After Repliku accepted death at Castle Oblivion, he finds himself strangely alive in the Everfree forest. What will become of him? Will he ever return to Namine? Will Zexion annoy him to death now that he's Repliku's new conscience?
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I'm honestly surprized no one's thought of this yet.
hmmm...
Zeccora for the win!!!
HOLD UP CH.1
Second damn line...
Not even going to point it out
There's more mistakes
Hopfully him showing himself means that Twilight will be able to help him move around without a pony illusion.
This is getting good.
1912438 I'll get to fixing the spelling, thanks.
1913950 That's the idea.
love it!!!
Square comes up with the most ridiculous outfits.
I loooove it!!
.....crap....now I have to go dig out RE:Chain of memories.
alright, I have some advice.
Fix the wall of text, when someone starts talking start a new paragraph, and if the main point of view has any thoughts after they, or someone else talks keep it in that paragraph.
Also I recommend a better border when switching points of view, and another optional addition would be telling what point of view you're switching to as well as telling where that point of view is sometimes.
Oh, and one more thing...
First.
~ Kragor123 Pre-reader/Editor in training
Its an OK story so far. Wish someone wouldve thought of this earlier.
1999849 There, I've adjusted it some. Hope it looks better now.
MOAR!!! I can already see Lyra jumping on Riku and asking LOT of questions.
2307395 Dood, just for this one comment, I'm getting started on the next chapter. NOW!!
2308716 YEAAAAH!!
Great chapter, although I did find one error in your grammar.
2309662 I'll fix that. Thanks.
Super epic fight!! Repliku you wimp!! Zexion, you asshole!! Chapter, you awesome!!!
cliffhagers my old enemy
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Ah Lyra you got to love her.
For the record, this story isn't dead. I just haven't been writing in a long time. Also, check out my ask blog Ask Meme Obsessed Lyra, to see where all my time and devotion has been going while I was away.
HUZZAH!
So dramatic. I think I know what the parasite is and I can't wait to read more. And now for no reason have a picture of pony Riku
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In what chapter does Zexion first start talking to the Riku Replica?
5220180 From the very first chapter onward.