Five Pegasi are brought into a world where they were created as a genetic experiment. But they are kept in a lab, away from the world, to be experimented on. One day, they decide that they have suffered enough. They escape and try to start their new lives. But the scientists wont forget about them so easily...
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No longer on Hiatus, but i will leave the link to my other story here
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5498/As-I%27m-Falling-to-Pieces
There are miscellaneous errors, such as missing letters, or missing pluralization, but beyon that, nothing major. Hmm, do my senses detect a hint of maximum ride? I'm intrigued. I shall follow.
186992 Yes, your over-heightened senses are correct. Maximum Ride was my inspiration for this story.
Could they try to contact the police for help? Unethical scientific experiments are pretty serious business.
Or is there something that stops them from doing so?
189663 I imagine they don't know about the world outside the facility.
Cool story. Tracking!
pretty good so far I shall continue reading
i like this story too Connell how often do u update this one p.s i love the story As I'm Falling to Pieces
195567 I update whenever i get the chapter finished. But I am on hiatus because of As I'm Falling to Pieces
. When I get some more done on that, I will come back to this.
Finally got around to reading this, it looks good to me, but may I caution you against copy/paste plots, since you're doing a crossover? I only say this because I've had to rewrite my own crossover 3 times now because I started copy/pasting. Make it your own story with influences from the story you love. Keep on writing man.
“You WILL try you’re best, Supervisor Sparkle, or I will report you.”
try you’re best, Supervisor Sparkle, or I
Supervisor Sparkle
Sparkle
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I REALLY hope that isn't the Sparkle I think it is...
umm supervisor Sparkle you got my attention even more i cant wait untill the next chapter to see happens next
I like this. A lot. Keep up the fantastic work!
I am curious: What is the purpose of this GENESIS ? And how come Twilight is a bitch? Is the project autorized by Celestia?
The plot thickens... Awaiting for more.
Can't wait for more! and I want to know more about Sparkle's role in GENESIS
I should be happy. But the fact that the first escape was a fake, I feel like this is not going to end well.
The last sentence DUN DUN DUUNNN and you got me with Blue she is my favorite if she had died i would have been a sad pony
Hmmm, I shalt wait for what doth come next.
I gotta say I kinda saw the thing With Twilight coming keep up the good work I love your stories
Wait....six beds five ponies had the beds for about five months ummm it doesn't add up
Several spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors, but a great story. :) Although, they did seem to begin to trust Twilight rather easily.
You have perfected the art of the cliffhanger. I hate it, ALMOST as much as I love it. Damn good chapter. Can't wait for more.
So they are going to live with Twilight for a while and-
*last paragraph*
FUCK !!!
That is torture. You know that, right?
371317I do, that is why I always do it, in every story I ever, and will ever, write.
371209 I know right he does this with his others stories too i tell him it makes me feel like this
and Green sounds like me not a morning, or an afternoon pony.
Aw dang, and here I was hoping they'd have some time to enjoy themselves. Excellent cliffhanger by the way.
Whats gonna happen now I am gonna have to what until the next chapter but the wait will make feel like this
Why orange why
I wouldnt trust Orange 1%
I get how Dual feels he wants to trust him but at the same time he don't dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Wow, I thought this story was dead.
But, IT LIVES!!!!
2325494 Yep! Finally felt like I needed to get back to it, after a brilliant idea from my friend.
2325505This is off hiatus? YES!!!
And the fic writing season begins. I've already dusted off my pencil, and been running through story ideas. Good chapter. Like the name too.
YAY!
I am very happy that you are writing this again 
I can't wait to read more of it.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
this is literally the only story i'm following anymore. MOARRRRRRRRRRR
2679167 Oh. Well, looks like I should get off my plot and write.
186998
I KNEW IT!!!