Rape, sexism, racism, vile acts and views that humanity looks at with deepest of loathing. But Equestria a magical world inhabited by ponies, have no such issue openly embracing it.
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You better not leave any survivors.
OH HELL FUCKING YES! Always love me a good bad guy slaughter... but they have Issac, don't they...
4566098 Lets just say I don't envy the guy trying to identify the bodies
MOAR....... if you would please
4566114 By no survivors I also meant the "innocent" ponies watching the slaughter for entertainment.
Equestria will be better off without them anyway.
welp, the're boned
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4566135
I'm gonna nickname that the TS-47...
No SURVIVORS! No but really, I liked the chapter, it was too quick and more needed to be explained with how that cloaked figure got into the castle but other than that, it was good. 8/10
this calls for a music mash up
you need at least 1 survivor... to tell lachlan where the rest of the eclipse gang is and to spread the story.
I want a few 'young' survivors but not without punishment, much like "Elfen Lied" brand them so that they and their descendants are forbidden from harming or allowing harm to come to; him and his children.
4566126 whenever I read your comments I cant help but read them in Vageta's voice.
ok seriesuly i like the story very much but how do these villians get into the castle al the time, i mean serieusly where are those guards, useless geez. how many time has this been 5 or six times? i might miscount because of the other story
4566513 Am I to understand that as you read my comments often? If so, it shows that you have excellent taste in stories.
fuck yeah ready for the next chapter
it is kind of rushed because it seems not to be finished like you just stopped half way through
i expect to see some Mick Foley/ Mankind/Cactus Jack refferences here.
they wanted blood well lets give them what they wanted the hard way and make it hurt.
4566634 That is called a cliff hanger
4566616 I see you around allot so yes I do have a good taste in ligature and so do you any stories you would recommend will be appropriated.
4566998 I have a long list of favorited stories, so that is a good place to look.
4567040 You act like your the only one have you seen how many stories I have Favorited but im looking for new stories that I have not read which are getting hard to find considering I will burn through a 100,000 word story in no time.
And they all get what they deserve. THE END.
mm lets see they kidnaped the consort of four alicorns and two changeling queens? right?
its not a little bit suicidal?
4567260 Eris and Twilight Sparkle
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Five.
4567265 oops right five alicorns two changeling queens and a dracoequus
and lets not forget lachlans powers
lucifer in hell is crying for those poor souls
I WANNA SEE PUPA GET ADOPTED!
seriously, she would make a great sister to Issac.
4567061 I'm well aware that I'm not the only one who have faved a lot of stuff. But I have faved around 3.5 times as many stories as you. (99% of which is HiE)
4566430 The author will probably explain later on how the cloaked figure got in. For now, let's enjoy the onslaught.
Discord, Nightmare Moon, Umbra, Tirek, Grogar, Lord Smooz and the herd will know harm the innocent the angel of Justice will turn into a Demon of wraith
And Lachlan Feels LIKE A MONSTER
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tewnLJj3V9w
Hot damn, I swear that Lachlan is going to seriously need a title when it's all over.
Ursa Crusader Lachlan, because mother bear doesn't work when dads actually spilling blood like he promised!
This song because it's actually seems appropriate, but that's just me.
No survivors. Utter devastation. Perhaps a permanent ice fixture to remind all of Canterlot of the power of Lachlan Goudie for eternity. Also, isn't Lachlan human in this one? Shouldn't the Hydra have broken his bones? I'm just curious because in this story he broke several bones from simply having sex with Nightmare Moon, so wouldn't a massive tail hit and a wall smash blow his spine asunder?
Edit: Also, investigations should be done as well. Make sure not to eradicate all ties to nobles in the process of the massacre. It'd be a shame if they got off scott free.
kill them. all of them.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m2x9n9WOlV1r5x09i.gif
4567443 I take that as a challenge
It looks like they made a bad mistake in this and are going to pay for it now. I do hope he does not loose himself when he kills all thee villains. He has the girls morrows support to keep him going in the rite direction. There seem to be a lot of corruption in Equestria. they do not respect the Princesses and wood go so far to kidnap there mate and kill there foals. If Lachlan did not stop them now Nightmare Moon mite Loose control and have a coming back to kill the nobles in this.
You are doing a Great Job on this story and I hope to see more soon.
Dragonfox
I dont care if this chapter was quickly written and half baked, it is still brilliant
oh man each new chapter gets more intense by each word. awesome man tear the place apart and leave no witnesses behind
NIPPLE SALADS!!!
I wonder if he'll kill any other innocents there, or will fluer and one child be the only innocents these creeps have for plot convenience?
4566107 it doesnt look like it. It looks like Isaac was still in the room with the others and the stripper, it seems they only took Lachlan so he is free slaughter as many bastards as he wants.
Also to Flare, maybe somewhere earlier, say during the first scene where lachlan gets taken, or when he's first awake in the cage/chamber, say about the magical dampener. There's no mention of it until the scene where he tears it off his neck and goes Lich on dem bastards. Just a little clarity as to why he didnt just blast out right away upon waking up maybe,
the ending reminds me of silent hill...
And I'm thinking its going to end like it.
p.s. he says how, by paying guards.
First. This chapter does seem rushed, but only a little, and probably because it is short a few hundred words.
Second. Pupa's mom is queen of the Gerudo Changelings
Third. Ever living thing in that facility, not currently in the floor of the arena, is utterly and truly F'ed. (sideways)
4567340 more like cooking up some popcorn
4565472 ahh, KotOR good times
Well... Lachlan is pissed.... And they're aaaaall gooona diie! (evil laugh)
and yet AGAIN our brave hero being spirited away by someone....it's a bloody trend, by now he should have like an emergency pack on him at all times, you know like (matches, lockpicks, hearthstone, or at least some enchantment that instantly teleports him to some secure place if he goes unconscious ).
Really want to know how his herd will react.