Twilight Mornings

by Mr V

Twilight Mornings

Musical Accompaniment

Twilight Mornings

Your mind is still beautifully fuzzy, leaving you in a field of wild strawberries, comforted by the salty breeze of the ocean as you wait in the shade of your eyelids. Your breathing is soft and effortless as you lie there, slowly passing the moment where sleep gives way to the morning, and the touch of your dreams gives way to the feeling of the pillow under your head.

With one deep breath, you flex and stretch your muscles into wakefulness as you finally open your eyes. You blink away the last bit of bleariness, and smile when you see her. She's still asleep, lying on her back, her forelegs snugly curled against her chest and her eyes shut, even as the white light of the early sun shines through the curtain and paints a bright stripe along her face. Her breaths come quietly and slowly, slipping gently through her barely parted lips.

With a tiny squeak and a long sigh, she rolls over, her hind legs lifting and sliding under the sheet as she turns to drop herself heavily against you, her small body snuggling comfortably into the crook of your arm. You smile wider at the sight of her frazzled mane, her dark hair carelessly tossed about her forehead and spread under her neck as she lays her head on your shoulder. Carefully, you lift your hand to push away an errant hair that was beginning to tickle your nose. As you do, your finger brushes against her cheek, sweeping across her fine purple fuzz and over her skin, still hot and flushed with sleep.

You pause, passing the edge of your hand lightly along the base of her jaw, and with your thumb, you gently move the fringe from her face. Her eyes blink open, and she raises her head for just a moment to look at you. You can see a smile on her mouth to match your own as she closes her eyes and settles herself against your side once more.

“Good morning,” she says. You can feel her lips moving softly as she speaks, the wisps of her breath playing lightly upon your neck.

“Good morning.”

Twilight stretches with a little yawn, and quietly giggles as you lift her up, rolling her body on top of yours.

“Did I wake you?” you ask.

She doesn't respond immediately, instead nuzzling her head once again into the corner of your neck and simply lying there with you.

She smells of lavender and electricity. Her soft form fills your arms, and her chest presses against yours with her every rhythmic breath. You close your eyes once again, feeling the heat from both of your bodies as it flows up from the sheets and over your skin to mix with the cool morning air.

The two of you will lie there together, just as you do every morning. And with your eyes shut, you’ll wonder how you could have allowed yourself to fall asleep. After all, no dream was ever so perfect.

Comments

[Dark Lightning]

Awwwwwww.......that's so adirable and cute.

[Dark Lightning]

Makes my heart beat a bit faster everytime I read this.

[CluelessDetective]

I love this story! It's filled with dawwww for me
I always had a fantasy were I was with Twilight and you made that come true!
Thank you!

[BlankFlankBrony]

Simple, yet quite enjoyable.

[Sonicbrony66]

My heart. She has Double Rainboomed.

[kjaslwod]

he... uh I HAD SEX WITH A HORSE?!

[punisher143]

101961
I see no problem with this, these horses are adorable. And it didn't say if anything happened anyway.

[Aerodelus]

That was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read.

[SBF1]

Cute and heartwarming. It's fairly short compared to the stuff I usually read, but you're able to convey quite a lot of emotion with those few words regardless, and that takes skill.
Nicely done.

Excellent, well written, and thoughouly beautiful. Loved it.

[Night Shine]

wait... HAND AND FINGER?!
wut

[Elkhorse]

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Am I the only one who saw this?

As a side note: HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
*ded*

169510 It's a human, deal with it.

[Thunder]

this is beautiful the song made it more so.
keep up with the good work :D
also d'awwwwwwww *explodes from cuteness*

[mrbeaver1997]

ಥ_ಥ this is what romance is.

[duskglow]

this made me cry manly tears

aw who am I kidding I'm a woman.

still though. tears.

[Scorcher]

Short, Sweet, And straight to the point. I love it!
Brilliant short story!!!

[Blazing_Star]

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That was such a sweet story! Manly tears were shed... It really made my night, let me dedicate you a quote: "Blessed be those who enjoy simple things, because they will always be pleased with the very best" Cheers

[Urist McUselessMigrant]

411229
Might just be a Twilight fetish (the kind involving the magic purple pony, not sparkly vampires). It's quite common.

[Fumajime]

I can't like this enough. Excellent music choice.

[Airstream]

Beautiful. Thank you.

[Mr.Mac]

Interesting. I rather enjoyed this - I'm late to the game, I know. I love non crappy/cheesy HiE. Glad you kept it succinct, made for a wonderful diversion. Thank you.

[Silver Hoof]

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

[Taliesin of the Forest]

Respect

[HadezPKMN]

Reminds me of a dream I had once, but it was with Applejack , and the music... dear god, it was beautiful!!

[Sandman]

ALL THE SNUGGLES.

[Sleepynotlazy]

Good God, this is simply amazing.
The music and the writing paints the most perfect picture.
The lack of a backstory and simply going with the first person perspective with little to no defining character traits leaves it so anyone can really put themselves into the role.
Amazingly done. Short and simple, I love it!
Thank you so much for this.

[Whitescorpion]

It was beautiful, thanks for sharing it

[Taliesin of the Forest]

101961 I hardly see how that came into this

[Dunsparce]

And then the 1000 word rule was forever forgotton.

Amazing fic, though. Loved it,

[drwhoovescompanion]

Dear lord this was amazing.

[Hack Writings]

Was there a point to this? I wasted my time reading this, there was absolutely nothing of value to it. No context was given and it felt pointless.

[BaronCorrupt]

Honestly? I have no idea why I read this. It doesn't have a story or anything like that, but its certainly got some charm.
Twilight is my favorite character of the series and this scene kind of just brought a warm feeling to my black and empty heart.

Just a little pick me up this is. And I'm grateful its here.

[BaronCorrupt]

3566598 Indeed, there is nothing of value here to read; no story, no plot, just a setting of waking up with Twilight.

But it feels good. Brought a warm feeling to my heart to read this.

I just pray that no one else becomes a certain Twilight Sparkle fanatic that we all may have heard about.

[Hack Writings]

3601010
If it had caused any warm or good feelings, that would have been something of value. But this was an unnecessary waste of a story (the word 'story' being used very loosely).

[BaronCorrupt]

3603733 Again, there is no story, its just a scene.

If you are going to ignore half my statement then don't reply.

[bossfight1]

The two of you will lie there together, just as you do every morning. And with your eyes shut, you’ll wonder how you could have allowed yourself to fall asleep. After all, no dream was ever so perfect.

So you're saying you don't wanna close your eyes, don't wanna fall asleep, cause you'd miss your baby, you don't wanna miss a thing?

In all seriousness this is the ideal morning I want someday. (Not necessarily Twilight, but just with... that special someone I hope to find.)

[nothingtoseehere]

Very nice. Pointless, but nice. Fave and upvote!

[TheFimFicCritic]

Beautiful. Twilight is just so cute in this.

[Meester Tweester]

This made me happy. I think I'll read this right before bed.

[Albus Fahrenheits]

3601010
I remember That Guy

Anyhow, this fic is so beautifully written that you'll want to read it again even if it has no plot.

[thesavior711]

I always think of this as a prequel to the story "She Will Always be your Twilight". I also always read this when I wake up... Twilight is best Pony.

[Peacekeeper]

simple, short. cute. love it

[Tyrannosaurus_Tux]

It's too short.

[Zanec]

Something... I'm not sure... its like, hmm.
Too romantic for me I guess.

[ComatoseVEVO]

1893611 your pic fits perfectly

[ComatoseVEVO]

4210633 who i dont get, i kinda left Fimfiction for a while

[Mewrilah]

Sometimes the simplest stories are the best. A very well done job my friend. You have earned a fave and follow.

[mycarhasaMoustache]

I cant remember how many times I have reread this story but its just as sweet every time.