Rape, sexism, racism, vile acts and views that humanity looks at with deepest of loathing. But Equestria a magical world inhabited by ponies, have no such issue openly embracing it.
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so cute can u draw the baby please
Great chapter keep it up.
Listen Flare, as the proof reader for 'Lust of mares' I feel obligated to inform you of a few recurring grammer mistakes you had along the fic:
A lot of the time you write 'Realize' with 'S' instead of 'Z'.
You sometimes confuse 'They're' and 'Their'.
And you need to add more commas, otherwise, you get mistakes like this;
It seems as though you meant that the sirens eyed him before and then stopped...
I'm not trying to bring you down, I'm just saying that you should be more careful when you write a chapter, I'm already proof reading this one for you so don't worry
I agree with yoni10014, certain mistakes have been made multiple times in multiple chapters. But it is understandable that everyone tends to make mistakes when writing. I also think that you should look through the previous chapters and fix them up and then re-post them. Just an idea.
4398877 Contrary to your belief, realise IS spelt with an S, it's just that google only has one English language setting, the wrong one.
4398978 You're a Brit, aren't you?
4399060 As am I! We invented the English language so it is with an "S"
4399060 4399069 I'm actually a kiwi, we're significantly more awesome.
4399092 Please I am Scottish far more awsome
4399133 It took an old kiwi bloke to conquer Mount Everest, a kiwi scientist split the atom and laid out the basics for nuclear physics, and last I checked we're the only country who's politicians are merely incompetent instead of heavily corrupt or greedy. Also we have cute, cuddly flightless birds that burrow in the ground, because fuck the laws of nature, if a bird wants to live underground, it damn well can. Also they're called Kiwis, not to be confused with the Kiwi Fruit, which every other country seems to think are just called Kiwis. Fucking uncultured bastards.
4399157 We invented the TV, penicillin,paleobiology, polarization, cure for scurvy, King Arthur, Halloween, refrigerators, Neptune bakelite, iron bridges solitons the steam engine telephones thermos flasks/dewars the stereotype sulphuric acid the steam-hammer cure for insomnia paraffin
Sherlock Holmes, Toad of Toad Hall, Long John Silver Jekyll and Hyde Auld Lang Syne,
Whisky, the decimal point, documentary films, Encyclopedia Britannica, engineering sciences,
fax machines, first cloned mammal, flailing machines, geosciences, golf, Maxwell's equations, marmalade. hypodermic syringes and ironically enough the bank of England. And that is just Scotland by itself.
Also we have bad tempered seagulls top that
4399252 We have robot bees.
4399069 hell I'm an American and i spell it with an s, it feels more natural.
4399273 How did you get robot bees I want robot bees
4399302 Uni students. They make the craziest things. Like synthetic weed. Which is outlawed now, I think.
4399302
Why not steampunk ferrets?
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4399069 Both are correct and in fact it was only in the 1870s that the S spelling became more popular for usage in British English.
http://grammarist.com/spelling/realise-realize/
https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=realize%2Crealise&year_start=1800&year_end=2010&corpus=18&smoothing=3&share=&direct_url=t1%3B%2Crealize%3B%2Cc0%3B.t1%3B%2Crealise%3B%2Cc0
4399324 NO WHY BAN SYNTHETIC WEED HOW CRUEL AND MEAN.
I loved it all it was a awesome and sweet chapter.I would like to read what happened with the Queen and her in heat douther I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them.
So right after they say he is not a whore to be used as a bargaining chip, they whore him out as a bargaining chip?
Hypocritical Immortals.
great story, good chapter
4400343 I think it has something to do with the green party trying to legalise real weed.
I'm waiting for shattered memories and darker paths to continue.
not bad not bad
and AWWWW
4403571 Yeah I am about in the same boat. But hey I will write until people get bored of it then call it quits sorry about that. Though if you have any suggestions you want to throw in be my guest
4403571 Would it make you more interested if I told you that the mane six are coming back and coming back hard? Also plan on getting more of the back ground/ CMC in future chapters. Don't get me wrong I love writing about the herd but it gets boring after a while. Also plan to address things that never really got much notice like who is Eris mother.
4399157 Do you perchance work at KIWI too?
4399252 you may have that fancy schtuff, but we have something better... the Cheese-cutter
4404263 Don't be ridiculous, I'm unemployed!
4404369 that's too bad, i work at KIWI. you should get a job. it'l give you mony
4404839 give flare a brake, they're is still recovering some-what
4440265 Doin a few small tweaks the thing is this story has been up so long that I cant be arsed to go back and correct mistakes I will eventually but I may get a couple more proof readers then just have them pass it around like a passed out latino women at a ghetto party
Nice to see the love between Lachlan and the girls as they watch over their new little one. I bet it'll probably be an interesting story to tell them as they get older. ^^;
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Dude it is just a story chill. This was written years ago and I plan to go back and rewrite. Also what I never understand is how him killing her would be smart? She is a beloved princess with a powerful sister. If lachlan killed her then what he would be hunted and not having magic would see him quickly impaled on a sword or spear! Do you know how hard it is to kill someone. To see the fear in their eyes the cries of pain begging for their life.
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Fuck Celestia! Fuck everyone! With a chainsword preferably!
If I was constantly raped day after day and finding out the "bonds" I formed my rapists were just master and sex toy, my psyche might snap a little, and murder may not seem such a bad idea. I would rather die knowing I killed one of my rapists, then live the rest of my life to be raped forever without end.
You put waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much pity for these horrible people, at first I thought: "Ok, so Celestia is lenient on rape and is sexist, that is not the worst thing any character has done in this flick"
Couple of chapters later: "SHE MOTHERFUCKING BROKE HIS BONES INFECTING THEM, AND ALMOST HAD TO AMPUTATE THEM!? KILL THAT BITCH!"
4495364 No please! Must have hugs and many *SQUEE* to live!
although you have a good story and everything, I... never really liked Lachlan as a character. I'm fairly sure that everyone whose kink isn't sub/rape wouldn't just up and forgive someone for violently raping them. I know for a fact I wouldn't stand for anything along those lines happening. Would sooner die.
But hey, maybe i'm just different.
4507740 No you are not but Lachlan is a weird one. Stockholm syndrome mixed in with a large understanding of how their society works is what has stopped him from being bitter. In love of mares he being a liche cant be raped and here he is learning magic so soon that will be mirrored
4527655 The carnage of the floor rights debate of 1975 is why matting rights are so important
1717608 >Google>Comdotgame MLP>Adult>Chrysalis>Play.
4507740 if you read his story the sent: darker paths just that happens, he hates his captors for what happened
4529846 and duuuuuuuuuude im back online
I loved this chapter it was so sweet and ,cute and just plain awesome beyond awesome.It really touch my my heart have he was there for her .And it had a awesomely funny beginning.I can't wait to see what happens next between them all next and what happens next to them all.
this is by far the best written 'old chapter' you have done so far.
Im loving this fic though im surprised you made chrysalis produce offspring like a regular mare. I would least think she would have laid egg or eggs instead like most changelings stories i've seen.