On the eve of her second marriage, Cadence confides in Luna.
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Well, this was interesting, though I have to question just a bit the relationship between Luna and Cadence.
Short, but a nice concept, and the writing style compliments it nicely.
[strike]Oh, look. As a sidenote, I have made the first comment.[/strike] Darnit slow-loading computer.
This is a pretty melancholly, but still nice read.
have a mustache.
1513618 Eeeeeenope.
Your second and I'm third.
For some reason, I was in the mood for something melancholy, and this filled the bill.
I feel like bursting into tears. D: My heart aches for poor Cadence...very well-written. I love the unorthodox narration, and the raw emotion it allows you to convey as opposed to what you'd be able to do with a third person, traditional narrative.
Thumb up and fave. <3
HELP MY HEART EXPLODED!!!! Lol but this was sad and a very good fic. Poor cadence.
That was...really deep. I'm glad I gave this a read. I really really like the core concept of that first wake up—basically that perfect moment where they hadn't had a chance to have anything go wrong and they were just starting out. It just really uses the marriage concept so well. I didn't know you thought about this stuff. Very cool. Easy thumbs up!
2568867 Thank you! Glad that it made an impression on you. And yes, I can step outside of the dark realm to think of happy or bittersweet stuff. lol.
I liked how this was a one sided conversation, like listening to someone talk on phone (don't let them know though, people get annoyed over that). Sweet and sad, I liked it. Not too sweet
and not too sad 
So it was more like 
, no, 
, NO, 
, OH GOD NO!
, it'll do, and 
2990593 XD thanks!
Well then, it took a bit to realize it was a one-sided conversation there. It was an interesting read, though not sad and depressing or sappy enough to be one of my favorites (don't take that wrong though, it's great as is! Else-wise might not have worked!). Here have a Like
I liked this, I really did. I have a soft spot for reflexive, melancholic stories, and this hits the right spot.