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All my life, Mom told me that death was nothing to be afraid of, and that Pony Heaven would be waiting for me. I think she was only half right.
(Based entirely on the series Rainbow Dash Presents. Drawing done by me.)

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Very good, but the grammar needs some work.

3338395 Can you be specific? I wanna try and fix it if I can. Thanks. :twilightsmile:

3338475

I need medicine to get better because my body can't fix its self

Itself.

You see, when I worried about wether

Whether.

Do you even know what that stuff is made out of.

Should end in a "?"

Maybe I’m useless for a reason. Maybe life its self has no meaning

Again, itself.

That's all I see right now.

3338507 Gotcha. I'll fix it later.

Celestia's a bitch.

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