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You probably don't know him.

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A pony approaches with an unusual request.


Written for the Dialogue Only contest. I’m taking the “no narration” challenge to heart and want the dialogue to do the scene-setting. For those of you who’d like slightly more info to go on:

Princess Twilight Sparkle, Equestria’s sole lawmaker, is holding court. Lyra Heartstrings approaches to ask her to change a very specific edict.

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Just a friendly reminder that fan fiction authors should not be criticized for choosing to ignore biographical details of fictional characters that were never acknowledged in the main series and only appeared in supplementary books.

TCC56 #2 · May 22nd · · ·

D'awwww.

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To be fair, that book had some deeply problematic elements. I don't know what S.M.I.L.E. was doing with those timberwolf pups and I don't want to know...

In any case, lovely work on this one. If you're going to exploit your personal connections with any ruler, it might as well be the Princess of Friendship. Thank you for this and best of luck in the judging.

this was very nice, well executed on the dialog only challenge!

Gosh this was so adorable, great job!

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If you're going to exploit your personal connections with any ruler, it might as well be the Princess of Friendship.

Especially if she sees it as a mystery to be solved.

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Thanks for reading! That couple being adorable is my favorite thing about them, so I'm glad I was able to engender that feeling with this story.

Str8aura #8 · May 25th · · 1 ·

oh my fucking God. I named myself Lyra irl. Do you know how many fucking people call me 'Lee-ra'?

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In the official Rainbow Rocks audio commentary, one of the people who worked on the movie called her "Lee-ra." Nails on a chalkboard.

They got the pronunciation right by the next movie, though.

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