silly how it took so long though xP Along with how so many was all "how would that work?" when they had no idea using male ponies in human glory holes xD
And hm... it's a bit doubtful, but it is one of my more favorite works tbh...

6537256 Thanks, and like said above: Bit doubtful, but it's not impossible. I do really like the concept of it :3
I did do the first equine glory hole story... feels a bit shame to cut it short tbh... especially as don't know if anyone else but me has even written any... though it feels like at least someone ought to have xP

Congratulations on your story!
Wait.
No, that was the description. Sorry, I got confused by that clusterfuck of absolute uselessness.
My bad.
~TOOWC

7268737 It is a bit of a mess :P
Still beats all those that lie about or leave out the content of their stories on purpose, and just tell people to "just read it", then bitch about people giving them negative reviews due to them claiming a mindless gay, hyper dick story is a lesbian romance fic because "Hey, those characters are ORIGINALLY female. That means I can still tag them as such even if I genderswap one or both!".
And it's understandable if you're jealous over that I was the one that invented the equine glory hole genre~

And oh, what a not surprise: You're part of FiMFictions very own futa fanatics hate group. Going around bashing stories that have true femdom, or that aren't all about cock worship, and how every other story HAS to have a guy with tits in it

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It is a bit of a mess :P

No. It is a lot of a mess. That description is longer than most people's attention spans, which is why- despite being on the site for two years- your story only has 2,531 views.

Still beats all those that lie about or leave out the content of their stories on purpose, and just tell people to "just read it", then bitch about people giving them negative reviews due to them claiming a mindless gay, hyper dick story is a lesbian romance fic because "Hey, those characters are ORIGINALLY female. That means I can still tag them as such even if I genderswap one or both!".

After struggling to read this mess for a few minutes, I've deduced that you don't think futa characters should be female. Congratulations! That's an opinion, you idiot, not a fact. Neither, though, is the idea that futas are female. People- and ponies- can be whichever gender they identify as.

And it's understandable if you're jealous over that I was the one that invented the equine glory hole genre~

When the fuck did I give you that idea? Don't put bullshit words in your comment just to bloat it out and make yourself seem better than everyone else. Someone smarter usually comes along and laughs at you for your stupid attempt. Luckily for you, someone doesn't have to- I did.

And oh, what a not surprise: You're part of FiMFictions very own futa fanatics hate group. Going around bashing stories that have true femdom, or that aren't all about cock worship, and how every other story HAS to have a guy with tits in it

I'll have you know that I love femdom. And cock worship, yes. Boys with tits, though? Nah. Give me a girl with a dick anyday. Just ask my own girlfriend- a MtF Trans woman. Oh sorry, I hit a sour note there. A girlfriend is something you'll never have with your idiotic attitude.

Good talk.

7274023 Not blatantly, and immediately promising a bunch of hyper cocks also has a lot to do with it.
But yes, it somehow ended up a jumbled mess. Not entirely sure how it ended up like that to begin with, but ah well. Can't fix things in post~ Which is a shame, as, as the first and largest equine glory hole fic. It could honestly have done with a lot better presentation.

Most futa characters are just glorified "guys with tits" archetypes. That's a fact. You, and others pretending or wishing they aren't, is just a preference or delusional ignorance. A futa CAN be female. But few even attempt to pretend to be. They just slap on a "no homo!" and dash off. Relying on the rest of the bunch to being too thick to question it.
When it comes to tagging however. They are each their own separate thing. For a reason. Even if your character see's themselves as x, you can't tag them as such in search. Unless it actually correlates with what they are physiologically. Much like you can't ex: Tag Twilight as a female equine, if you made her into a dragon, then genderbent her because "hey, she's normally a female horse!". A simpler example is EQG. You don't tag EQG Twilight as "alicorn", "unicorn" or "equine". (at most if you also include a "transformation" or whatever. But point being: Tags are there for a reason. But if you're too stupid to understand why if someone searching for ex: "equine Fluttershy female" might want to actually find a Fluttershy that's both equine AND female. Then I can't enlighten you on that matter.

Well, you crawl out of no-where, and have a hissy fit for no justified reason whatsoever. And then, as predicted spout some shit about how this isn't as popular as half-assed, generic sell-out stories to try and further slander it as you are incapable to attack me on a intellectual level. It's quite obvious that you are butthurt about something.

That would define a boy with tits. Just because you call a dude a girl, doesn't make it true.
I most context, "cock worship" and "femdom" doesn't work in conjunction. 95+ % of all porn with both those tags are just blatant fakes.
"chick with cock" DOES exist. But they're almost NEVER portrayed properly in porn. (same with femdom, most of it is just a fake porn dominatrix, which is as much femdom as titjobs are a gay male exclusive fetish.) Just slapping a female body to a dick doesn't just automatically make it female be default.
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If you only response would be either "Because!" or "Otherwise it would be gay!" to "why does x identify as female?", chances are that is a "guy with tits" archetype. They're generally hyper, they have the classic male porn star personality. And everything is just about their dick. That's 3 of the most telltale signs of a "guy with tits" archetype tropes.
And a bit of a sour note yes. You're being a dick to insult transgender people by pretending to have one as a partner. Along with slandering them by seeming to endorse the notion that anything with breasts HAS to be referred to female pronouns. Like has been said by several of the bigoted popfurs, such as thehorsesays. Heck, even that lazy fuck BlackguyJr admits that all of his futa are "dudes". As he needs to have at least one "guy" in each porn he makes to have interest. Plus, he cba to create an actual female model, or find more than one set of voices, so he just crams both into one.
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I actually had a intelligent discussion with someone that wrote a genderswapped Chrysalis story. Can't recall the authors name, but can prolly find them. Was pretty specific story. Chrys used his dick to rape the three sirens and shit.
After some back and forth, he realized that "oh shit, I made Chrys a guy!" while he was originally supposed to be a true herm. But any sign of that, was in the authors head. So any proof of that, hadn't been written out. So all the story currently had, was a 100 % male Chrysalis. They supposedly fixed that in post, by releasing more chapters, and attempted to flesh out that Chrys identified as both. Though, if I recall, their first draft just seemed to make it like if Chrys had split personality of one selfish, dominant male side, and a submissive female side. That swapped depending what genital they manifested. Never looked up if they managed to solve that tbh... but either case. All trans people, and non-fanatic futa fans I know find the most commonly used futa archetype to be utterly retarded, insulting and not in the slightest bit female. (aside from physically at a first glance.) And the fans in particular, find it humerus how most fanatics point out they claim they love femdom, but how they are repulsed by female genitalia or reading about a female being in focus.

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First? Yes, you can fox things in post. Idiot.
Second?

And a bit of a sour note yes. You're being a dick to insult transgender people by pretending to have one as a partner. Along with slandering them by seeming to endorse the notion that anything with breasts HAS to be referred to female pronouns.

Fuck you. Why the hell would I make that up? In fact, we've been in a committed relationship for over a year.

And yes, she. Right now you're the one being an asshole, because that's the pronoun she wants. MtF means Male to Female, you fucking moron. That means that she is currently in the process of having her body match what she feels is right. Don't even fucking pretend you know what you're talking about.

Third,

A futa CAN be female. But few even attempt to pretend to be. They just slap on a "no homo!" and dash off.

Congratulations. You've just assumed that nearly every single person to make a futa character is straight.
Gods, you're such a fucking brain-dead asshole.

7285275 are you legitimately retarded or just very good at pretending

7288123 Coming from people that use contradictions, and treat said contradictions as a legit arguments. Atop proudly boast being in hate groups that slander minorities and/or people that doesn't share their opinion, then act as if they are doing a moral thing... yeah, I'm the one in need of help in that situation.

I'm not the one that toss a hissy fit when my preferences doesn't line up with facts.
Or attacks the whistle blower when a hack/scandal is revealed.
Your kind are just so far up your own asses backwards that you literally can't see anything outside of your small, narrow minded bubbles. You claim to stand for something, but you only pick and chose what you guys actually support. Then sweep the rest under the rug, pretending it doesn't exist. You people make me sick with your utter contempt and disregard for trans, females and literally anyone that isn't you, or directly negatively affect you. Giving 0 fucks about them, yet demanding that they all respect you.

7289858 Haha, alright, you see how far this way of thinking gets you in life.

Having read all the comments, what really fucking gets me is that you think you're so progressive that you've actually gone full circle and ended up presenting some of the most sexist bullshit I've ever read.

There is no one right way to write characters of a certain gender. If the character claims they're a certain gender, they're that gender. Just like in real life. You seem to make a hobby out of getting massively offended and then dwelling in a false state of moral superiority when you tell off anyone who disagrees with you.

And then you have the gall to call those folks who came before me close minded.

Thanks for the laughs, I needed them.

7290276 Tsk tsk. Your kind never cease to amaze me. Purely self-righteous and ignorant up the ass. Your mental capacity is about as far as "Löl. ofc god is real. My holy book says so. How can you be so stupid you don't know that? I am 108 % sure I was born into the one true religion out of the 8000 out there!" and then you just keep on going acting as as we're the stupid ones. While you up and at outright contradict yourself by pointing at others that use the exact same argument, and poking fun at how stupid that argument is, along how many holes it has. But ofc, none of those faults apply to when you use it. You close minded bigots also pull the same bs. Bullying others, then victimizing yourselves because people have the audacity to point out that you're being pricks. Like, how DARE they take away your rights to subjugate others and force your views onto them.

And glad you mention that. About to take that to the test with the futa fanatics and their little hate group. Something tells me that the "if a character claims they're a certain gender, they are" suddenly will get a "Oh, that doesn't count!" or "that's different!" if the roles are switched. Like has been demonstrated, and proven in picture form, by animation, just the same as the genital focus and gender norms were proven by me in fics.

I can't help sexist, arrogant morons as yourself. Nor do I really care at this point. If the best you can do is go "höhö... have a look at this guy. Doesn't even think the world is flat, what a moron! Thanks for the lol's".

have you thought about continuing this any?

8185570 I have. Just utterly fizzled in where to go with it.
Kinda lost my writing spark.

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That's a shame, it took a bit to get used to the concept for me but was hooked by the last chapter.

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Amusingly, the concept makes alot of sense taking the MLP anatomy into account.
While using human glory holes don't make much sense, yet people just roll with it xP
But yeah, aside from the comic this is based on, I haven't really done much else. I did make a small animation of the concept. But haven't done any more writing.

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I'm not sure if there's gonna be one, sorry.
I've kinda fizzled when it comes to writing.

As said, I've had a comic and a small animation done about the concept. But I haven't really done anything else in that genre, pony wise.

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so is this on hiatus or canceled?

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Somewhere in between I think.
I don't plan to get back into writing anytime soon tbh. But, it's not impossible that I'd pick it up again.

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I've left the MLP fandom due to being a toxic shitshow. (I still have some mlp gloryhole pics from back in the day.)
I still write stories, including gloryhole ones. But with other franchises. Just not MLP.

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No, just straight up other franchises. Like She-Ra, Teen Titans, Freedom Planet, etc.
Closest to "MLP" would be that time I wrote a centaur.

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That's fair. I didn't really go around and wrap shit up once I left the fandom.

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Just AO3 https://archiveofourown.org/users/Kattlarv

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Cheers.
It's mostly similar work to here. Just not ponies... and generally more "dark".

Welp, this was amazing! Don't know if you're ever gonna continue this story, but you have definitely earned a follow from this one alone.

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Highly unlikely. I've moved onto other fandoms. The MLP one turned far too hateful and toxic in its endorsement of criminals.
I do check in on here every other week or so in case of comments. But, I've moved onto AO3.
But thanks for the compliment~

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"Endorsement of criminals"
... what

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In short: Until 2019, 100 % of MLP porn packs were fraudulent, scams or falsely advertised in some way.
The fandom in general held a "fraud is a business model" mindset, and blamed victims for getting ripped off.
Someone did a kickstarter and ran off with all the money? That's your own fault.

Did you expose someone stealing other people's art and selling it? Well, then you're an asshole for harming that persons income.
Sites like E621 and Derpibooru protected criminals, and actively also encouraged people to offer them bribes to sweep things under the rug.
If you were a criminal in any way in the MLP fandom, you got the VIP treatment. (Unless you scammed famous people.)