Rape, sexism, racism, vile acts and views that humanity looks at with deepest of loathing. But Equestria a magical world inhabited by ponies, have no such issue openly embracing it.
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you cannot use that as a cover pic even when a story is NSFW it cannot have a NSFW pic as cover art you should fix this immidiately (just remove the nipples you should be fine)
EG really well i suspect some movie spoilers might happen dear god what has this come to
Sunset Shimmer, how predictable.
>exposed nipples in the cover picture
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Nice chapter by sadly I have to agree with Gliphid. You can't have that picture as your cover and hate to see you get in trouble. Link
that cover pic...hmm death by breasts?
you spelled 'chrystals' wrong. crystals
stranger danger stranger danger stranger dangerget the bitch
I like where this is going. Keep writing. That mare is in for a world courtesy of four pissed off alicorns and a hormonal changeling. I'm shivering with anticipation. Sorry about your flu, get better soon! :)
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I agree. The previous picture he had was better. I want it back!
It will be interesting to see how Shimmer is portrayed in this story.
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I think you're also forgetting and possibly underestimating fluttershy's capabilities when she's pissed
and then shit goes wrong again what the hell dose is this guy a trouble magnet
>>Anon1
Your referring to the manticore she nearly killed in the darker paths story. That's true. She can be mean as hell.
2857611 Speaking of Darker Paths, when's the last time it updated?
Well, this should be interesting since you seem to be incorporating Equestria Girls into this. It would be funny to see them be transformed into humans because than they wouldn't be able to push Lachlan around as much. By the way, you can't have that pic as your cover art, otherwise you're going to get banned.
so why is chrysalis 6 months?
well except for the gryphons, minotaurs, and some random dragons, I can't think of much else that hasn't kidnapped him and raped him....
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around may 13th. Wow! it must be updated more.
Pinkie Pie demands it!
2857238 thanks I will change that
2858592 because In my deluded state I fucked up the times my bad
I saw that coming, dude no offense but your getting a bit predictable I mean the only villains he hasn't bang are this summer chick here, sombra for previously reasons, and this one
2859069 Why does everyone think it is sumerset shimmer or what ever her name is. Come on people I am better than that
2859342 well it doesn't help when you describe her with the same hair colors and give her the same goal see images.wikia.com/mlp/images/d/d3/Sunset_Shimmer_looking_sinister_EG.png
nipples :3
2859354 Ah but that is the catch Shimmer is dead in this something far more evil has captured or protagonist
2860072 that or... its a clone
I am afraid that a lot of high school girls are in a special kind of danger if this is going where I think it is.
Abuse is a pretty known sad back story next to parents dying and full on torture as a kid.
The question is how dark are you willing to go before the reader REALLY wants to cry?
Anyways, what happens now?
you tried, but you still missed Chrystals's nipple in the cover art
2861715 That was intentional. I am allowed to have a half nipple aren't I
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as long as your aware of it, and willing to risk it.
i am unsure of what the penalty is but if you comply they won't be too harsh i think.
2861971 its nice though, no? custom designed for the story
Why do I picture Lachlan as Deidara from Naruto
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yes i even saved them i really like it.
omg... Sunset Shimmer? This just got *glasses on* interesting.
if i recall the regular ponies lived up to 200years, man thats really depressing to know that everyone you love will outlive you by a good century. kinda lame
So much for that party that Pinkie was planning but still I like to see the others reactions to this news and I'm betting Pinkie won't tell the other girls about his age, AT ALL until Lachlan is saved again from his latest kidnapper.
Red and yellow, hair? The crystal empire? Did he was kidnap by that girl of Equestria girls? Hurray he is going back to earth, oh wait…no, he is going back to Earth, what will he do if he forget everything about Equestria?
I highly dough he will want to return to mares if he finds out they rape him
2865606 I like the idea and I might do that but I am not sure if I want sumerset shimmer I might include her but to me she is dead she is a crappy character and I was never happy that in the end she bawls like a bitch
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Oh so this villain is all yours? Nice, I like it that you are putting a progress in respect and that even slow the mares are learning to respect him, I suppose he giving them so much, and stay by their side no matter what they throw help them have a wake up call.
But I still fell a little iffy of the sex scene, not the scene itself but of how it begin. By this point he should have being a little accustom of this events and have a little more brave face, why is he cowardly down at the beginning? Its like he don't actually love them more like he is scare to death of them. I think it would have nail it down a little better if he show more confidence, he came on top in the end and have more energy so…I think it was justify.
The only think that I still wait is the role reverse, he has it in himself and don't lie, they deserve it. Some punishment for not letting him a said in their decisions and sometimes out right treat him like inferior.
And the silent treatment was a magnificent first step, they ignore his clear necessity of alone time?, he will out right ignore them, they go to far with punishment and treat him like an object? He will give them the worst kind of sex. You see? He has power, and has it in him, to make himself hear, why not show more of that? Show them that he can fight back in different ways, if they think they are over him.
Doesn't sound that like a good idea?
2865929 It is more of joke between them and of course no matter how much he loves them he cant forget that they weigh a substantial amount more than him. As well as he just likes to annoy them.
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Oh I see, so its more like a game they have, he joke around and pretend fear but all in good fun and knowing that is nothing real. I see, and he could have more weight, he is learning to by more stronger each day. I think is all matter of progress and I like how you are putting slow but constant.
Jejeje, I don't know why but I picture his daughters suddenly becoming daddies girls and will start to compete with their mommys to get daddy's attention.
Oh and when his chaotics sons start to gain conscious and talk the things they will like to play with his dad, it will be so funny
the mortality problem is quite sad, but a part of me believes between 4 immortal goddesses, a spirit of chaos, and a changeling queen; they can figure out a way to make him immortal, or increase his lifespan.
I am sad to admit that this story is quickly coming to its half way marker and I am glad that you my fans have stuck with me this far I want to make sure that everyone is clear that this story from now on whilst retain the humour and sex will start going down a darker path. Creatures like the bloody hoofs will be making large appearances as well as the death of a main character will be coming soon. All I will say about the death that I hope you guys aren't too attached to pink haired yellow pegasi
Well, I can see why this has so many likes, and it pains me to see so many mindless sheep flocking to this story because of the human/anthro/sex. You people need to have higher standards. It's pathetic.
2867584 Look you can insult my writing skills you can insult my fics that doesn't bother me but do not insult my fans they are allowed to like what ever the fuck they want and same for those who don't like it they don't call you pathetic so please extend the same curtsy to them please.
Also as I have stressed tell me why you don't like it. I am working with a couple of other authors and believe me this will be getting a massive update. The character will no longer be the gullible retard nor an idiot there will be more character development for example How Luna/ Celestia deal with other versions of themselves as well as Lachlan actually growing a pair.
Please don't insult my fans insult me
2867872 Peppy shall insult exact who he means to insult. I don't care that they like HiE, or anthro. It's the fact they they blatantly ignore the horrendous flaws starting just at the title. People flock to stories just because of a tag like brainless, slavering sheep.
I didn't even begin to open up the first chapter. I don't read HiE or anthro unless it's god-tier and, judging just by the title page alone, this story is far from it.
2867950 I do not deny that this story is crap I am as I said in the process of reviving it but insulting others is uncalled for. I personally find your deviant art to be go awful. But I left a funny review and moved on. You don't have to like my stuff but please as I said don't insult the fans. What you see as shit they see as good how can we say who is right and wrong.
Also peppy will insult whoever he wants what are you eight. Who the fuck talks in third person
hmmmmmm do I smell some sunset shimmer on the horizon?!!!
2867995 Peppy may be eight, but he at least has the etiquette to use proper grammar when he speaks with others.
You act like I put effort into it. I write as my passion and draw for shits and giggles. Considering this has sixteen chapters, you have put more than a little time into this and you haven't even had the decency to fix the description and title.
The people who judge stuff based on quality, that's who. There isn't any quality here to seen; you can't even punctuate sentences properly. If I wasn't already biased against HiE waifu-fagging (meaning if I actually enjoyed reading it), I still wouldn't have touched this with even Obama's dick, which is saying something considering how much I despise politicians.