Eclipse

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Staring at the sun makes you go blind.

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6-D Pegasus

6-D Pegasus #1 · 3 weeks ago · 1 · ·

Awww >< one of the shortest yet most beautiful renditions of the tale of the two sisters I've ever read <33

dragon_slayer

dragon_slayer #2 · 3 weeks ago · 1 · ·

Gorgeous writing style. I am impressed by your style switch telling the story of her battle against her sister. Instead of a calm straightforward description, the battle is told in an overwhelming rush of fragmented sensations and panicked thoughts — just as Celestia experienced it, barely able to process the experiences thrown at her. Also, thank you for adding the closure of such an adorable ending.

AvoidingFever17

AvoidingFever17 #3 · 3 weeks ago · 1 · ·

Nice

ThePeer

ThePeer #4 · 3 weeks ago · 2 · ·

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Wouldn't have done it without you o7.

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Thanks! I was actually worried it was too short, but I'm happy you liked it! The ending was something I was thinking of removing aswell, but decided to keep it.

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nice

AvoidingFever17

AvoidingFever17 #5 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

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Noice
Alright I'll read this soon

Moonlight Eclipse

Moonlight Eclipse #6 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

Pretty good story for the eclipse. I like it.

ThePeer

ThePeer #7 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

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glad you enjoyed!

Okie Brony

Okie Brony #8 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

A nice little story. I've read a few different versions of the fight that lead to Luna's banishment. This is one of the better ones. Congratulations for being Featured.

Have a Spikestache.