All my life, Mom told me that death was nothing to be afraid of, and that Pony Heaven would be waiting for me. I think she was only half right.
(Based entirely on the series Rainbow Dash Presents. Drawing done by me.)
All my life, Mom told me that death was nothing to be afraid of, and that Pony Heaven would be waiting for me. I think she was only half right.
(Based entirely on the series Rainbow Dash Presents. Drawing done by me.)
Very good, but the grammar needs some work.
3338395 Can you be specific? I wanna try and fix it if I can. Thanks.
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Itself.
Whether.
Should end in a "?"
Again, itself.
That's all I see right now.
3338507 Gotcha. I'll fix it later.
Celestia's a bitch.