Rape, sexism, racism, vile acts and views that humanity looks at with deepest of loathing. But Equestria a magical world inhabited by ponies, have no such issue openly embracing it.
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6190622 Well because you asked so nicely have the next chapter.
6191122 thank god you put this back up
its good 2 c u back in the saddle
but is the hiatus gonna be severe?
i love this story please dont giveup
6191122 ok, did you have this written for a while and plan this? Or is this just my luckiest day ever?
We art loving the direction of this rough so far, may thy wordcraft continue inspiring mortal!
Jaysus! Another chapter. I'm glad you're finally continuing this story. Look man (or girl, I can't remember if you've ever clarafied your gender) you are an amazing writer and storyteller. I know you said you were rewriting because you thought the chapters were sloppy. After rereading them I realized that they were kinda sloppy. However, trust
me when I say I've seen a lot worse. I've seen stories where I read one sentence and just noped the fuck outta that story. Thats how bad it was. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
I like where this goinggoing, and wence your editora get around to this I'm sure other mistakes will be fixed. However, be ma I suggest changing sentient into sapient. A mistake many make, and a understandable one at that.
http://www.rebekkahniles.com/2012/03/word-box-sapience-vs-sentience.html?m=1
YESSSSS
Oh ho such turmoil, I am glad to see you making progress. I love your work and hope to see more from you.
Welcome back and I love this chapter so far.
6191249 bit of both
You can do it. Don't give up.
I love this chapter ,I hope he gets fully better.
I wonder how the Changeling princess' mother will react to what happened?
They could turn the prisoners over into her jurisdiction for abduction of a minor.
It has been a while so correct me if I am wrong, The stallion he killed was Blue Blood right? And the mares were the assasins that Blue hired correct?
8? Aren't there 7 females in the herd or i am missing someone
6191735 said clearly that the mother gave her to them I think she would do it again
Is one of the chapters missing? It seems like there are scenes missing between "The Nightmare Begins", "Recovering" and "Party and Consequences".Never mind. Just noticed your comment addressing the issue. Sorry.
great so far keep going
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6191964 I'd forgotten about that.
I wonder how the Changeling Council would react to THAT news?
It's alive?
Well this made my week.
I highly doubt she'll find love among of fighting with sex that bad. Especially if we're talking about a certain pink princess.
P.S: The real question is: can we really blame him?
This is great so far. Can't wait for the finished version.
IT IS ALIVE
the best
I have to say that I am happy that you have made a new chapter to this story. It was long in coming and now it her. I do hope to see a new chapter soon. I have been enjoying this story and hope you continue it.
Dragonfox
6191381 next chapter please
I would not look to far into it it was written ages ago I can't remember most of what I wrote.
I think he does know what they have all done in the past. You don't live for thousands of years without having some blood on your hands.
welcome back. thanks for re-open the nice story.
This story is addicting as fuck. The only reason I would complain is because it is the second longest story I have read. But other than that love it.
6226348 4th longest as the longest I'm reading is like 600 chapters about 10,000 words per chapter and I'm only on the 100th chapter...and it's confusing as fuck.
6215898 great story so far ridiculous amounts of clop scenes puts me off a bit but still great.
6239506 Well it is a clop story so that is kind of the point XD. Thanks for the comments I appreciate it.
6239497 the longest one I'm reading has 58 chapters and I don't even want to know hoe many words. It's called a Dragon's journey.
maybe i should write a parody of that... yeah, i can totally do that hehehe
6240270 thanks for the name of the story I'm gonna read it.
6239522 your welcome. Though clop story's aren't my thing I can make an exeption.
6247132 A straight up Gary stu. But I marketed it well enough that it got loved by nearly 2000 people so whilst the story itself is meh the ways I promoted it seemed to have worked.
6251821
.........Thank you, you just made my day.
You have my interest.
6240270 This is the chase it has 773 chapters and1,926,511 words
6324175 too bad it is one of the few stories that is worse than this one. Oh well at least no fart fetish with me XD
6324576 meh. Reading it is worth the nonsensical fetishes, to me at least. I've been following it for like 500 chapters now.
6335616 If you read you will see that it is a chapter I split so I could make both longer. The first chapter "she is what now?" Has been drastically expanded to around 3000 words by itself and gives more insight into the two interaction. Whilst I plan to write up the newest chapter to be far longer. This is so I can give a bit more back story and character development to them
6335774 Yeah that was my mistake accidentally deleted some of the chapter
6335774 Fixed it but as I said this story is old as fuck so will be a shit ton of mistakes.
6335792 Huh thanks man.
This chapter was already uploaded. Did you reupload it? I got a notification there was a new chapter.
6335808
Thank you very much!