Rape, sexism, racism, vile acts and views that humanity looks at with deepest of loathing. But Equestria a magical world inhabited by ponies, have no such issue openly embracing it.
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11 mares and 1 stallion. All my hate mother bucker, all my hate.
!WARNINGi THE SWAG METER IS OFF THE CHARTS!!! !WARNINGi
YES UPDATE! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
and now i must read it
btw EPIC PIC!
haha! Well why not?
No im not mad
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i wouldn't mind to help with the proof readingz.
"the fat ones"
By all the Gods.....This was both hilarious and well written. A few Spelling mistakes, but otherwise it was amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
And Lachlan is such a lucky Bastard....11 mares at once. Why Can't that be me in his place?
1677703 this was all written on a phone all five thousand words on a shitty phone
cut me some slack bro
1677750 I will send you the chapters tommorow
Not bad fire the obama face
THEY FREAKING DYED CELESTIA'S MANE!!!!!!!!
1677849 I already gottem
AWESOME!!!!! HAVE SOME OF THESE
Eleven MARES!!!!! THERE WILL BE NOTHING LEFT!!!!!!!
Like that song. It's gonna be stuck in my head..... forever.....
really? no one's gonna say it?
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*sighs*
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THE GRAMMAR NAZIS ARE COMING!
Twelve way?
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My only problem was your grammar and spelling, otherwise very nice.
see an update
Ideas? Well.
Could you use that Lachlan is now known as the super breeding male. So you could add some new characters. What?
For example:
Industrial magnatess of Stalliongrad looking for a suitable man for one of her three daughters.
Diamond dog Baroness, from a rich clan and its rivals.
Daughter zebra sultanas from the far south and her sisters.
What do you think?
My lungs... are on fire.... Can't stop laughing!!!
Your favorite music is video game soundtracks!? Have you ever listened to the metroid soundtrack? My favorite is Kraid's lair and Magmoor caverns. Time to post two remixes, one for each soundtrack that I just said.
Hmm
YESH!
1678922 oh yeah baby the good old classics
1678761 nice ideas I will try and Incorporated some of that into the next few chapters
1679691 Thank you. And before I forget. I would like to add to that list yet Griffin countess, perhaps with some kinship with Gilda.
Erm..... Aren't Lachlan very careful with his ( future) offspring?
If yes... Why is he then letting Molestia have booze, wasn't she pregnant?
On a side note. I could easily seen the end of this chapter end in them making a game out of it.
A game of "man-hunt", and the one who caught him got a one-on-one, before the orgy.
Three things
ONE: Better then the gala episode
TWO: Fleur is awesome and the nobility mares are bitches
THREE: Twelve way ? One of my biggest fantasies being written into a story? AWESOMENESS
hahahahahah the troll pictuer is awesome haha
surprised no-one linked this yet! <giggles>
Good guy Lachlan
Helping the girls out!
"proper educate"...... amazing story, please find a proofreader. Plenty of little things before that but that just line-crosser.
Anyways, sacrificing your children...... that is what they are for right, right?
You know, that prank remember me of other idea, for 2 pranks but I still don't now how will be put off (beside being Discord who do it) The first is make Celestia main into a afro, a BIG 80 style afro, the second is some how make the moon, instead of shine white, shine the colors of the rainbow one after another imitating a disco (yeah I now, too 80ts, but I still think they sound funny)
Also, thanks to include Fleur, maybe next you can bring Spitfire meet Lachan for a wonderbolt raise or something, and latter they have a private meeting with rainbow dash (if you now what i mean). Also where was Spike during the night? And did Lachan will finally will get one on one quality time with the rest of the main 6?
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love that pic
and i like the way you think
do you right
1679691
im glade i stayed up to read this
i need to go to school in the mornig
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How much i love your icon: 10/10
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1684636 "I can barely handle two of you at once, but eleven.... No way! *starts "running" away*
"the one who catches him, get's a 'one-on-one' with him before the orgy.... GET HIM!"
But who catches him? It wasn't metioned that Fleur actually left the castle, and then the rest of the girls finds Lachlan sprawled over Fleur, because he just runned right into her.
Thanks, I didn't make it though, I just found it.
Credits to the maker, is noted on my profile.
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The best thing i could find as Lachlan was dragged away.
I...love this..
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1679691 still think ya shoulda done diamond bitches idea
I foresee a massive orgy where Lachlan claims the rest of the Element Bearers and Luna in one fell swoop.
I also think it would be important for someone to lay down some ground rules, like no screwing Lachlan into a month long sex induced coma.
Wow Lachlan did everything Spike should have done in the gala in helping the girls with their best night ever.
It really was a silly chapter but it was the best one as it summarized that the bond that Lachlan has is getting fixed. Too bad there's no detail of how it happened but with it being summaraized the way it did I'm glad that Lachlan was able to make it up with the girls.
He's probably going to pay for that later, but that wasa damn good comeback!
still has issues with punctuation, but this fic is improving.
where is princess cadence
1678301 Flawless Victory
Looks to me you might wanna get more than one proofreader and a few editors. Big time...
오빠강남스타일~!
1809090 Here is a translation to what he said.
오빠강남스타일~! = Brother Jiangnan style ~!
You need to back and add the orgy scene at the end of this chapter with him doing all 11 mares.
Music starts playin he yells every one watch this then he starts doing a bunch of complicated break dance moves and yells at dash YOU JUST GOT SERVED IN A BOWL WITH A SPOON AND A SIDE OF CRACKERS
“I got shouted at for trying to have fun” she whispered as looked at the snobs then to the Nightmare who looked bored out of her H sized tits.
Does "H" stand for HELP IVE FALLEN AND I CANT GET UP! Or HOLY HELL!!!
I've never laughed that much watching Gangnam Style