Rape, sexism, racism, vile acts and views that humanity looks at with deepest of loathing. But Equestria a magical world inhabited by ponies, have no such issue openly embracing it.
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GET WELL DEMOGORGON!!! WE NEED YOU HERE, THIS STORY IS SO INCREDIBLY FUNNY and erotic THAT I'LL CRY WHEN (if..?) IT ENDS!!
omglol, he did it again
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New high score! Only one issue. Why does he agree to sex with Eris right after a night with 11 mares? Multiple times no less! Just a little implausible.
the lols are so big they hurt
1694977
If you were paying attention to the story it said that both Lachlan and Eris were being manipulated by Eris's mother in a bid for grandchildren.
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1694977 because the three months that he has had Isaac has been spent either looking after the foal or getting stronger in bed
1695130 Not the first time ;D
this is getting better and better.
1695250
Good logic!
1695352
He didn't really have a choice in the matter the first time mate. She had him coiled up like a snake.
Wow awesome
I went in to this thinking Orgy!
But instead Laclan opens his mouth and stupid comes out
I liked Eris, but I think she could us a bit more description as to how she looks. Also, does Eris have a Cloaca like a lizard/bird/marsupial or a vagina and anus?
I also liked Molestia's chill "They're gonna kill you" when she sees the eggs
I want to know where the bag of gifts came from since it wasn't mentioned earlier this chapter, and it couldn't have come from earlier because some of the girls (Luna) weren't part of his herd/harem before the previous night so he wouldn't have gotten them specially engraved jewelry.
Anyway,
HAH!
I see that you used that idea....(but no credit?) have the mares found their new favorite game, and maybe Twilight will bring up the fun fact that ''Stallion (witch) hunts'' actually are from the Dark ages?
And that intro...
1695873 It wasnt about the harem he had known all of them ong enough that he wanted to get them a gift to show his gratitude
i agry with>>1695873 and i think funny was your aim
he acts so stupid latly
so much stupid
next chapter please
Projectile Vomiting? That needs to be an olympic sport. Go for the gold!
finally, Eris joins the harem! Lol at daddy Discord's reaction. It took me a while to read this chap because i couldn't stop laughing so hard.
Lachlan, you magnificent bastard!
Trendy
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Honestly I don't know
Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Celestia, Molestia, Luna, Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, Razor Fang, and Eris.
A kid with NNM, a kid with Molestia, and two with Eris.
1 Male
13 Females
1 baby, 1 unborn, and 2 eggs.
Oh wait, he slept with like 3 or 4 regulars too didn't he?
Seriously, just name him Emperor of Equestria already.
Wow Lachan Sperm is getting stronger and stronger, this time it only took 15 minutes. I will not be surprise that 11 mares suddenly discover they are pregnant too.
In a side note, since Lachan is now the son in law of Discord and once he get pass the urge to murder him, I it will be time for some paybacks…Discord style. And it looks like Lachan just discover his favorite girl, from all the girls she was the must caring for his well being.
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As much as I love this story, it's getting a little out of hand.
get better soon.......... BECAUSE I WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1695198 Thank you for showing me this video.
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so lets see the mane six moon luna celestia molestia eris crysalis razer atthis rate hes gonnahave over at least 13 kids!!!!
Will Ditzy Doo ever come in with a big role with the chapter title named 'Of Muffins and Men' and ends up smelling the most amazing muffin-y smell ever? Instead of sex though, she ends up trying to eat him throughout the whole chapter. You can still add a smexy bit at the end, but this is just a huge comic relief thing that usually happens after a major climax (no pun intended).
Besides, who can say no to this face?
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Wow, Lachlan is lucky and lucky to be in this world to be attracted to all of these girls. Although I'm confused about why they are mad at him instead of wondering what did Lachlan smelt like to Eris when she came after him, then again it looks like he got punished in the end anyway, just in the good kind of way (I wonder how hard it is to write an orgy with 12 girls and one guy?). Are they mad at him for the fact that they had drunken sex last night and were deeply mad about the fact that they can't remember any of it, or are they mad at him for the prank they pulled on Celestia?
Eris scene was kind of sexy. I'm just having a hard time imagining her being anthro since she could look human enough by standing, that, and there's almost to none anthro pictures of her which sucks. I also like that Eris immediately turned nice after having a baby. It seems like that even being a spirit of mischeif, a baby is still important (even though I'm worried about how any of the mothers will be okay with Lachlan trying to make them as normal as possible). One of the best scenes in this story was also Discord's and Celestia's reaction to not only to the first egg Eris and Lachlan had together, but the second one they had together (which happened too bad because they were under an influence, would that mean that Eris's mother will make them have sex again against their wills some time later in the future?).
At this rate he should be neutered. If only for his own safety .
ummmmmm WOW is all i can say.....i never thought discord would FAINT!!!! this chapter is so funny!!!! also i have a moustache
Hope you get well!
Oi your work is amazing!
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Perhaps this may help! :D
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Demorgorgon,
First, I noticed you have, in my opinion, a lot of grammar error ( such as commas ( also, I am not 100% correct in my spelling and grammar in English, and if I need some correction when I write, then feel free to correct me )). However, if there is one thing I know perfectly is the use of "a" and "an". Sometimes, you put the wrong word in front of another word. So there is the rule: "an" goes in front of a vowel, and "a" goes in front of a consonant. That's it!
Awesome story by the way, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Cordially,
Chaos Contrl
i have no words for this...just update soon plz?
Father of Chaos, Daughter of Mischief, Mother of... *twirls hand*
1727230 speaking of which are you going to do a short story for Issac?
1695130
I sense many MANY offspring in this harem-fic's future.
That guy needs to find a portal back to Earth, fast. He needs backup.
I felt violated after reading this. But it was fun
well .................... he's fucked
eagerly awaiting next chapter
1753374 still away she will be appearing soon. if i continue this fic
please continue this fic i love it
Damn, I like this story. But It really irks me how he just acts like a peice of meat. Honestly, if I found out my entire gender just recently stopped being sex slaves, getting raped and beaten regularly and falling In love with the girls who did it, I would have run off a long time ago. Seriously, this guy seems to have some special case of Stockholme syndrom. Lastly, he is so unnaturally a push over, "What? you raped and broke my pelvis, nearly killing me and putting me into a coma for three weeks? Of course I will forgive you!"
And dont give me that crap about them explaining It was Blueblood. From what I have read that is how all males are treated in this universe. Also, this guy should be dead to begin with, I dont remember, but somewhere in a previous chapter a nurse stated that Molestia/Celestia weighted at over 700 pounds. Having that much weight come down on your pelvis will result in something along the lines of your upper body popping like a zit! Hell, the 300 to 400 pound Ponys would do that to you.
Also(Again), the fact that celestia WEIGHS that much to begin with is completly retarded (Sorry, I like this story, but its kinda true..), that goes double for the rest of the ponies. Being a a foot or two taller wont make you give you the weight of a fucking ATV.
Seriously, this story has some really bad balancing issues. Other then that, you still really need to work on your sentence structure and Dialogue. Seriously, sometimes its like the guy is a faking robot, just laying out all the information in nice, paragraph long sentences.
Also, you really need to learn how to use a comma better. Honestly, the little fucker are scattered around randomly. At times you use them well, other times, It just really messes up my reading.
Alright, there's my rant, If I come off as dickish, please don't take offense.
-MyDigitalHazard
1753992 i will happily remind you that this story is and still is a piss take it is not intended to be serious. The weight actually works out well due to the different gravitation shifts. In Equestria the gravity is about 0.5 of earth so Celestia weighs 700 pounds in equestria would be about 400 pounds on earth. The whole point of the story was about the clop the reason he forgave Nightmare Moon was so more clop could be written the fic is idiotic and that is how it is intended. If you wish to read a far more realistic and serious one then please check out The Scent: darker path
1753434 What do you mean 'if'?
Wait a minute...
Mane 6 defeat Nightmare Moon, Lachlan gets her pregnant.
Mane 6 defeat Chrysalis, Lachlan becaumes sex buddies with her.
Mane 6 defeat Discord, Lachlan get his daughter pregnant...twice.
Mane 6 defeat King Sombra....
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If all pony children of Lachlan are omnivores does that mean that they are whole new pony race?
Is Isaac immortal like normal alicorns? What about Lachlan is he gonna live normal human life or longer?
Are all of Lachlans children more agressive than normal ponies?
I WANT ANSWERS!!!
Please
1765949 I honestly could not stop laughing when I saw that.