After the defeat of Nightmare Moon and the end of the Summer Sun Celebration, Celestia lets Luna in on a secret she has been keeping, not only from Luna, but from most of Equestria as well. Will Luna be able to handle the revelation?
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Dabuq did I just write?
BLASPHEMY! BURN THE BLASPHEMER! BURRRRRRN!!!!
Whoa. Now that... was certainly different.
1 like for originality.
I really enjoyed this heresy.
HERESY.
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Poor Luna, soon to decay to dust very soon. At least there is a replacement so Celestia can have her *sister* with her.
That was very nice, though there was one or two little hiccoughs. Nothing major enough to write down.
So... comedy tag? What was its purpose, again?
If a story has a bit of comic relief, it doesn't mean it's a comedy.
And the way it's written, it isn't dark either. This should go only on sad.
The plot is really good; original. But the execution...
1307822 Well, it was originally written as a comedy, but then I had to write the end and it was a bit macabre... honestly, I just had to guess at what tag fit it best because I really didn't know how it would strike people. I was very close to just saying "screw it" and have the whole thing actually be a prank by Celestia, but... well, I didn't really want to do that. If this strikes you as mainly "Sad," though, I suppose it doesn't hurt to change it.
But, yeah, this idea occured to me while I was writing Rolling in Beaches. I know, blasphemous, but doesn't it make a weird sort of sense? Then again, maybe that's just in my head.
Well, I'd definitely call it sad humor or sick humor XD
1323333 Yeah, that's kind of what I thought.
Well... that is an EXTREMELY interesting way to view things.
DO NOT BLASPHEME!!!!! DO NOT BLASPHEME!!!!
But seriously, that was well written even if it was a pretty bizarre interpretation.
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Sometimes you just have a thought that's so bizarre, you have to share it with others.
Well, that was something. Ever considered going over how the different Celestia's acted or anything similar?
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Well, this thing was something I wrote off the hip as a way to get an idea out of my head, so I didn't really plan on much more. I did think that the Celestia of a thousand years ago would be quite different from the modern one, colder and more of a warrior type. I dunno, one day I might do something with this.
.... I'm not quite sure how to react to this...
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That's the reaction I was going for.
5513856 Its kinda like should I laugh? should I feel sad? should I stare stupidly at the screen? Did I like this or not? UGH IM SO CONFUSED
Certainly an interesting idea. You managed to get me strangely invested in a one-shot.