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I.... I...

I'm going to read this...

if i don't come back, tell my parents I love them

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I will follow you. This darkness cannot be combated alone, so we shall journey together. For safety.

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I immediately regret this decision!
Navy Shadow! My brother! Are you still there?!

And as for you, author... What the actual fuckmare is this?!

Oh, god. I think I just vomited and ejaculated at the same time.

my face, right now: :rainbowhuh:

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So... your "hero" randomly stops in the middle of intense pain to masturbate..... Seems legit

Some of my favourite quotes:

She could be a vigilante! One who used her penis to stop the rampant crime that's in ponyville

She began to unwrap the bandages between her legs and unveiled something startling. A giant penis!

"Stop, sexy criminal! There's no escaping the long dick of the law!"

"You have the right to remain horny. Everyone you do can and will be held against you in an orgy of law. You have the right to a buttplug. If you cannot afford a buttplug, one will be appointed to you. Do you understand your rights?"

Also, why does pinkie have acid lying around Sugar Cube Corner?

...

I... Um...

I'm not sure what to say.

*upvote*

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I have escaped with slight wounds, brother. but I'll be fine!

Whatever was in there, it wasn't friendly...

Did you just kill Big Mac and have then anally rape his corpse?

Quickly! Throw Likes at the monster to appease it! :raritydespair:

*Throws a Like at the fic, then runs for his life*

Uhhhhhhhhh.......no comment. Maybe Deadpool has finally found his randomness-superhero match.

:rainbowhuh::facehoof::raritycry:

What the buttered rolls is this?!? Oh god I think I bruised my brain...

You have earned yourself 6 wat points, use them well.

:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof: WTB DID I JUST READ?! :flutterrage: Seriously, this is so goofy it makes Orgazmo look like Schindler's List! :rainbowlaugh:

"Stop, sexy criminal! There's no escaping the long dick of the law!"

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horrible thing is in japan this is an actual show minus the gender bender

1488512 A DAY WILL COME WHEN THE COURAGE OF BRONIES FAILS, AND WE FORSAKE ALL BONDS OF FELLOWSHIP.
BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAY.
A DAY WHEN THE MIGHT OF GODAWFUL FICTION COMES CRASHING DOWN.
BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAY.
A DAY OF HORRIBLE GRAMMAR, OF RED AND BLACK ALICORNS, OF MARY SUES.
BUT IT IS NOT THIS DAY!
THIS DAY WE FIGHT!

FOR GLORY, AND THE RED DAWN, CHAAAAAARGE!

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This is a horribly written story with an even worse plot. I realized that there was no way to write this seriously, so I decided to forgo any form of character/atmospheric development and just go with plot development. If it moved along the plot, even if it made little to no logical sense, it went in. Also, I crammed as many one-liners as I could cram into it. I've still got more.

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Exactly what I was going for.

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Toxic waste, not acid. Don't you know your superhero origin stories?

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That's a yes.

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Thank you. That's all I really wanted.

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I'll use them to go to Disneyland.

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Goofy's good. You can't always have seriousness in your futa fuckfics. That makes Jack a dull pony.

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I hope it's got a gold band!


And now, in all seriousness. This is a joke. Seriously. It's supposed to be horribly written, and I think I did a good job. To the second and third chapters, I was just in a hurry to finish as much as I could before my meds kicked in. The fourth will be action packed and full of other things.

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*sniff....
If there are words that can describe how epic that was. Then they either don't exist or I don't know them.

You sir, have outdone anything I could ever say.

Three Big Macs for you (sorry it was all I could think of)
:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

YOU HEARD HIM PEOPLE! IF WE'RE GONNA GO DOWN THEN LETS GO DOWN KICKING AND SCREAMING!!!!
FOR HONOR! FOR GLORY! FOR PONIES!!!!!

I just lol'd myself. Bad grammer and.short paragraphs but still awesome.

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You exceeded all wats and wtfs... I shall actually upvote this, save it for future laughs, and give you a warm kudos. :twilightoops:

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At least you survived, good sir! Now, I must dive back in and make sure others return safely, even if mentally scarred!
FLUTTERSHY! AWAY!!!
:fluttershysad: Do... do I have... have to?
Aww... no, no you don't...
RAINBOW DASH! AWAY!!!
:rainbowlaugh: You've got to be joking!

lmfao..so much what...so so so much what..
Honestly..I came in with low expectations, the premise is so stupid, but this is pretty damn funny.
I apologize for my doubts, and will definitely continue reading this fic, lol.
:coolphoto:

Well, there goes my sanity. Thanks to god, that my mind has already been infected by the madness :pinkiecrazy:

THROUGH THE GATES OF HELL!!! WE MAKE OUR WAY TO HEAVEN!!!

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha:rainbowlaugh:

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