You know, I never thought I would do something like this. I thought it would be a simple job. Just watch over her, make sure she stays out of trouble, then go home at the end of the day. Simple right? I couldn't have been more wrong. Because there, at the Baltimare Mental Hospital, is where I met her. There, is where I decided what was right and what was wrong. And in the end, that's where I decided who exactly I am.
Major change from my normal stories, so i hope you guys like it. Cover image, as per ALWAYS, made by my good friend Pinkamena Diane Pie.
Chapters (5)
YAY your new story have been posted. mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw8218-Happy_Dashie_8.gif Now to read it I will post a real comment when I am done reading.
Cover Art reminds me of "The Wall"
For that you get an upvote.
Okay, I know the follow has nothing to do with the story, but I had to:
1505907 I was actually listening to that when I thought up the story.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
I haven't read it yet and I already love it you sir know how to write
you did a really good job I love it.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png I need more how often will you update this.
Just a thought, but maybe the words on the sign near the beginning could have been a bit different. Italics, or bold, or a different font. As well as
The first bit would have been a bit more clear if italics.
Punctuation? :P
Quotation marks.
Is Silver no longer important?
More punctuation stuff.
The wut?
I know I seemed to pick on this story a bit, but in truth, I REALLY loved it. Seems new, refreshing, well written, well thought out, and all in all just good.
Damn good. Damn, damn good, damn good, good, damn good, damn, damn.
GOOD.
1508140 Thanks for pointing these out. I will have to send a PM to Poultron and ask why I can't edit any of my stories.
Good story man but just make sure the back story's make sense good story's some time lack that a good back story to the love intrest
1511214 I will try my best at doing so!
Now that I have finally read this story, bravo! This went well for a first chapter, and earned a fave from me(mostly so I could keep track of it).
Very good so far. You have earned a fav and upvote from me. Will be waiting for updates
I have the impression this will be used in one of the next chapters....
I saw more mistakes than those that Madman pointed out, but I don't remeber now where they are!
And better I don't play grammar nazi, because I'm a very strict one!
1527881 Like I told Madman, if I could edit, I would fix them. I have emailed two mods about this problem, and neither has responded.
1529042
I'm sure they'll respond!
(someday 
)
I've just gone over through most of your stories, and I must say It has been a joy reading them. This mental paitient of yours. It bodes well.
Very well written 2nd chapter; as good as the first. I eagerly await the 3rd chapter!
If you don't post chapter 3 soon, I might go catatonic.
1591163 It might be a bit longer until the next chapter, as I have school stuff right now, and I have to decide if I want the next chapter to be a long one, or make two shorter ones before I end this.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
And I guess not a lot of mistakes, Mr. Grammar Nazi?
1592541 Honestly, I got too wrapped up in the story itself to notice any mistakes that may or may not have been made.
And I hope you find time to write! I'm in the same boat.
Damn it imma cry man imma cry
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That was wonderful as usual. I wonder why Pearl is there. Was she always like this? Did she hurt somepony? Why? WHY?
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1604595And my questions were answered. And it leaves me livid...
Yet I has feels. So many conflicting feels.
BEST CHAPTER EVER.
Like, seriously. I wish I had the words to describe how............. right this chapter is. It flows beautifully, the reader is presented with a lot of information without it seeming like an overflow, the descriptions are vivid and detailed, and most of all, the whole chapter is just so damn CUTE!
I cannot wait for more.
This chapter...
It was perfect! I love it.
Please, whatever you do, never let the quality of this story suffer. I would be willing to wait months even if that is what it took for this story to stay at the level of quality it is at.
This story is rated 11/10!
And have a mustache too!
1686606>>1687032 Thank you both. I tried very hard to make this chapter special, I even busted out my rusty-as-buck romance skills. I am glad you enjoyed it!
1687302 with the sheer volume of stories on this site, I feel blessed whenever I am fortunate to find a real gem to read. Today, I have been fortunate to have two such stories have updated chapters for me, with this being one of them. Though I am uncertain how the story will play out, I feel fully confident that it will continue to be one of those rare gems I treasure.
1687449 And I will try my hardest to keep it like that. But I don't know if I can top this chapter.
1688792 lol Every story has a chapter that the author feels his best. I'm not expecting you to top this one, but if you apply your full heart and soul to the remaining chapters, then all will be awesome
Damn you.... bringing tears to my eyes...
Tears of Joy, mind you.
Once again, the story just gets better and better. Please, let this story have a happy ending.
1746616 I can't promise anything....dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
denver.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw8751-Feels_Train.JPG And I agree with Biker_Dash please let this have a happy ending
MFW this updated: static4.fjcdn.com/thumbnails/comments/only+gif+i+have+similar+to+a+feels+gif+_ef6bacb076da64a4d964e48af8efbe0b.gif
After reading this: i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/135/408/Twilight%20Feels%20the%20Magic.gif
This is such a feel-good chapter. Such a shame I just know that other guard is going to find out. And then he is going to try to make their life Tartarus. Or that is just the cynic in me speaking up
THIS IS SO DAMN GOOD. I LOVE YOU.
As much as I hate to, there were two tiny typos.
*land
Do we gets beer for accomplishments now?
1749933 Fixed! I wonder how I missed those.
1752354 You were tired? :]
1756692 Probably. But who cares now. Pegasus Device is out!!!
1756702 WHOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Wait, wut?
1756710 Pegasus Device. The sequel to Rainbow Factory. It's finally out!
1756717 LE GASP. Reading time.
1756729 That's what I said. Have fun!
Damn.... that was beautiful!
I haven't cried this much in forever. I loved the story from start to finish, you sir are a great writer and it would be a sin for you to stop.
This was pretty much glorious.
It was well-thought out and well-written.
Upvote for sure.
Tug on my Heartstrings anymore and I'll b dead, great work!
Okay, that was heart-warming. Like "And his heart grew three sizes that day" kinda heart warming.
I love it when the cynic in me comes expecting the worst and I get the best! Silver really is a bro. Spectra, whatever you are doing, do not stop.