Rape, sexism, racism, vile acts and views that humanity looks at with deepest of loathing. But Equestria a magical world inhabited by ponies, have no such issue openly embracing it.
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DIE FAGET LACHEN HEUHYUEHEH
Well... shit. That escalated quickly.
but the story was getting good why did you kill him.
Is that it? The story is over?
FUCK YEAAAAHHHHHH! NEW CHAPTER.... but uhh... fuck Lachlan gets the shaft end of the stick a lot doesn't he?
you ended the story like that by killing him, seriously?
what you just did is one of the more horrible thing an author can do, it's called killing a story and turning a very good story in something not even worth reading because the ending is horrible, is this how you end a story like that, then stop writing.
wow he lived to be 18,124 years old.
Wtf just happend was that the.end?
Bull.
You just pulled the Someone walks in with a gun. then killed off the main character.
The only way this could be more cliche is if Lalachan woke up and it was all a dream.
I'll be waiting for a better ending.
I am so f****** pissed you bastard.
That was a bit more than 5 years if the gravestone says 20117
I humbly ask without threats of brutal killing if this is the end or if I can take the 'Hiatus' label as a sign of another chapter?
a simple yes or no is fine.
I also have to ask is that it? I really want more, What about his kids and the rest of his herd? The reason I ask is the ending feels sad/tragic and the story does not have those tags so I'm kinda skeptical.
I think the end was right as it then sets up to his children growing up with only the legends of their father.
WTF?! Lachlan dies by that bitch Sunset Shimmer?! Fuck that! Make it so that he survives but forgets everything that happened in Equestria, thats what you should do! Im glad a new chapter is out but, HOW DARE YOU!:flutter rage:
Please tell me that the little bit at the end is a joke. If not, then you will lose me as a watcher and fan.
3824128 Well, either it is not the end of the story, or it is and DF forgot to change the story status to complete. It's still classified as 'On Hiatus'.
No. No. No. NO. NO. NO. NO! NO!! NO!!!
That is not how the story will end! I refuse to believe it dammit. There's no way that the build up would lead to something so anti-climatic, so shut up and finish writing
3824208 that's what I'm trying to say.
dude this is just lame all that build up and you couldn't have made something better than this half ass'd death crap dude you can make something better like maybe bringing him back to life some way like i don't know maybe discord from another universe or q from earth could do some shit with chaos and bring him back its just that this ending is so lame.
now I have one question is it over?
Yay! An update.
(One read later)
What. The. Fuck!
See's Author's Note.
YAY!
Not the conclusion I thought would happen..., or perhaps this story was just the beginning.
3824189
he might just be messing with us. it has been a while since he last updated which was in july. and if he's not joking then I can always just make a spin off of this story where Lachlan survives. Its an idea.
3824264
Well he and I are making a sequel. Let me know if you want the link.
3824264 If that turns out to be the case and you do that, I'm with you. My brain actually went random and made up a scene before I finished reading this chapter, with him disarming Sunset, knocking her out with the butt of the gun and saying 'Don't mess with the GST'...
Well...that was...something.
Hope that's not the actual end.
SUNSET SHIMMER YOU BITCH!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT CELESTIA SAYS!!! YOU HAD BETTER BE FUCKING DEAD NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
well that ending was abrupt
3824298 You've seen her before?
Well if the author doesnt have idea's for story and don't want to bother with it anymore just kill's the main character in the middle of evrything. I really liked this story, but you go the easiest possoble way to end the story u didnt want to continue, shame on you
3823924 now hush you
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No, seriously. What the fuck was that?! Did you seriously plan that or were you just too tired with this story? either way, that's bull shit.
You fucked the story up.
Man I had high expectation for this story but to kill off the main character like that is just so gay. It like you didn't even try giving the story a proper ending. Don't you have any shame at all.
Y'know there is going be a bunch of people who un-starred assuming this is the end not knowing that you added another chapter.
Da faq was this man you lost your insñiratiobs of this story, i gues that you have a very good excuse, but im not going to complain your decision
Do NOT read this reaction by half. If you actually plan on reading it, read it completely.
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*Lachlan gets shot and dies*
Now, seriously. What the heck is wrong with you! You decided to kill the main character out of the blue, wrote about the guards scraping his miserable skull and brain matter off the floor even though there is no "Gore" or "Dark" tag on this story whatsoever, didn't make an epilogue about what happened to that stupid Sunset Shimmer or to the rest of the herd and, FOR THE GRAND FUCKING FINALE, Celestia did not kill her because of the "greater good". Now what "greater good" is that!? This is not some ending you just give to your fans. It would be better if you put this ending in the "Dark" counterpart to this story: Darker Paths. But even then it would be revolting to see such an awesome character who just gets beat up every time get killed in the ending. I did not have been "loyal" and remained "faithful" to one of my favorite writers, who tagged with another freaking awesome one (Der-Arzt) with the purpose of creating a crossover, to receive THIS KIND OF ENDING.
I have a perfect idea for a sequel for this. Write about an exact replica of the asteroid that wiped the sorry dinosaurs from our planet crashing into the very place Celestia is at when she thought about that "greater good" shit and erase EVERY drop of life in that wretched planet! Or write about a freaking suicidal god exploding himself, killing everyone in the planet and creating a black hole. Or better yet: create another story named: The scent - Lust of mares: The GOOD version.
" I am so sorry for this and that as I plan to revamp this once I have free time"
Please do it. PLEASE, POR FAVOR, ONEGAI, POR OBSÉQUIO, TAKE THIS ENDING FROM MY SIGHT. Sorry for the outrage, I can NOT just accept this becoming the ending of such one good "Anthro" and " Human" story, one that achieved 1096 likes from the viewers as of now, one that created such a charismatic protagonist and being ruined by 3153 words!
The worst part is that he never did get his preordered Halo 4 Limited Edition Everything that someone said he would get. Truly tragic, I tell you.
I'm off to read the Spoiler Chapter now.
Oh, and the whole Sunset Shimmer thing was weird. Wouldn't they have taken more precautions against him being kidnapped because of all the other times he was stolen away?
WHY GOD WHY DID YOU YOU END IT LIKE THAT WHY!!! oh whait thers more yay.
That is bull shit you saying after all that Lachlan been through he dies like that what about his so called powers how come none of them could be I don't know rapped healing and immortality. I for one loved this story and doesn't want it to end like that.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WWWWAAAAHHHAAAHH! WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! U FUCKING BASTRAD! HOW COULD U JUST END IT *SORRY DUE TO THE REST OF THE MESSAGE BEING SSSSOOO VIOLENT AND TORRORIFLYING AND ALSO PSYCHOPATHICALLY INSANE IT HAS BEEN CENSORED by the censorship.inc ty for understanding u should be lucky who ever made this shitty ending that were censoring the rest of this message and if we didn't u will most likely be shitting your pants right now ty and have a nice day and have a nice day with very pissed off fans and having them unfollowing u*
So that's the end huh? I didn't expect it to end that way, but I suppose that some people really do die horribly like that in real life. I'm surprised that Sunset Shimmer was the one to pull that off though. It was a fun adventure to see Lachlan go through life like that, it's such a shame to see it end this horribly. He really did made a poor decision to keep fighting when someone has a gun pointed directly at their head, but it's pretty sad that he has died like that just when he is enjoying the family life... so long Lachlan I hardly knew you... :(
.......Imma go cry now
Dat ending
3824284 youre working on a sequel? really? no trolling us? PLEEAAASSSEEEE send me the link too?
we honor a great man, father and husband
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I'm dead inside
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JAHOOSAPHAT SAYS NO.
THIS STORY NO END NOW.