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Stratocaster


Hello! My name is Stratocaster, pegasus, musician, and author extraordinaire! Feel free to browse my work, leave plenty of feedback, and chat with me at any time! :D I hope you enjoy! *waves*

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It was supposed to be a simple magical experiment for Twilight; she did not expect it to go horribly wrong. Now, she and Rainbow Dash find their beloved Princess Celestia knocked out cold. What's more is that the Princess is expected for royal business. What's Twilight's and Rainbow's solution? Alicorn puppet!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 34 )

find thier beloved

Typo in the description? No me gusta.

And here I thought no one remembered the movie you're referencing. I guess there's still hope for old movies!

1516834 I remember my synopsis description having a couple of spelling and grammatical errors the first time around; at the time I was just happy that peeps were still giving the story a chance. But yes, out of all the things that should be written properly on here, it's your cover description. (unless troll fic :pinkiecrazy:)

1516848 Trollfics :trollestia:

But seriously, it only takes maybe fifteen seconds of reading to make sure the description is ready to roll. This is what makes people read your story, it needs to be flawless.

1516858 I don't think a fanfic about technicolored miniature equines needs to be "flawless" by any means. However, it needs to be worth our time. I've read some enjoyable stories that weren't grammatically perfect. I just think the cover needs to be perfect if you want to draw in readers.

Now, if your story is an absolute TRAIN WRECK, like the not-well-known "The Legend of the Mysterious Alicorn Thunder Night," then yeah we may have to inform Houston that we have a problem.

1516881 I'm not so much concerned with issues within the story, but the description is often less than 50 words. Making a mistake within these, especially one as simple as thier can throw off some readers. It's better to ensure the description, cover and all, is perfect, rather than having silly errors within it.

And if it is a trainwreck, I tend to go Full Grammar Gestapo on it :pinkiecrazy:

1516919 I'm agreeing with you. The story itself doesn't need to be flawless, but the cover does.

I have an interest in your fics proceeding.
Pray continue.

Thanks, it means a lot :pinkiehappy:; especially since I've been getting grammar nazism after I've had it published for only an hour. :ajbemused:

Both of them? If so, then thank you for sticking around! :ajsmug:

1517026 I just want to see your stuff succeed. I mean, how often does someone honor both ponies and Weekend at Bernie's in one fell swoop? Not often enough, I say! (Though imagine Spike and Owliscious having to drag around Twilight :rainbowlaugh:)

Good point, no hard feelings, thanks! :ajsmug:

Has potential for hilarity, but seems hastily executed.

"Hahahaaa, I can't believe that actually worked."
-Commander Shepard, on this plan.
I'm loving this so much. :pinkiehappy:

Sorry for the wait, folks. My power was knocked out on Monday. SANDY!!!!! :flutterrage:

Anypony else hearing Frédéric Chopin's Marche funèbre playing now?

1554744 Duh...duh...d- duh...duh...d- duh duh duh duh duh! :rainbowlaugh:

Those two just can't catch a break, can they?

1583821 Yeah. To be honest, writing the plot to a pony parody of Weekend At Bernie's is harder than I thought. :twilightoops:

What an ending! Now I can't wait for another chapter :rainbowwild:

Well, that was a doozie. :pinkiehappy: Thanks for reading, commenting, and pressing the thumbs up button. If this is the first of my stories that you've read, be sure to check out my other two. And, stick around for my next fiction, which will be a twisting romance. :duck: Seeyaround!

I bet Celestia planed this and is just pranking:trollestia:.... that troll!

The guards probably haven't noticed a thing.... busily eating sweat-rolls takes lot of concentration

dah heck's a "sweat roll?" don't you mean "sweet roll?"
I bet sweat rolls taste horrible.

2131672 Oh crap, that's embarrassing. :twilightoops: Where did I mention sweat rolls?

2136079
I forgot to put a reply marker.

It's the post below mine. lol sorry about that.

2136096 Ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh. Okay, phew! :twilightsheepish:

Somehow, I can imagine Angel, Spike and Big Macintosh tied up, gagged and stuffed in a closet.
:eeyup::moustache::yay::scootangel:

2679937 Yeah, I just thought that had to be the perfect ending. :twilightsheepish:

EVERYBODY DO THE FLOP!!!!!! (faints)

And here I thought pinkie was going to get knocked out

There’s going to anarchy, I tell you! Anarchy!”

Luna doesn't get any respect. It's here time to shine.

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