This is a story about a young man who has a terrible life and he has no one to go to for help. All he can do is go through a daily routine. Wake up, eat, walk to work, work, walk home, and sleep. He has been doing that since he was only eighteen. Now he's twenty and an accident happens where he works. He then ends up going to equestria where at first he was afraid for his life. But when one pony helps him recover he grows fond of her and realizes that the new world and life wont be as hard as he thought they would.
A HiE in fic done for my friend "Bronyboy777" who wants me to do a fic with him and Rainbow dash and MIGHT be a clopfic just wait and see.
Teen for mild language and some blood. Enjoy!
The Picture was done by a close friend who has been doing pics for me lately named Dr.Techno and here is his Deviant art Profile. Here
I love it
old guy liveing a boring
*living
that wasn't even clean at all.
I suggest rewording this
some old worn out clothing. Long worn out jeans, worn out sweat shirt and shoes. They would have some old worn out
You use 'worn' too many times
protective helmeat
*helmet
That surprised me sence I would
* That surprised me, since I would
by amazeing pain. With alot of effort
*amazing *a lot
usualy
*usually
left had
*hand
makeing
*making
preticular
*particular
*Equestria * pegasi *Twilight *talk, but I
*Earth *eachother *Rainbow *Twilight
*Twilight, you're not asking him any questions *Egghead *Equestria *Sparkle *Celestia
alot
*a lot
distaint
*distant
ALOT
*A LOT
need a proofreader?
MOAR!
MOAR NOA!
please 
Romance? What romance? Did you are planning to pair him with some of the main six? Witch one…Oh I now…Rarity? Shy?…Gilda?
Nice job
yes cant wait to find out what happens and now i wana kill dash' parents.
1630055 seconded
this story has an interesting concept, and while it isn't quite as rushed a the last chapter, it still feels rather rushed. not to mention the over abundance of grammar mistakes. do you have a proofreader? if not you are (and i say this in the nicest way it could possibly be said) in desperate need of one
~Dream Weaver
For the crimes of child abuse against rainbow dash element of loyalty i here by banish you both from equestria/or/death by stoning which one would be better?
1681531 Oh I have a plan for the future just wait and see my friend.
thts supposed to be an evil smile
You should have done
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Must update!!!!... This story is awesome so so far :D
Uh oh
Oh how a fic just died in my eyes with Rarity's confession
Wtf man who just knocked him out john kicked some major butt yeah the pace is picking up nicely.
I will be honest in that if you really did kill off Rainbow Dash then my interest is dead as well.
I'm ok with these kinds of things if there is a good buildup to the death, but with this it goes from "everything is fine" to "major character dies" and I hate when stories do that.
I will continue reading to see what you do next, but i'm unsure how much longer that will last.
MORE FASTER!! lol hehe good chapter tho :)
Omg yes more please <3
Some sh*t is about to go down
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update?