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Celestia wakes up as a human in at a mental ward under the care of a doctor who insists she has always been human.

Note: This is inspired by the concept behind "Believing Stories", my first fanfiction. But, it goes in a completely different direction once I have time and determination to continue it.

Editing/advice/proofreading done with the help of Lolzbolz, TheBlackPanda, Quad Ruple, and Ara. Thank you guys so much for your help!

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 155 )

Lol, silly author... you've already done this before :) I'll still stick around though.

I'm confused. Haven't you already written something like this?

1742124 Did you read the damn description? Or the Author's note?

I was there the first time, so I'll make sure to be here the second time around. Here goes!

1742185 I don't know. Do you damn swear at someone who posted a simple comment that could or could not have been sarcasm? Not that you could tell.

1742106>>1742124 Did you even read the author's notice?:rainbowhuh: And while I can say this isn't the greatest I've seen, I haven't seen the original thing the first commenter is talking about sooo... yeah.

1742195 Well given the fact that the first three comments where something along this line, I assumed it wasn't.

1742203
Yes I did... I was simply implying that rewriting the story is not very necessary, as the first one was awesome. I'm guessing the other dude is talking about 'believing stories' too, though I have not seen the one with Rainbow Dash.

1742203:facehoof: I'm not repeating since you didn't swear.

1742216 Eh, fine by me. I don't care if it's been done before or not. A good story is a good story man.
1742220 Actually, I wrote the comment before you answered those other people. My computer wasn't refreshed and therefore I did not see your comment. And if you want swearing, I don't give a shit about it.

This reminds me of a Star Trek:TNG episode, a similar fic, but with Lyra, and the Buffy the Vampire Slayer episode:Normal Again.....good job and keep it up!v:pinkiehappy:

1742252 I know you didn't see my other comment. That's why I didn't repeat it. And while I don't really care about swearing if it isn't necessary I get a bit peeved.

1742266 Whatever man, I'm just trying to keep you people's happy.

1742276 And im hardly ever not.

Does anyone here have a blowtorch? I hear they give great blowjobs

1742203 trust me, it's worse....basically my first fanfiction ever and the ending changed multiple times while I wrote it. I'm trying to at least have a version I'm not embarrassed about.

1742358 I liked your first story....until the end.
It wasn't bad, but it felt like cop-out, well to me at least.
None the less, it haa to be one pf my all-time favorite stories.

She’s been sweating and talked about drowning.

Verb confusion, there. Should be "sweating and talking."


Anyhow, this is a promising start. Very similar to last time, so we'll see how it goes with more planning this time around.

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Honestly, don't feel motivated yet to restart that though :applejackunsure: I do have the file saved on my computer just in case....but don't get your hopes up.

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ok, i get then notes could be written by her, but a broken seal? how would she get the wax?

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Lol, I wouldn't recommend trying to solve it. Unless the author plans on giving this an actual ending instead of a paradox, which I do not think he will, you will just confuse yourself.

Cool chapter.

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My mistake, I made a generalization of the community.

1750277 Not a problem. You are grammatically correct saying he. I was merely informing you.

I'm sorry but when did you send this out to the editors?

1753448 I sent you an e-mail both times when I shared the chapter. I also sent you a PM here asking you to tell me when you had a chance to see it. I saw you had read the PM so I assumed you had seen it. sorry :applejackunsure:

1753459 It's okay. Well I read the second chapter, but I didn't get any information about the other one. Are there any other chapters coming out tonight?

1753615 No, I've only just started on the third chapter. I'll send another PM with the link when I get the third chapter.

So her name is Ashlyn this time around, eh? Welp, I wanna see where you take it this time around.

So, happy writing. :twilightsmile:

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She? well at least that explains the paradoxes. x) :pinkiecrazy:

does celestia/ashlyn still have the same hair color?

I liked Believing Stories, but this is cool too.:pinkiehappy:

1789155 Well, maybe it would be better to say that is was not planned out as well as it could have been.

1807700 Thanks :twilightsmile: I still appreciate it.

strange dog lady....:rainbowhuh:

I lower y fork again

*my


Anyway, this was a nice update. Ashlyn/Celestia is quite convinced the hospital is a fake created by Discord. I'm curious to see how she'll start to believe otherwise and become conflicted.

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